RULES:

***NO CREW VOTES***
5 bar min...10 bar max
NO DR votes.
must explain your vote.
no hate votes.
first to 5....3-0 is a K.O.
no feedin off eachothers rhymes.

1

since your so thristy to lose....DAMN.....stupid kid.

This faggot callin me out-like he got something for me-
fuck your story-id rather sleep cause you actually bore me/
How you gon try and approach me-when you cant even rhyme?-
Im like a phone operator-BITCH im hangin up your lines/
Your flow's irrelevant-Like umbrellas im repellin it-
Dont Fuck wit you puss-just cause of the smell of this/
Im the mouse that shook the elephant-you lack an element-
spittin skills-take your rhyme book and burn in hell with it/
you delicate bitch, get hurt by me on some malevolent Shit-
wack "mcee" your words are baseless, like an anti-predicate-trick/
When im done you gon need some excedrin dick-i make heads ache-
you remind me of michael jacksons nose-you fall off cause u fake/
Stupid you gettin BENT-ON this QUEST-ill leave you crushed dummy-
I school 14 year old kids who cant rap-wanna bet your lunch money?...

eat a dick....fuck a CIV-ILL-IAN....

**SNORING**...wait...i think hear something....was that a queef?...there must be a PUSSY close.....

Checking In...I'm Bot To Hop Off The Comp Now And Take A Shower...If I Dont Post Later On Tonight It Will Be Tomorrow Before...8:00

...After I Get Home From School And Work...

yeah...but you was the one who was in a rush to battle me...you got no time for 5 lousy bars?....damn yall CIV-ILL-IANS are pathetic.

HaHaHa...WTF?! @ his verse

Maaayne...Benton Will Rip-With-A-Speech My Weapons Ending It Wit' Stitches-In-Fleets its pretty evident that Jizm-is-weak this fags sucking dick and spitting-his-treat (sperm) I'll leave his *brain on his timbs* so he can Think-On-His-Feet!!/I'm Sick-Wit The Reach i shoulda left this battle-abandoned Cant Believe that this faggot-still-standing...Jizms just mad because none of his damn jabs-is-landing I'll shoot by ya head so fast that it rattles-ya-dandruff/collapsed on the canvas that dumb Quest "punchline" will get ya abdomen-rammed-in i suggest you head back-to-ya-fam before i fracture-ya-bandage (whooo) cuz even wit *trees that ran yards* you couldnt tackle-my-branches (civ-ILLians)/wit feet on monopoly boards you aint standing-a-chancekid prolly cause my heater-will-damage cuz shaking hands wit stick shift cars* is not Meeting-My-Standards!!/*HAHA* fuck support i aint feeding-these-bastards i was speaking on the week-he-was-born to leave him sleeping in a creek-wit-a-storm..PLEASE!! your cheap-with-ya-form i'll leave Jizm missing his thumbs like deleting-your-porn!!!/...I'LL REAP-YOU IN SWARMS!! BEEEOTCH!!

lol:rolleyes:

hmmm...

lol funny shit indeed

Man..Someone Vote Already God Damn Yall Lazy

...43 Posts And Not One Damn Vote...

i Meant 43 Views But Yo...

Votes Explained Please

None of That He One cUZ The Punches Were Better

...How Were The Punches Better?...

My Vote Goes To Blah cuz He Flowed Better

How Did He Flow Better?

lol, dope battle guys. I can't votew cause me and jizm is crew,m but I'll laydown some thoughts..

JIZM. This was good but by the standerds I have set for you it was mediocre. I've seen you come much harder as of late. No diss to your verse it simply wasn't your best work.

standout lines-
"How you gon try and approach me-when you cant even rhyme?-
Im like a phone operator-BITCH im hangin up your lines/" Like the punch here

Im the mouse that shook the elephant-you lack an element-
spittin skills-take your rhyme book and burn in hell with it/ "- nice,. Ilike the elephant mouse thing. And your multis were plentiful. Punches were so so for you in this one.

Benton Quest- First of all, You impressed me, for some reason I thought you was wack, I was wrong. You dope with the multis man, fa real.. Your mane problem is your flow, maybe I'm wrong, but since flow is my best trait... I think you need to structure your verse differantly. It was really hard for me to tell when one bar ended and another began. I know you use a "/" to signal the end of a bar, but you should do it line by lune, and hit return after every line. Also most of your punches are too complex, I liked them, but the kids who vote here might not get them..

Standout Lines- "Maaayne...Benton Will Rip-With-A-Speech My Weapons Ending It Wit' Stitches-In-Fleets its pretty evident that Jizm-is-weak this fags sucking dick and spitting-his-treat (sperm) I'll leave his *brain on his timbs* so he can Think-On-His-Feet!!/" definatly your best line!

HAHA* fuck support i aint feeding-these-bastards i was speaking on the week-he-was-born to leave him sleeping in a creek-wit-a-storm..PLEASE!! your cheap-with-ya-form i'll leave Jizm missing his thumbs like deleting-your-porn!!!/...I'LL REAP-YOU IN SWARMS!! BEEEOTCH!!- this didn'y make a helluva a lot of sense, like "missing his thumbs like deleting you porn"???? What does that mean, It's over my head..

But newayze, this was a close battle, I feel one of you just edged out the other, but sense my vote don't count, I 'll just keep it to myself, I'm just trying to leave some feedback, NO BEEF!!!!!!!

...Thanks For The FeedBack...

Uppin'

Upping Dis Once Again

Can someone Vote Please? It Would Be Appreciated...Thank You

Your skillz are tight man. My vote is for Benton Quest

U NEED 30 POSTS TO VOTE. SORRY KID.

^HaHaHa^

...s'fUNNY How You Didn't State That You Needed Thirty Posts To Vote In The Beginning Of The Thread...

Shit...I Barely Have 30 Posts

ok....fuck the 30 post thing....his vote dont count cause he aint explain it...hows that?

I Agree But This Site Has A Shitty Voting System

Nearly A Hundred Views And Not One "Real" Vote

It's Sad...Yet Peeps Private Message Me To Vote On Thier Shit...

JIZM

Decent flow but good punches. Wordplay wuz tight and so was vocab...

How you gon try and approach me-when you cant even rhyme?-
Im like a phone operator-BITCH im hangin up your lines/
^^Good flow and punch

Im the mouse that shook the elephant-you lack an element-
spittin skills-take your rhyme book and burn in hell with it/
you delicate bitch, get hurt by me on some malevolent Shit-
wack "mcee" your words are baseless, like an anti-predicate-trick/
^^Decent punches and good vocab and flow

Stupid you gettin BENT-ON this QUEST-ill leave you crushed dummy-
I school 14 year old kids who cant rap-wanna bet your lunch money?...
^^Good wordplay in first line and great finish

Benton Quest

Not a very good flow and verse wuz hard to read. Some ok punches and wordplay.

its pretty evident that Jizm-is-weak this fags sucking dick and spitting-his-treat (sperm) I'll leave his *brain on his timbs* so he can Think-On-His-Feet!!/
^^Punch wuz good but flow wuz a lil off

collapsed on the canvas that dumb Quest "punchline" will get ya abdomen-rammed-in i suggest you head back-to-ya-fam before i fracture-ya-bandage (whooo) cuz even wit *trees that ran yards* you couldnt tackle-my-branches (civ-ILLians)/
^^Good wordplay, punch, and flow

*HAHA* fuck support i aint feeding-these-bastards i was speaking on the week-he-was-born to leave him sleeping in a creek-wit-a-storm..PLEASE!! your cheap-with-ya-form i'll leave Jizm missing his thumbs like deleting-your-porn!!!/...I'LL REAP-YOU IN SWARMS!! BEEEOTCH!!
^^Sub-par flow and punch.

Flow - JIZM
Wordplay - Benton Quest
Punches - JIZM
Vocab - JIZM

Add this to the fact that Quests verse was hard to read so it was dificult to understand and you get my vote for...

VOTE: JIZM

Yea...Aight Uppin Dis

thanks for the feedback and vote street king.........im up 1-0...come on niggas vote!...1

First of all I wanna say Benton Ques t won, this is why.

Jizm:

This faggot callin me out-like he got something for me-
fuck your story-id rather sleep cause you actually bore me/

Decent start, but callin' somebody a faggot to me in a battle means they don't have anything else lyrical to say.

How you gon try and approach me-when you cant even rhyme?-
Im like a phone operator-BITCH im hangin up your lines/

Nice diss. The phone operator line was original but I don't quite by what you mean by "hangin' up your lines" ?

Im the mouse that shook the elephant-you lack an element-
spittin skills-take your rhyme book and burn in hell with it/

This was good. You had nice internals and multi's and a little short diss in there.

When im done you gon need some excedrin dick-i make heads ache-
you remind me of michael jacksons nose-you fall off cause u fake/

I like the MJ line, always a popular one lol.

Stupid you gettin BENT-ON this QUEST-ill leave you crushed dummy-
I school 14 year old kids who cant
rap-wanna bet your lunch money?...

Decent endin'. Your verse was good. Good disses here and there. And you even added some multi's and internals which in battles IMO is not needed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Benton Quest:

Maaayne...Benton Will Rip-With-A-Speech My Weapons Ending It Wit' Stitches-In-Fleets its pretty evident that Jizm-is-weak this fags sucking dick and spitting-his-treat (sperm)

Nice internals but you could've dissed him harder than that cum spittin' thing. Wasted opportunity I guess.

I'll leave his *brain on his timbs* so he can Think-On-His-Feet!!/

This was ILL. This is a punch, this is what you should have in battles. Good job.

/collapsed on the canvas that dumb Quest "punchline" will get ya abdomen-rammed-in i suggest you head back-to-ya-fam before i fracture-ya-bandage (whooo)

You fed off his verse a little man. You mentioned the diss he gave you in his verse.

cuz even wit *trees that ran yards* you couldnt tackle-my-branches (civ-ILLians)/wit feet on monopoly boards you aint standing-a-chance kid

The monoply line was good and a nice punch.

prolly cause my heater-will-damage cuz shaking hands wit stick shift cars* is not Meeting-My-Standards!!

You could've done without the "heater" mentionin', but again a good punch and diss.

/*HAHA* fuck support i aint feeding-these-bastards i was speaking on the week-he-was-born to leave him sleeping in a creek-wit-a-storm..PLEASE!!

Another good punch.

your cheap-with-ya-form i'll leave Jizm missing his thumbs like deleting-your-porn!!!/

This line doesn't make sense. What the hell do missin' thumbs have to do with deletin' porn?


Overall while Jizm had some good punches, Benton Quest had a lot more and they hit harder than Jizm's. Both were very lyrical in their verses but Benton Quest inched by.

Vote=Benton Quest

1-1...uppin for more votes.

internet porn pictures are sometimes commonly reffered to as thumbnails.

but uhh...o.k

any small pic on the net are called thumbnails....thats why that lines was stupid. and you should also be DQ'ed for feedin off me..but ill let it go. 1-1

...nah if u take it that damn serious then d.q me...

feeding off of ya verse...hahaha...

JIZM-any small pic on the net are called thumbnails....thats why that lines was stupid. and you should also be DQ'ed for feedin off me..but ill let it go. 1-1

i dont want u to let shit go....what the fuck is that?!?!

i dont want you to make me feel as though you're letting me stay in because YOU said so...

fuck that shit...i'd rather have u win

i dont like stupid comments like that!

"you did yadda yadda but i'll let it slide"...nah fuck that dont let it slide...that type of shit just pisses me off.

well it seems like your whole crew has problems readin and going by the fuckin rules.....but ill let you slide....1-1...unless you wanna do it over....its on you.

LET IT SLIDE?!

man hell no!

we're not talking about my damn crew!

we're talking about JIZM and Benton Quest...so you bringing up shit about my crew is irrelevant.

let it slide?!...fuck outta here because if i win i dont wanna hear some bitch shit like..."uhhh...well...he shoulda been d.q'ed but iight".

i swear man...haha

stupid shit

all i said about your crew was none of them follow the rules...and u should be DQ'ed for not followin the rules in this particular battle...but ill let you slide this time...and also give you the option of doing it allover again without feeding off the next verse...get it?

Jizm-and u should be DQ'ed for not followin the rules in this particular battle...but ill let you slide this time...

NAH DONT LET IT SLIDE...D.Q ME THEN

my vote is for jizm
he ripped it on him, plain and simple.
benton- you need to elevate

Fav. Lines:
Jizm:
"Stupid you gettin BENT-ON this QUEST-ill leave you crushed dummy-
I school 14 year old kids who cant rap-wanna bet your lunch money?..."

Benton:
"I'll leave his *brain on his timbs* so he can Think-On-His-Feet!!/I'm Sick-Wit The Reach "

thanks shadow.....up 2-1

well my vote goes to Jizm.It was close but Jizm had more punchline.Jizm had your ass right there
How you gon try and approach me-when you cant even rhyme?-
Im like a phone operator-BITCH im hangin up your lines/
And right here he just murdered you
When im done you gon need some excedrin dick-i make heads ache-
you remind me of michael jacksons nose-you fall off cause u fake/
you didnt flow right or structure your bars correct
but your good

thanks prolific.....up 3-1

Hahaha...

You Want Me To Structure My Bars Correctly?!

Alright Dude Like You Said...Let's Do This Over...You Can Take This If You Want Or Whateva

I'll Set It Up Same Rules...Check In Then Post

my vote is for jizm
he ripped it on him, plain and simple.
benton- you need to elevate

hmmm....

...Thread Closed...

...Battle Abandoned I Guess...

...Go To Jizm vs. Benton Quest Part II...

how is this thread closed?..lol.....like i said...ill let it go, you still got a chance im up 3-1....

Nah kid u offered to lemme battle again

neither of you idiots have talent. Renounce your crews and join the LUG. They got rhymes just as bad as urs.

What Have You Done On Your Stay Here?

But Talk Shit..Your Taking Up Space Fag...Shut Up Fore I Sicc Jizm on Ya Ass

HeatSeeka
Rookie



Registered: Mar 2003
Location: North Carolina
Posts: 40
Status: Offline


I got you last night now you mad at me
U think you rhyme tight but I'm laughin' g
U funny
Ought to be a comic on BET
Instead of runnin around wit your cap gun tryna blast at me
I got the real medicine, here's a pill for your thinkin cap
I thought u had betta sense, u aint ill, think of that
I know u scared cus i can hear your heartbeat racin
I'm the king of the streets, u've been replaced kid



Last edited by HeatSeeka on 03-21-2003 at 03:07 PM

does that ring a bell?!

i suggest you chill kiddo

fore i jump rop wit ya esophagus

Jizm slap this ho man.

hahaha

jizm won that

"Dont Fuck wit you puss-just cause of the smell of this/
Im the mouse that shook the elephant-you lack an element-
spittin skills-take your rhyme book and burn in hell with it/"
nice rhymes

When im done you gon need some excedrin dick-i make heads ache-you remind me of michael jacksons nose-you fall off cause u fake/Stupid you gettin BENT-ON this QUEST-ill leave you crushed dummy-I school 14 year old kids who cant rap-wanna bet your lunch money?...

that was good


I'll leave his *brain on his timbs* so he can Think-On-His-Feet!!/
that was nice but its been said to many times in a different way

kid prolly cause my heater-will-damage cuz shaking hands wit stick shift cars* is not Meeting-My-Standards!!
that was nice

i smell dickriders already............




quest why did u tell me to join this site if these punks dont know a damn thing about battlin..........



*smirk*


Prestige....

wow...i heard Jizm got shitted on in RN

and he left to come to this site

what the fuck is RN?....dogg listen the only board i posted on besides this is homegrownhiphop.com and that shi been down for like 3 years...so get your shit correct. fuck pathetic niggas...and yo heatseeka, dont even open your mouth kid...ill SHIT it it. garbage ass nigga.

oh by the way...im up 4-1....its almost over for u nigga....then we go round 2.

^if he didnt know about RN why is it that he knew to post a verse that Damien put up.............




HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM




SUSPECT....



idiot...



Prestige....

..i said it once and ill say it again.....someone from civ-ill-ians posted what RN stood for...and i believe it was a link...rapnetworks.com....i went to it....looked for someone from civ-ill-ians, by the way they have different names....copied and pasted the only pussy i figured was a civ...damien x...and posted it here...stupid niggas...yall makin yourselves look stupid....think before u pop shit...yall all wack as fuck...that bullet shit damien posted was trash. try rhyming about something original...not bitin niggas shit....bitch ass niggas.

Hold the fuck up!!!

I have no qualms with you claiming that my Bullet spit was crap. You still stuck on some biting shit????? Dawg, get over it. I still out did you. I POSTED that it was a story off of a god-damned DBZ movie. If niggaz decided it wasn't relevant, then it wasn't. Why is a net win so important to you? You need to re-evaluate your life, youngin'. I don't understand how someone with a Win/Loss record of 3-0 proclaim themselves an Undefeated Champion. Undefeated - yes, but if I was 1-0 I would be undefeated as well. Your title holds no weight. It's young niggaz like you who catch feelings cuz a nigga out-do 'em then you go bomb your middle school. Get a life...better yet, commit suicide, do us all a favor......

You sure are a fucking idiot you know that?

:rolleyes:

If you say so.......youngin'

ROTFLMMFAO THIS IS MAJOR GAY

JIZM HAD WORD PLAY??? THAT WAS ILL???

ROTFLMMFAO!... U GOTTA BE FUCKING KIDDIN ME

YOU PPL ARE REALLY FUCKIN IDIOTS I SWEAR I DIDN'T BELIEVE IT UNTIL AFTER I SEEN THE VOTES ON THIS BATTLE

MAJOR DICKRIDIN.. OH HELL LMFAO!

YOU PPL ARE SO FUCKING STUPID.. DON'T KNWO SHYT

but i guess thats u get when u come to a gay porn site..

Benton... another HHH

ROTFLMMFAO

well...my punches killed him

but it seems my "format" wasn't good enough.

wtf?

who cares about the format?! just take a sec and look at the content

...and the punches...

seriously...the think on the feet punch was hotter than any line Jizm had in his entire verse

EXACTULLY!

youngin'? nigga check my info, im that 27 year old nigga that be fuckin your mom cause your daddys old dick can stay hard...fuckin pussies...fuck yall civillians...

cant stay hard*

That's.....really....sad. A 27 year old man who looks for friends on the internet. Yeah, you're older than me, but not by as much as you think. C'mon, yo, you need a legitimate job or something. Leave this net thing alone. Besides, you can't be fuckin' my mother.....she'd kick ya' ass. She don't fuck wit' bitch niggaz. And, yeah, my father is gettin' old. It's a surprise his bitch ass still alive and kickin' like he is.....lol.. But that's neither here nor there. Do what you wanna......chump....

OK, bye-bye...

keep poppin shit, thats all your good for....you been here like 3 days and STILL havent battled ANYONE....all you are is mouth...PUSSY.....garbage.

^^^^^i guess he doesnt pay attention to the boards.....


ive battled more than Benton already.....




im the most active battler in the whole crew............



U have yet to actually say that you wanna battle....




HERB



Prestige...

dont worry its comin.

^^^^^^^^^^^^go ahead and prewrite all u want.....



*smirk*



ill still kill you....



Prestige...

now im pre-writin...lol....but when u take a day or a few hours to post something that dont count right?...kid listen...i got 3 or 4 battles going right now and niggas aint votin, i lost count of them shits....when they finish imma see you...dont worry, ill call you out...i wont wait for you....1

*smirk*



its called having a life...something that ur "seven-year" internet drugged life wouldnt grasp or fathom....



Prestige...

yo get the fuck outta my thread...i need voted not bullshit...go fuckin talk shit someplace else....damn.

Vote= Benton

Reason= Most of Jizm's lines were fillers and when he did have wordplay in there, it sucked ass. AND i have a question... How the HELL are you undefeated?

Benton's punches came a LOT harder than Jizm's AND he had some impressive multis.

I dont know if this counts but yea

hes down wit the civs...peep the way he gave feedback...like he on some beef shit...its all good...im up 4-2

^^ He's got 3 posts, prolly an alias vote pussy ass shit. Don't sweat these buffoons Jizm, they like to make up there own little worl of what your life is like. The sad shit is, they actually buy into it, useally it's because of living in a soceity that pokes fun at them. So they pretend to know you so they can feel on top. And I love when a dude says your wack cause you're on the net all the time, while he himself is on the net. It's only a desperate attempt to save there ego's when they know they can't argue bout' ya skillz. Fuck these nitwits.NULLIFIERS.....

^^^^^juss as long as yall keep dickriding....none of you will become better....


Prestige...

HAHAHAHA i dont even know who the hell victorious is.

yea aight...whateva

why argue on this shitty site anyway.

Just show me on punchlin that Jizm had that was better than the think on your feet line.

Did I say he was better?? I actually thought you had a slight edge. Call me a dickrider, but you should look at a typical responce from me before you go making baseless accusations. I feel the same, dr's never improve, but how am I a DR. I will always back up a friend who is in the right, but I won't help out a friend who is being an idiot themself. Think before you type, it will save you further humilliation.

Y'all both have quite some potential....
Jizm u straight doggy

Benton u was hott son-son...

both of y'all keep elevatin...........