IllAssasin
05-17-2006, 11:04 PM
yo man how many lines you wanna do again?
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PapaDoc24 (4-1) IllAssasin 05-17-2006, 11:04 PM yo man how many lines you wanna do again? pAPaDoC24 05-17-2006, 11:04 PM 10lines=5 bars IllAssasin 05-17-2006, 11:06 PM http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69571 http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69573 theres my links pAPaDoC24 05-17-2006, 11:10 PM aiight wait up pAPaDoC24 05-17-2006, 11:15 PM http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=852794&posted=1#post852794 http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69556 IllAssasin 05-17-2006, 11:15 PM mufucka betta stay still, for ya trip ova tha steal an get killed... thoughts are ill leave you mamed an pealed... papadoc aint you get clowned in 8 mile, wait while i bend over like rabbit and give ya tha vertical smile... beat ya down so hard they pealin ya brains of tha tile... ya aint tryin ta admit it but you tame not wild... leave ya legs lame wit a smile, take a second, wait frame my style... you aint ridin tough enough to play wit fate beatin me is an unreachable feat... do tha world a favor and grab tha heat... put in ya mouth squeeze and just go ta sleep... cuz im tha mufucka that make ya hoes pussy leak... im a little rusty but there ya go. IllAssasin 05-17-2006, 11:16 PM spelled somethin wrong would have takin away from tha effect of tha verse i aint no fag cheater. pAPaDoC24 05-17-2006, 11:28 PM dis shit straight of the top niggas gonna be rankin my shit hot while you flop nevver called out for beef jus a battle but fuck it kill you lyrically make your mind rattle go ahead pull da mac millys out watch me bust back aint never gonna be on my knees hit u harder then crack look dogg you aint on my level two levels above u coz im more then clever fucc dis lil punk runnin his mouth i dont need guns to knock his jaw down south // raise then fist highs n aim lil youngins jaw hit you so hard knockout b4 u fall think u got skills? i make niggas so ashame that clame there fame dont even test me coz i dont have to show da best of me IllAssasin 05-17-2006, 11:29 PM uppin for votes now nice verse kid pAPaDoC24 05-17-2006, 11:30 PM thanks u 2 da other one it took me about a hour dis one 15 min Superlyricist 05-17-2006, 11:33 PM Wordplay Ill Flow Ill Punches Papa Personals Ill Has to go to ILL IllAssasin 05-17-2006, 11:34 PM good looks man 1-0 uppin fa mo pAPaDoC24 05-17-2006, 11:35 PM hate vote by superlyracist j/p man dnt take it serius lol pAPaDoC24 05-18-2006, 12:16 AM votes any1 Da GrimReaper 05-18-2006, 01:27 AM Weak battle.. Vote- IllAssasin... Felt he came wit more a better well rounded put together verse... Other cat confused the hell outta me w/ his stlye... Dont break up ya verse like that... Both need to really work on flow/consistancy/punches/structure... I.Assassin took this... Nauseam 05-18-2006, 01:29 AM Intro-P Punches- ILL Personals- TIE Metas/Similes- P Multies- ILL Wordplay- TIE Flow- TIE Creativity-TIE Humour-P Vocab-ILL Outro-TIE Overall-TIE TIE BOTH NEED TO WORK ON VOCAB AND MULTIS and wordplay add +1 to both of your scores cuz this is a tie sykotic 05-19-2006, 12:37 PM punches/Ill structure/Ill creativity/Ill overall(vote)/Ill IllAssasin 05-19-2006, 01:00 PM that seals tha deal i win. nice battle pimpin rematch anytime MethodicaL 05-31-2006, 04:26 AM Good Battle All Cats ILL MuRdErM 05-31-2006, 10:38 AM mufucka betta stay still, for ya trip ova tha steal an get killed... thoughts are ill leave you mamed an pealed... papadoc aint you get clowned in 8 mile, wait while i bend over like rabbit and give ya tha vertical smile... beat ya down so hard they pealin ya brains of tha tile... ya aint tryin ta admit it but you tame not wild... leave ya legs lame wit a smile, take a second, wait frame my style... you aint ridin tough enough to play wit fate beatin me is an unreachable feat... do tha world a favor and grab tha heat... put in ya mouth squeeze and just go ta sleep... cuz im tha mufucka that make ya hoes pussy leak... im a little rusty but there ya go. This was a weak battle.. Where is the rhyme?? You started to gain focus towards the end but It wasn't enuff to light the torch!! dis shit straight of the top niggas gonna be rankin my shit hot while you flop nevver called out for beef jus a battle but fuck it kill you lyrically make your mind rattle go ahead pull da mac millys out watch me bust back aint never gonna be on my knees hit u harder then crack look dogg you aint on my level two levels above u coz im more then clever fucc dis lil punk runnin his mouth i dont need guns to knock his jaw down south // raise then fist highs n aim lil youngins jaw hit you so hard knockout b4 u fall think u got skills? i make niggas so ashame that clame there fame dont even test me coz i dont have to show da best of me No clue what that was.. you should work on ya structure a lil more.. Its because of that YOU LOST!! I had trouble seperating ya bars.. Overall, ILL gets my vote Probation 05-31-2006, 01:31 PM wordplay: ill punches: papadoc personals: ? flow: papadoc Multies: papdoc Structure: ill Creativity: papadoc my votes papadoc IllAssasin 06-01-2006, 01:00 AM i already won this shit can we close it please. nice battle .sCilenCe. 06-01-2006, 08:37 PM Iight sense there is no post limit to vote here i go.. by catz Flow: IllAssasin Multies: None Personals: IllAssasin (8 mile line was the only one i saw in the whole battle) Punches: IllAssasin Creativity: None Enjoyment: None Overall: No one Vote: IllAssasin Reason: He just came less wack... Comment: Weak battle. Both need to elevate kwik, no hate, just honesty.... Take it or leave it thats my vote |