Rules:

1. 10-12 bars (1 bar is 2 lines)
2. No feeding off verses
3. First to 5 wins, 3-0 KO
4. Explain votes


Verses due today

Ready! Set! Go!

Oh lord ya'll, somebody done called me out//
Must not know how I do or how the fuck I get down//
It's da new kid on da block spittin shit straight out da hot box//
let me give ya da low down on da show down HBO don bout out FOX//
Title fight of da battles at least that's what we gon call it//
Mack got pucked, pushed, and slapped before we even got started//
First of many insults that my fury gon spit//
Don't get mad when you talkin cause it only amount to some shit//
So I'ma pile it up, wrap it up and send it on back//
Express mail to da house of Sweet, Sugar Shack Mack//
Others defy the language like they aint got no base//
I keep my shit clean, believe me,that's a harder slap in da face//
But I can't get crunchy, salty if you really want me to//
Dis battle's outcome relies on da reply from you//
I met the minimum showty, just to get da shit started//
If you feel the need to set the speed, I can go a lil longer//
What's up?

Out of retirement & and I’m ready 2 rip whoever wants it
Fuck U Rookie I’m Know to decimate opponents
“I ain’t neva scared hoe”, I’m a female “Bone Crusher”
I’ll slaughter you verbally, I ain’t gotta reach out & touch ya
I suggest you “Get Low” like ya name was “Lil’ Jon”
From the corny way you rap I’d swear your “Legally Blonde”
I’ll pop ya neck back like a goddamn Pez dispenser
My style is full of expletives muthafuck a censor
Break ya lyrics, why do that when I can break ya physics
Dismantle ya stature with this rapture and weaken ya spirit
Not coughin’ but I keep bringin’ the sick raps
I’m 10 steps ahead of you, so there’s no need to “spit back”
I can’t even pump my rhymes up cause your no competition
Your flow is like Laci Peterson, for months its been missing

messed up

UPPIN 4 VOTES.....HOLLA BACK ONE!

^^ how comes yoo posted 2 verses? im confoosed.. oh yeah and furik welcome to htown~ .. is ms mack sposed to post another verse too?

I was lost and confused to, that's why theres two.....didnt know i was supposed to write just one.....OH WELL!!!!

WE'LL SEE WHAT HAPPENS????

TO ALL THAT READ THIS MY FIRST LOSS IS A GIMME, ONLY CAUSE IT SAY ROOKIE SO FORGIVE FOR THE MIX-UP.......BUT LOOK OUT FOR THE NEXT ONE.

^^ hey furik dont be so hard on yourself.. just edit out the second verse and people can vote based on your first..

preciate da help snifa

np :p, gud luck on tha battle, im not gonna vote cuz now that i helped yoo, if i think yoo won ppo might think its a hate vote, just tha way it goes, gud luck tho~

vote=ms mack.more harder punches ,ok mutlis,wordplay wuz nice..it flow well


Furik u kinda messed up,but its ok ma cuz your verse was alright.wordplay alright.decent mutlis if there were any(find a couple)wasnt really no personal or punches there that connects with ms mack..keep elevatin ma..peace

vote = miss mack

she had a better flow and punchlines and more multies, overall better, furic had a good verse too.......

nice verses by both ladies. Ima have ta go wit Ms Mack on dis one, nice flow, punches were precise and placed well, overall betta verse.

Vote= Ms Mack

Furik, don't me discouraged, u did well gurl!!

That's 3-0....KO

Nice battle Furik. Thanks to all the peeps that voted. I'll be voting on a couple of battles tomorrow. (Gotta vote on other peeps battles if you want them to vote on yours).

I’m 10 steps ahead of you, so there’s no need to “spit back”

^lol...

vote - ms mack

better punches, better word-play,

decent verse from Furik tho.......