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Extensions Will Be Granted Under Extreme Circumstances As Long As You Let Us Know In Time. The Day Before & Day Of Won't Cut It.

If Your Partner Cannot Post For Whatever Reason, You May Post 60 Lines Yourself, But You Will Have To Take 2 Docked Votes

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Topic: Organised Crime

Check In By: Tuesday May 30th
Verses Due: Friday June 2nd

Checkin' in.
..Why did I have to get Fix/White first round?
Heh. Good luck guys.

Rah rah rasputinnnn..

Check.

check...

So..what happens if White Owl doesn't check? Can he still write because Fixion showed, or will Fix have to write solo?

Just saying now, Vocab + I will probably be late dropping.
Vocab was busy and all, and I need his verses before I can do mine.
We'll try to drop regardless.

Rat-a-tat-tat..you aint kickin my ass..
You cant even show, hoe, Im rippin these cats..


withmadillnessohyes

No Show Verse.

...I'm still waiting for Vocab.

iight I cant wait for FatalExcellence cuz we could miss the deadline so here is my verse, when the fatalexcellence sends his verse I'll add it

ORGANISED CRIME

INTRO
*Devil is writting a letter to God*

VERSE
Yo, my mentalities mixed with telekinesis and telepathies
Fucked up every piece of mortalities, reality is full of casulties
Full custodies , thanks to organised villanies, deliquncies
My master piece overcame your fantasies, thats what is
Your fucked up God, prophecies of your visionaries can kiss
My ass, humanity is in organised villanies insted of peace
Total mess, I dont excess, but confess, its over, I'll express
Myself like this: take a press, all you see: endless distress
Stress on chests, terrostic pact, hectic impact , attacked
towers, wrecked pentagon, crack selling business, intact
demonic act, its over, more guns than crosses in families
less facilities of christianities, more companies of villanies
God, nine/eleven is coming to heaven, my weapon is men
In organised crime, cross cant fight AK 47

The Perspectives of the Earth Keeper's...

Vocabulous:
*Satan is writing God a letter..*

Yo, my mentalities mixed with telekinesis and telepathies
Fucked up every piece of mortalities, reality is full of casulties
Full custodies , thanks to organised villanies, deliquncies
My master piece overcame your fantasies, thats what is
Your fucked up God, prophecies of your visionaries can kiss
My ass, humanity is in organised villanies insted of peace
Total mess, I dont excess, but confess, its over, I'll express
Myself like this: take a press, all you see: endless distress
Stress on chests, terrostic pact, hectic impact , attacked
towers, wrecked pentagon, crack selling business, intact
demonic act, its over, more guns than crosses in families
less facilities of christianities, more companies of villanies
God, nine/eleven is coming to heaven, my weapon is men
In organise crime, cross cant fight AK 47


FatalExcellence:
*God goes to the post office and checks his mail when he sees Satan's letter.*
"Ah, you stupid son of a..."
*God conjures a pen and paper, and starts to vent...*
[Tone get more harsh as verse progress (almost yelling by the end of it)]


Your poisonious touch causes chaos to my innocent people
The fear instilled into them pushes 'em away from the steeple
Because of the confusion and hate you've created they shoot brothers
Cross one another for some cash just to lose their true lovers
This 'masterpiece' you created has gone out of hand this time
More drugs than food on the table, but now it's not seen as a crime
Drug plans for Columbia, drug money spent in California
Are planned assassins in your some kind of euphoria?
Life was supposed to be a gift, not some kind of game
Kids no older than their shoe size selling stolen crack and cocaine
Fake money distributed and sex slaves whenever you call on it
'Plants' used to escape reality and fill a mad man wallet
Day after day, some person loses their soul to the one who's soulless
Have you forgotten I'm almightly? I'll show you someone who's merciless.




Sorry about the late drop.

Kron, I need time to find a new partner..which I already have someone in mind, and we need to write..lemme know..

It's up to your opponents

If they agree, they will be given more time to write some additional material as well

look , FatalExcellence said no, I dont care, but , if you give him extra time this will go on and on, and maybe his new partner, when he finds him , wont spit. I say lets just proceed to next round, but you do what you want Kron, btw , he had time to write a short verse, he took us lightly, his fault, we had as much time as he did.
(fixion if you think I'm scared I can do a battle with you 1 on 1 , topical)

look , FatalExcellence said no, I dont care, but , if you give him extra time this will go on and on, and maybe his new partner, when he finds him , wont spit. I say lets just proceed to next round, but you do what you want Kron, btw , he had time to write a short verse, he took us lightly, his fault, we had as much time as he did.
(fixion if you think I'm scared I can do a battle with you 1 on 1 , topical)

You can advance this.


And Vocab..set it up.

nah.... fuck my pc been down

Fatal I'm here now and I got this pc all week... if you ain't duckin let me n fix post up...

yo kron whats good with this man... if you and cont want comp in this tourny you'll give an ext. to fix and I even if it's gotta be done by like thur... and even it's a change of topic.

Because to tell the truth if I had no way of getting a computer and we take a no show, you might as well just forget having this tourny, because without me n aaron in this thing I don't see your team losing.

Like I said man, it's up to your opponents. I dont mind people posting after the deadline, as long as their opponents agree to it, it's fine. But the decision lies with them

decision - NO
and dont worry they'll get competition

btw Fixion go check in our battle http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=71107

^^ You arent good, stop thinkin you are.

Pussies wanna get the good heads out of the tourney before the first rnd.