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http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69367&page=2

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=856422#post856422

theres my check now yours

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=856487#post856487

check

you need two

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69823&page=2

there check

aiight now you can drop your verse

in dis battle we know dat "Papa smurf" comin up "short"
look a "lil blue" kuz 24 cant take me on the court

got kobe on his sig when dis guy cant make a free throw
he probly hungry and broke someone give him a cheeto
brrrrraattt ya done stop and reload
I steal dis win and ya life dats a double deebo

cut it out only way you could ever be half a G
I cut myself in half and give u half of me
and im askin this fake rapper please
put rappin down bitch u aint Pastor T
And I feel bad for ya parents B
they probly told u not to fuck wit me
u jus a melted wannabe couldnt handle the heat
we knew u was done by 500 Degreez

obviously your winless homo..500 wont be able to sin dis slow flow,
stand up to me?and you will b comin up shorter den a limbless FRODO!!
i spit flows;you wont be surviving drowning! im live and astrounding!!
HES SO FAT..THAT MY CAR RAN OUT OF PETROL TWICE JUS DRIVING HIM AROUNd him!!striving to pound him,so dont start wid me becuz i rip fake mc//
its like ur punches got a 'triple by pass...how they hit half hard heartdly//
nigga i am already a G...shut up im your papa..
you better bring da hype becoz i spit storms and my weather slings dykes!!
i thought u were ''south paw ''the way ur punches ''never swing right''
bruising the gimp hes losing the wimp,puches confusing this chimp...
500 is such a ''big girl'',if i cut his pussy lips off i can use them for blimps!
ill keep puching until ur chest is snag..ill lyrically areest dis fag..
and i bet hes so gay,he would look more straight if he would dress in drag!!
no doubt papa wins..500 is jus a pussy u keep talkin about kobe nigga go suck is dick

uppin votes

uppin for votes

assholes uppin for votes

you fuckin bitches VOTE!

sum1 vote

lets get it poppin folks.....

Intro- hmmm...did papa d hav an intro? i guess 500 gets that
Punches- def. papa doc
Personals- papa d
Metas/Similes- papa d
Multies- 500 (he had a couple look close)
Wordplay- papa d (punches never swing right....i almost fainted)
Flow- both a little off but ima give it to papa
Creativity- hmmm...papa doc
Humour- papa had me smilin
Vocab- 500
Outro- well papa hit harder at the end


to sum it all up folks thats
500 - 3
papa doc - 8


my vote = papa doc

Intro- tie
Punches-tie
Personals- TIE
Metas/Similes-PAPA
Multies- 500
Wordplay- TIE
Flow- TIE
Creativity-PAPA
Humour-500
Vocab-TIE
Outro- TIE


VOTE TIE
1 MORE FOR BOTH OF YOU

BOTH NEED TO FIND A STYLE AND ELEVATE ON IT
GO TO ANOTHER SITE AND LOOK AT OTHER TEXCEES TO GET A STYLE FROM
PROLLY NOT A GOOD IDEA TO LOOK ON HERE CUZ THERES NOT ALOT OF TALENT IN RW RIGHT NOW....I GOT A DECENT RECORD AND I SUCK SO BASE IT OFF OF THAT.....FYI I SUCK BUT YOU GUYS SUCK MORE THAN ME...SO ......NO HATE BUT WORK ON YOUR STUFF

Punches - Papa
Multies - Papa
Metahs - Papa
Flow - 500
Nameplay - None
Wordplay - Papa
Personals - 500 attempted
Intro - Papa
Outro - Papa

Vote - Papadoc24

if ya'll stated house rules then flipping is a DQ so i will not vote on this battle, good luck to the both of you

Flow: 5
Fluency: 5
Punches: Papa
Personals: Tie
Consistency Papa
Vote: Papa

Elevate Please...

I get a headache whenever i try to breakdown wack verses...

So lookin' at it, i vote for Papadoc

U both HAVE to elevate...

Punches: Papa Doc
Flow: 500 Degreez
Humor: 500 Degreez
Multies: Papa Doc
Wordplay: Papa Doc
Complexity: Papa Doc
Overall: Papa Doc

Intro- 500
Punches-500
Personals-both
Metas/Similes-papa
Multies- 500
Wordplay-500
Flow-500
Creativity-PAPA
Humour-500
Vocab-500
Outro- TIE
Overall-500
Reason-he was thrown out dem punches

papa took this shit peeps it was 4-1 tko if thats how what their rules are otherwise its 5-2 but complex's vote for papa wasnt really explained

papa wins

punches - tie
personals - pshh none
wordplay - both weak
creativity- tie
multi's - papa
flow - papa
overall vote - papa

better verse although, man both were mad weak...thats why i ain't even post yalls verses to break down....
yall work on wordplay and punches yo.....

punches - 500
personals - both
wordplay - papa
creativity- both
multi's - papa
flow - papa
overall vote-papa

Intro-500
Punches- papa doc
Personals- 500
Metas/Similes- papa d
Multies- 500
Wordplay- papa d
Flow- papa
Vocab- 500
Outro- papa doc
Vote: Papa doc

Comments: It wuz a good but i think papa doc came out on top cuz of his style

Intro-Papa Doc
Punches-Papa Doc
Personals-Papa Doc
Metas/Similes-Tie
Multies-Tie
Wordplay-Tie
Flow-500
Creativity-None
Vocab-None
Outro-Papa Doc

Overall-Papa Doc

wow....this was wack....

But I give this to papadoc....for attempting punches....and better verse

5oo your rhymes were way too elementary....

not fully explained but take it or leave it...

Intro- 500
Punches-Papa Doc
Personals-Papa Doc
Multies- 500
Metaphors-Papa Doc
Vocab- 500
Outro-Papa Doc

OVERALL-Papa Doc

Flow - 500
Punches - Doc
Personals - Doc
Multis - Doc
Vocab - none
Enjoyment - none
VOTE - PAPA DOC

Intro- 500
Punches- doc
Personals- 500
Metas/Similes- doc
Multies- 500
Wordplay- doc
Flow- tie
Creativity- 500
Humour- 500
Vocab- 500
Outro- doc

vote 500

intro: papa
punches:500
personals: papa
metas/similes:500
multies:500
wordplay: papa
flow: 500
creativity: papa
humor: papa
vocab: papa
outro:500

my vote papa

Punchlines: Papa
Personals: Papa
Multies: Papa
Flow/Structure: Papa
Content: Papa
Complexity: Papa
Enjoyment: Papa

Overall: Papa. Catsweep, homie. 500 ain't have a chance.

papa all cats good shit

hey you fuckin newb you just voted for 500 on top
how can you vote for papa down here and explain youre votes asshole

intro: none
ppunches:none
personals: none
metas/simile-none
multies:tie
wordplay: none
flow: 500
creativity: none
humor: none
vocab: none
outro-none

overall this was a VERY!!!! weak battle....you BOTH need toelevate!


overall-500
__________________

Intro- 500
Punches- doc
Personals- 500
Metas/Similes- 500
Multies- doc
Wordplay- none
Flow- 500
Creativity- none
Vote-500
^agree with boss...very weak battle..no need for explanation but i felt degreez took it.

Intro- Wasnt One
Punches- Papadoc
Personals- Papadoc
Metas/Similes- Papadoc
Multies- None used
Wordplay- None used
Flow- 500
Creativity- 500
Humour- Papadoc
Vocab- Papadoc
Outro- Wasnt one

Overall - 500


I know papadoc had most cats but it didnt flow and he didnt have creativity at all using old mum jokes It just doesnt work in a battle and 500 came harder but both of you instead of saying how good you are add more personals.

Punchlines: Papa
Personals: Papa
Multies: Papa
Flow/: Papa
Creativity: Papa
Complexity: Papa


Overall: Papa.

This was a massacre, and 4 pages doesn't even make me want to waste my time.

anyway

v/Papadoc

my vote goes to 500degrees........yall both need work but he was nicer then ol dude ................he had more bette punches and creativity

Punches - Papa
Multies - Papa
Metaphors - Papa
Flow - 500
Wordplay - Papa
Personals - None really..
Intro - Papa
Closer - Papa

Overall - Papadoc24

punches- papa
multies- papa
meta's-papa
flow-500
wordplay-papa
personals-tie
intro-papa
closer-tie

overall-papa

Punches: papa
Personals: papa
Wordplay: papa
Metas: 500
Multies: 500
Structure: papa
Creativity: papa
Consistency: papa
Vote: papa
500 needs better, the flow was bad, but keep on trien.