get ready son,house rules,30 mins time limit,check in

check.. be back in 30 or less.

check check i will

'chea..

fuck this kid, his sig makes him look stupid and clueless i'll win
the only Joker in this thread, is you brag'n about a battle you lost to him
i'm the boss in hea'.. bitch, you a young'n whose get'n ol' skool'd
i'll ram his head into the cerial box.. 'n leave this Car Totaled
show you i'm no joke, your throat'll get poked 'n your not live man
s'how can ya show boat when peeps don't even let ya perform on dry land
you rec's 2-2, i bet you feel accomplished dukes but ur the worse
hell, the only way you'd break even.. is if i decided not to post a verse
i'll disperse rounds on ya g, make you flee and stop tryin to be
s'when i knock ya block off.. i'm takin the whole neighborhood with me

out.

Pitiful

I BET YOU THINK YA RYHMES IS COO,COMPARED TO MY FIYA,DUDE YOU SPIT POPSICLES,RUN THRU OBSTICLES,MY SIG SAID I'LL BITE YA HEAD OFF,MIKE SHOWED ME HIS BOXN MOVES./

THIS WILL BE LIKE A BATTLE, I DIDNT DQ,"CARNAGE LIFTED,SLICED,AND CUT THAT DUDE,LIKE UTENCILS"DUDE YOU MENTAL,I'LL PISTOL WHIP YOU,THEN KILL YOU,SO ITS NO DENTAL,THIS PRO'S INTO,/

MAKEN WATERBEDS FOR LIL'KIDS LIKE YOU,AND YOU CRY AND WONDER WHY LIL'KIDS WANNA FIGHT YOU,*LOL*I GETS DEMONIC WIT THE PEN,I DROP'D A VERSE IN THE KILLAS BIBLE,YOU IN POSER 1:87 RIGHT NEXT TO JA RULE./

AND WHEN I DO A 187 I'M NOT GON'SPRAY YOU LIKE NO FOOL,I'LL ITALIAN MOB THIS DUDE,ROOF TOPS AND SILENT RIFLES,YOU,AND IF YOU VAMPIRES TRY TO RUN UP ON MY CREW,I'LL TURN AND WESLEY SNIPE YOU DUDES,PUT THAT BLADE 2 YOU./

OOPS,LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO,I GOT YA PUSSY JUICE ON MY BRAND NEW SHOES,PUT ME IN A WHEELCHAIR,CUZ I CANT STAND YOU DUDES,CUZ YOU THOUGHT OK CORAL IS WHERE YOU EAT FOOD./

IMMA CANNIBLE,I'LL ROLE UP ON YA SPOT WIT A BOWL AND SPOON,MAKE YOU WATCH ME EAT YA GURL OUT,IN HIS OWN FUCKN ROOM,I'LL BEAT IT,LIKE I'LL BEAT HIM,"ITS OVER,ITS THRU,"/

TALK SHIT YOU CONCEILN YA DOOM,I'LL BE FILLN YA TOMB,CAUSE EVERY BLOOD CELL YOU SPEW,WON'T TAKE A JAIL CELL TO SHOW THE FAG UP IN YOU,YOU CLAIM I AINT GOTTA GUN SO WHEN I AIM DONT YOU MOVE,/

I'LL PUT THE BAT TO YA FACE,MAKE YOU LIE THRU A TOOTH,I PREVAIL,WHILE YOU LOSE,DON'T INHALE ALL THESE FUMES,MY TALES,WILL SMOKE YOU LIKE "PEPE LA PU,"/

MY SEMI WILL PROVE,THIS GUY IS NO DUDE,CLAIM'N HE HARD WHEN HIS REAL NAME IS BETH AND MIDDLE IS SUE.THIS TRICK JUS GOT PLAYED LIKE ME ON A FLUTE,/bad

IF THIS CAT WINS A CAT, THE SHIT WAS A FLUKE.I'M SURE TO BEAT YOU UNLESS I DQ,WHICH HE'S ON HIS KNEES PRAY'N I'LL DO,BUT YOU WONT GET REP BY WIN'N DQ,DUKE YOU GOT 13 POSTS.............WHAT THE FUCK HAPPEN'D TO YOU,/

Dayum,i Stretch Those Like A Muthafuck

Dayum,i Stretch Those Like A Muthafuck
rofl.. no shit kid.

and called my shit pitiful?
you fuckin fed off my verse. wtf is that?
you can't feed, dude. your get'n dq'd, again!
and trust me, my shit isn't pitiful?
you newb fuck probably doesn't get any of it..
bitch, now STFU and let the voting begin.

up.

naw.. i take that back, you went the limit..

you just SUCK! and stretched shit, like till tomorrow.

oh i see why your rep is in red...

i still murk'd you

no you didn't man.

if i do lose, i know its gonna be because these fucks here don't know how to battle or vote, or d/r or hate.

chea.

and how can i feed all that so damn quick...i'm better then you...your style was predictable none of the shit flowed rhymed,punchlines was played,and its a major disapointment because you claim'd i was i newb in the callout section quite franky you were out of your leage.and your older.smh

i would bad rep you but looks like sumbody already did that...neways uppn

out of my league.. wtf?

dude, you couldn't beat me.

hey, why don't we go to another site that understands what good is and i battle you there.
no what, fuck that. you just suck, i wouldn't waist shit on you ever again.
k, thanx, bye.

smh...uppn...first sign deny'l

Intro-Eph(carnage stretched his too long)
Punches-Carnage
Personals-Eph
Metas/Similes-Carnage
Multies-Carnage
Wordplay-Carnage
Flow-Carnage
Creativity-Tie
Humour-Tie (it had some good laughs in it though)
Vocab-TIE
Outro-Eph
Overall-Carnage
Good battle wouldnt mind seeing you guys do it agian

http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69474
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69436

Intro-Eph(carnage stretched his too long)
Punches-Carnage
Personals-Eph
Metas/Similes-Carnage
Multies-Carnage
Wordplay-Carnage
Flow-Carnage
Creativity-Tie
Humour-Tie (it had some good laughs in it though)
Vocab-TIE
Outro-Eph
Overall-Carnage
Good battle wouldnt mind seeing you guys do it agian
dude, wtf? where is there one metafore or one similie in his verse? where is one real punch in his verse? where is his flow?

damn, i knew voting would be gay like this. whatever, this is gay.

Want me to do a bar by bar breakdown?

yea, that'd be nice actually. cause seriously dude, he had no set ups or execution for a punch line.

where are the elevation tips thread and shit. i can show you both what i'm talkin about.

punches-car
flow-car
multies-car
personals-car
vocab-car
humer-car
enjoyment-car

carnage
u did stretch but still was good had some nice punches and multies

seekay
his vocab was weak and didnt have multies

so my -----------------carnage

fuck this kid, his sig makes him look stupid and clueless i'll win
the only Joker in this thread, is you brag'n about a battle you lost to him
3/5 choppy but a good opener
i'm the boss in hea'.. bitch, you a young'n whose get'n ol' skool'd
i'll ram his head into the cerial box.. 'n leave this Car Totaled
1/5 simple punch that didnt even rhyme
show you i'm no joke, your throat'll get poked 'n your not live man
s'how can ya show boat when peeps don't even let ya perform on dry land
2/5 got a multi on that one
you rec's 2-2, i bet you feel accomplished dukes but ur the worse
hell, the only way you'd break even.. is if i decided not to post a verse
1/5 very played not biting but I seen this said like 100 times
i'll disperse rounds on ya g, make you flee and stop tryin to be
s'when i knock ya block off.. i'm takin the whole neighborhood with me
1/5 in a punch try to rhyme more than 4 letter words at a time

I BET YOU THINK YA RYHMES IS COO,COMPARED TO MY FIYA,DUDE YOU SPIT POPSICLES,RUN THRU OBSTICLES,MY SIG SAID I'LL BITE YA HEAD OFF,MIKE SHOWED ME HIS BOXN MOVES./
2/5 streatched but he had multis

THIS WILL BE LIKE A BATTLE, I DIDNT DQ,"CARNAGE LIFTED,SLICED,AND CUT THAT DUDE,LIKE UTENCILS"DUDE YOU MENTAL,I'LL PISTOL WHIP YOU,THEN KILL YOU,SO ITS NO DENTAL,THIS PRO'S INTO,/ Too much to high light there where alot of multis
2/5 Cut that dude like utencils compaired you to a inainmate object aka simile

MAKEN WATERBEDS FOR LIL'KIDS LIKE YOU,AND YOU CRY AND WONDER WHY LIL'KIDS WANNA FIGHT YOU,*LOL*I GETS DEMONIC WIT THE PEN,I DROP'D A VERSE IN THE KILLAS BIBLE,YOU IN POSER 1:87 RIGHT NEXT TO JA RULE./
4/5 shit made me laugh
AND WHEN I DO A 187 I'M NOT GON'SPRAY YOU LIKE NO FOOL,I'LL ITALIAN MOB THIS DUDE,ROOF TOPS AND SILENT RIFLES,YOU,AND IF YOU VAMPIRES TRY TO RUN UP ON MY CREW,I'LL TURN AND WESLEY SNIPE YOU DUDES,PUT THAT BLADE 2 YOU./
3/5 Hella Multis didnt stop flowing the whole time <BLADE> used as a knife or as the person in the movie.....Word Play
OOPS,LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO,I GOT YA PUSSY JUICE ON MY BRAND NEW SHOES,PUT ME IN A WHEELCHAIR,CUZ I CANT STAND YOU DUDES,CUZ YOU THOUGHT OK CORAL IS WHERE YOU EAT FOOD./
3/5 Flow and it was funny and a good punch line

IMMA CANNIBLE,I'LL ROLE UP ON YA SPOT WIT A BOWL AND SPOON,MAKE YOU WATCH ME EAT YA GURL OUT,IN HIS OWN FUCKN ROOM,I'LL BEAT IT,LIKE I'LL BEAT HIM,"ITS OVER,ITS THRU,"/
1/5 didnt like this verse

TALK SHIT YOU CONCEILN YA DOOM,I'LL BE FILLN YA TOMB,CAUSE EVERY BLOOD CELL YOU SPEW,WON'T TAKE A JAIL CELL TO SHOW THE FAG UP IN YOU,YOU CLAIM I AINT GOTTA GUN SO WHEN I AIM DONT YOU MOVE,/
2/5 not bad but nothing special
I'LL PUT THE BAT TO YA FACE,MAKE YOU LIE THRU A TOOTH,I PREVAIL,WHILE YOU LOSE,DON'T INHALE ALL THESE FUMES,MY TALES,WILL SMOKE YOU LIKE "PEPE LA PU,"/
1/5 basic
MY SEMI WILL PROVE,THIS GUY IS NO DUDE,CLAIM'N HE HARD WHEN HIS REAL NAME IS BETH AND MIDDLE IS SUE.THIS TRICK JUS GOT PLAYED LIKE ME ON A FLUTE,/bad
3/5 humar factor Metaphor
IF THIS CAT WINS A CAT, THE SHIT WAS A FLUKE.I'M SURE TO BEAT YOU UNLESS I DQ,WHICH HE'S ON HIS KNEES PRAY'N I'LL DO,BUT YOU WONT GET REP BY WIN'N DQ,DUKE YOU GOT 13 POSTS.............WHAT THE FUCK HAPPEN'D TO YOU,/
2/5 Personal good job I like to end with a personal myself





Carnage did a better job overall he kept a sound verse

E- need a wider vocab, other than that you have good flow but you dipped
and that hurt you...gotta remember in it took you to write 5 bars 4 minutes later
Carnage had 10 bars

err he won metaphors >>click here<< (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metaphor)

There hope you guys are happy with the vote now

Bottom line it helps to make people laugh.....or at least crack a smile..
No matter how much you battle sux if you got ppl laughing they are gonna
vote for you
That ja rule line was fuckin funny, GJ Repped both for a good battle
(humor is somthing I need to work on)

As much as I hate to do this, EphYouSeeKai did this shit
Multies E
Structure E
Flow E
Personals E
Punchese C

V eph

up.. please!

lookin for more expirienced voters here.

Vote - Carnage

ALTHOUGH, as he pointed out himself... His verse was streteched as hell.. But nevertheless... I still felt he had the harder hittin punches in this battle.. And thats what mainly wins the battle is punches n' personals... So he got my vote

uppin