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Topic: Trapped in a Nightmare

Check In By: Tuesday June 13th
Verses Due: Saturday June 17th

Check in....
If poss can I have an extension untill Sunday night, as I have an exam tomorrow n friday which I'm revising for, + Got a meal on sat which is at family's, and not near my pc....



Edit by Kron - Wait until everyone checks in first, then we'll see. Shouldn't be a problem though as you've let me know well before the deadline.

check...

Checkered like a chessboard.

About the deadline, I don't mind if they get a extension, as long as Vocab and I do.

Of course lol....
as far as I know, if both teams agree then the deadline is sunday now...

Check, i would like a deadline untill next year if poss........if not then Sunday should be okay.

OK you all have til Sunday 11.59pm EST

Gunna apologise in advanced for this but i've been working alot and have been dragged in tomorrow to work so i'll not get to this until monday, Ben if you're reading this could you write your bit then PM me it with the gaps and whatnot cheers.

yo we're finishing our verse, it'll be up tonight , we'll take 2 votes docked

iight I'll post a no-show verse

a no-show verse , if they show-up , we'll finish it

INTRO
4 men are trapped in a nightmare, they sit in a circle
And each one of them tells his nightmare,
by the command of the strange voice present in the HOOK
By each nightmare
Things are getting worse, and by each nightmare, Joseph,
Serial killer, one of those 4 trapped, keeps disappearing
lets see what’s happening…


HOOK - a strange voice whispering
You can feel terror in the air, as I seal horror with despair
Always be aware, there's a killer in the air
Tell me your nightmare, Jones, tell me your nightmare

VERSE 1
Jones – 79 years old, a war veteran
Deafening booms consume the room where the shadows form-into-creatures
Blood streams down these men’s cheeks, foreign feelings are torn-out-of-nature
The black grass grips my limbs as the trees touch the stormy clouds-in-the-sky
My commander tells me we’ll be okay, but the grenades are as loud-as-the-lies
The earth below me is disappearing, now it’s twist and turning, it’s spinning-in-circles
My voice is raspy, my eyes are burning, hell, I’m seeing-in-purple
All I hear is the footsteps of scared men, all just trying to run-away-from-here
The darkness dies, but just so more fear can come, the sun-rays-come-and-sear
So, as I awake to one dream or another, my memories come back to-haunt-me
My terrorizing nightmares show me that I know the terrifying truth’s-not-seen

*as soon as the Jones finished his speech, there was a strong earthquake
Jones fell into the earth and never came back again*

HOOK – a strange voice whispering
You can feel terror in the air as I seal horror with despair
Always be aware, there's a killer in the air
Tell me your nightmare, Edward, tell me your nightmare


VERSE 2
Edward – 40 years old, a rich father
Curriculum-of-police-sirens consume-and-freeze-silence, color of violence
Declares presence, suspense my sense, I'm taken-by-remembrance
of better days, awaken-by-descendants and delight-of-every-motion
now inside-of-free-notion I'm paying cost for sight-of-empty-emotion
I'm seeing my only child being-kidnapped and I'm on string-trapped
Phone rings-except, it wasnt kidnappers, wrapped in blings,-stabbed
by anguish, I wish I wasnt rich, as I reach for money to burn-the-bitch
Phone rings again, kidnappers wanna ransom, it turns- the-speech
And we-arrange the meeting, police-free-exchange, I see-a-change
On them and they tell me something strange: “Now , the revenge”
AND THAT’S WHEN I WAKE UP, WITHOUT GETTING MY SON

*as soon as the Edward finished his speech, he saw a vision of his
Son getting kidnapped and killed after the paid ransom, and
Suddenly Edward got heart-attack and died…*

How much long till a no-show?