k_dogg777
03-18-2003, 10:38 PM
you start first
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View Full Version : K Dogg Vs Street King k_dogg777 03-18-2003, 10:38 PM you start first sTreet kIng 03-20-2003, 12:58 AM Bitch im only advancin in this game -gettin illa every week You gettin Left Behind like tha twin of my right ass cheek// Im tha shepard -bitches like u is tha sheep so dont speak Its gon be Silence of tha Lambs and yall hoes cant make a peep// Heres my critique -i hate whack ass bitches thats highly overrated Im unique -dogg u aint got no pep like coffee decaffinated// U must be on sumthin -how else can u explain battlin tha kIng? U like Ja Rule -u cant rap so u might as well try to sing// Kiss tha pinkie ring little bitch -thats all whack hoes like u is fuckin good for We all know u a fag -so just come out that closet and close tha fuckin door// k_dogg777 03-20-2003, 02:42 PM so street kings the king i dont fuckin think so hes such a mamas boy she buys his fuckin cloths// sits at home on his computer and likes to talk shit nigga come out side and say that youll be eatin cement. man me and my boys like to sip on the cris but you nigga yous like r kelly sayin i wish i wish// boy quit being a loon you look like a cartoon version of ricky shroder on silver spoon// sTreet kIng 03-20-2003, 07:51 PM aight pplz uppin 4 votez... Raven 03-20-2003, 08:03 PM street king: Bitch im only advancin in this game -gettin illa every week You gettin Left Behind like tha twin of my right ass cheek// Clever shit right here, and funny at the same time. Im tha shepard -bitches like u is tha sheep so dont speak Its gon be Silence of tha Lambs and yall hoes cant make a peep// Good line but it has been used before. Heres my critique -i hate whack ass bitches thats highly overrated Im unique -dogg u aint got no pep like coffee decaffinated// Nice punch here. U must be on sumthin -how else can u explain battlin tha kIng? U like Ja Rule -u cant rap so u might as well try to sing// You tried to make it come of as a diss and funny but it wasn't that much of a punch, it was funny though lol Kiss tha pinkie ring little bitch -thats all whack hoes like u is fuckin good for We all know u a fag -so just come out that closet and close tha fuckin door// No diss here. Overall the first half of the verse was good but the second sucked a little. Nice punches and clever rhymes too. Good job. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ k-dogg First off I could barely read this cuz there weren't any breaks in the verse, it was mostly run off... I'm not goin' to break down your verse becuz there were no disses or punches just talkin' about yourself basically ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Overall street king won this easily. He had more punches and disses. Vote=street king |