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Topic: Insomnia

Check In By: Tuesday June 13th
Verses Due: Saturday June 17th

i'll show this time! :P

^^^Same here

No Show Verse

Sleepless, Seeking Solice, So Many Stressful Sagas
Meaningless Mornings Made Mostly of Mess and Drama
Why Cant I Close My Eyes And realize what the meaning was
The First Man Alive To See "sleep"s what Im "Dreaming Of"
My Body is weak, My Conscience became just a wreck
Sleep is the cure Im sure, I urge for even just a speck
* Laying in bed in total darkness*
Not to Hot, as I lay here with the cold air fanning me
But this Spot, All alone in the dark silence becomes insanity
Randomly,*Stands up, flipping on the tv hoping that will help*
*soon "becoming restless", he changes channels seeking something else*
I felt, at first that this was good as I'd have more time to think
Now it's to the point I've learned to hate myself, my mind past the brink
The sink drips constantly, the ceiling fan blows to loud for me
My neighbors goto work early, its like everything has it out for me
Soundlessly I Slip into Somewhere Still, And Sorrow Sinks In Slowly
Mornings Mainly Make Me Miss Most of the Meaning,Sleep seems to loathe me
I See The Moon rise, and Watch The Sun Come Up At Six A.M
More Or Less Waiting In Bed For the Same Shitty Day Again
Insomnia Instantly Irritates Inner Issues till Irony Settles in
Initially Sleepless Nights upset Me,I hit the bed waitin as hell begins
Well then again, even sleeping pills dont help as im that tired
Even The Satire Back Fires When Your Mind Is That Wired

just for the record, that was my verse.