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Quick key .. 5 mins

your new so there not that much personals, 'gotta deal with punches and nameplay'
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With every key ya crushed, ya ain't competin' cuz
I'm takin' out Venom quicker than aenima does..!!
I get a lethal buzz when I'm rippin' these guys
Ya verses comin' straight out the pharmacy, all that shit is PRE-SCRIBED..!!
Said an hour? Days taken fa you to pre-write ya punches
We waitin' for Venom to leave like this site was Douglas..!!
Don't fight, ya dumb bitch... you spittin' rookie stuff
You couldn't be a VET 'cuz I wouldn't PAY to fuck this pussy up..!!
What?!... bring ya played nameflips, better yet, combine fa me
VeNoM bringin' the Poision and he still can't apply the heat..!!


MuRkEd .. !!

i guess itz my turn... aight

Listen to these wordz that im about to say
that are so sick
when im done wit u u gonna be beggin to
suck my dick

!Strap ya Belt!

Dawg if ya fight against me you gonna need medieval armour
cuz i drop bombs on you unexpectedly like it wuz Pearl Harbor
Put a razor to ya head and you can call me a barber
Strap a bomb to ya chest and you can call me a HOMICIDE bomber

Keep steppin dawg, and you gone be out of luck
Cuz im hot like that pot ya mom told u not to touch

Finally, Dawg I'll end this and leave you in dismay
so im sorry that i just fucked up ya once happy, sunny day

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69844

1st link

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=71515&page=2

2nd link

put up ya links

Link 1 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=882607&posted=1#post882607) +Link 2 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=882608&posted=1#post882608)

Wow this was wack........

I give this to s.dilla cause

venom used some shit I heard before....

and wasnt at all connecting his lines to make them go together....

s.dilla wins for overall better verse....

1-0 Uppin

S.Dilla Got This Cause no matter how many times i say it armor and harbor dont lol rhyme unless you got a lisp

With every key ya crushed, ya ain't competin' cuz
I'm takin' out Venom quicker than aenima does..!!
weak wordplay
I get a lethal buzz when I'm rippin' these guys
Ya verses comin' straight out the pharmacy, all that shit is PRE-SCRIBED..!!
played out
Said an hour? Days taken fa you to pre-write ya punches
We waitin' for Venom to leave like this site was Douglas..!!
not feeling
Don't fight, ya dumb bitch... you spittin' rookie stuff
You couldn't be a VET 'cuz I wouldn't PAY to fuck this pussy up..!!
young wordplay...
What?!... bring ya played nameflips, better yet, combine fa me
VeNoM bringin' the Poision and he still can't apply the heat..!!
not feeling the multi's or the punch

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Listen to these wordz that im about to say
that are so sick
when im done wit u u gonna be beggin to
suck my dick
wacccccccckkkk
Dawg if ya fight against me you gonna need medieval armour
cuz i drop bombs on you unexpectedly like it wuz Pearl Harbor
played out
Put a razor to ya head and you can call me a barber
Strap a bomb to ya chest and you can call me a HOMICIDE bomber
again played
Keep steppin dawg, and you gone be out of luck
Cuz im hot like that pot ya mom told u not to touch
not feeling this at all, no flow..or multi's at all
Finally, Dawg I'll end this and leave you in dismay
so im sorry that i just fucked up ya once happy, sunny day
weak..

nfurno told me i can't vote a tie so i vote for ImGreat cuz i feel he's more developed as far as skill and concepts went..

2-0
3 more votes needed

All cats goto S.dilla he just out did everything Venom did. You both need to elevate alot and keep at it.

Vote: S.dilla.

3-0 Ko? ... I Guess .. I win .. close this

Wow this was wack........

I give this to s.dilla cause

venom used some shit I heard before....

and wasnt at all connecting his lines to make them go together....

s.dilla wins for overall better verse....


Have ski mask break it down into catagories and i'll count the vote, until then or someone else votes correctly its 2-0

This was a catsweep to ImGreat. MC Venom, you need some work on structure and setup for punches. And your punches are played so get creative. Both of you elevate.

VOte - ImGreat

Flow: S.Dilla
Punches: S.Dilla
Wordplay: S.Dilla
Personals: None
Multies:S.Dilla
Creativity: S.Dilla
Overall: Who the Fuck U think Won...

punchez-s
personalz-tie
creativity-s
flow-s
wordplay-s
humor-s
enjoyment-s
o/a-s.dilla

*Deleted The Bullshit*

*Closed And Moved*