View Full Version : Caramella ~vrs~ GhettoQueen69


CaRaMeLLa
07-11-2003, 07:46 PM
Iight, girlie. This is it. I set it up for you and since you came after me first, you drop the rules and 'text' first...I can't wait no longer. I was born ready.

*WuN (Mite be the last luv I give to you before my lyrics devour you whole)

.LadyMarmalade.
07-12-2003, 12:51 AM
whoa, lol and u....lol have fun in this battle, i know i will, aint not hate on ya tho, **you aint femcees finest eithere**

~Rules~
no crew vote
clit ridin
unlimited # of bars
3-0=TKO
first to 5 = win
blah blah blah
we know the rules..

:p
*glares* have fun nepha...

CaRaMeLLa
07-12-2003, 10:25 AM
haha...this girl is fun-e. what's takin so long? writer's block gettin a hold of ya?

CaRaMeLLa
07-12-2003, 10:26 AM
oh. i got anotha rule:

*NO WANNA-BE FEMCEES CAN VOTE (that means the clit-rydin girls that is in the rookie status, iight?)

Frankie Felony
07-12-2003, 10:51 AM
This oughta be fairly decent.......Upping for GQ......Anyway, Mella check out ya PM's

CaRaMeLLa
07-12-2003, 11:22 AM
I did and i tried to respond back. clear out ya box, homie

CaRaMeLLa
07-12-2003, 11:27 AM
Fuck it. I'm ready. Good luck, girlie:

Start countin’ ya blessins, chump. Your odds are equal to never
Rhymes too clever. Too hard for your little brain to endeavor//
The champ is better. You think because I left, my rhymes would just ‘perish’?
Your tempting ‘fetish’ lead you right into a crisis you’ll ‘cherish’//
The ‘wooden puppet’ in your crew. I clip the strings and you’re through
The obsession they have you do? Get real. They’re ‘toying’ with you//
They should drop you. You have no balance. You punch the keys for your talent
Foretelling this battle, there were no checks beside your name on the ballot//
The ‘way-back-when’ drama is burned. No point in bringin’ the past
Flashing phony truth for attention, saw how long you had last?//
I ain’t femcee’s finest? Hear that? No applause in the lurk
Get the finger from under your skirt. You got those crickets to chirp//
I’ll admit this much. You’ll prolly find this thing as crazy, but maybe
No matter what ya mind may think, I’ll always be SK’s first lady//
You only wish in your demented mind that you could compare
Your uncontrollable urge to be me has given many a scare//
We both have ‘good hair’. That’s the only connection you could take
Any other assumption you could make is clearly a mistake//
Given the time to push your luck, I’ll bet you take it as such
I’m through pointing you out. Hope I haven’t hurt your feelings much//

ENDING:
Try sparing your next chance with me. It’s meant to be heard
I used a ‘swear’ for luck and I ain’t even mention ‘curse words’//

BkBrawla
07-12-2003, 01:00 PM
..good verse...uppin for Queen verse

Frankie Felony
07-12-2003, 03:18 PM
Cleared out......You can send the response now

.LadyMarmalade.
07-12-2003, 03:36 PM
iight nice verse, ill have mine soon...not in da mood to write right now..

CaRaMeLLa
07-12-2003, 04:41 PM
haha...yeah. okay.

Shadow
07-12-2003, 04:50 PM
heh

.LadyMarmalade.
07-12-2003, 04:53 PM
shudup caramella, nice talks done

CaRaMeLLa
07-12-2003, 05:05 PM
iight. from now on, you can't post up in this thread unless it's your verse, iight?

*whaddup, shadow! how you doin, brotha? long-time-no-talk (don't respond to this. just a friendly hello)

.LadyMarmalade.
07-12-2003, 06:41 PM
Who you think you are, comin here tryin to rule this place
But the queen you cant replace, don’t be such a disgrace
You're nothing to me, your just a plain lil distraction, wantin attraction
Nice talkin's ova, time to get down to buisness, show some action
Used to be a queen, but was neva supremes first lady, stop dreamin'
Bitch look at me now, gon get u screamin', you the one who gon be leavin'
Im in the supreme kings for a reason, at least I got a crew
Been waitin on this for a while, cuz my hate for you rapidly grew
Wonder why u get the pm’s, cuz yous a suck up, too fucked up
A bitch with the fake pics, cant get nuff of herself, so stuck up
Aint noone wanna be like you, get out of your fantasy life, you're fake
Think you can be better then me, think again, dun' make that mistake
You thinking you all that, but youre not the femcees finest
Cuz you weak, you shit cant pass a simple alpha and number test
That right bitch, just walk away you cant stand my words eatin’ u out
Stuck up hoe, I can read you like and open book, I know what you about
Getting ready to put you on my sig as a loser with a poor loss
Watchin the expression on your face change, look at who’s the boss
Your pics are fake it has been proven, one and a minus
So get on your knees bow to the queen, cuz Im your highness
You cant battle, youre flow is weak, your lines dont match up
Im too fast for you, youre slow, so dont eaven try to catch up
Look at the shit you brought, bitch give up you got cought
So shut yo mouth, and keep that on yo sig, cuz I ‘love you not’

CaRaMeLLa
07-12-2003, 06:45 PM
haha. nice endin, girlie. iight, people. the internet lines are opened~*

CaRaMeLLa
07-12-2003, 09:53 PM
cmon, peoplez. i KNOW yall not sleepin on this. yall CANT sleep on this! please...PUHLEEZ dont sleep on this. i am so beggin yall now~*

BkBrawla
07-12-2003, 09:55 PM
^^if u shut sombody will vote...can i vote?..cuz i kno ugly ass ghettoqueen is in my crew

.LadyMarmalade.
07-12-2003, 09:57 PM
shudup yous ugly, lol caramella i was here just comin back and i was like WHERE ARE THESE PPL, and brawla, sure you can vote (eaven though i KNOW you gon vote against me but its all good)

~1~

THE TRUTH
07-12-2003, 10:00 PM
I WONT VOTE.....EVEN THO' I BELONG TO NO CREW.

.LadyMarmalade.
07-12-2003, 10:05 PM
i think you should...

BkBrawla
07-13-2003, 02:40 AM
fuck it i vote

punches-caramella
multis-none
personal-tied
wordplay-queen
phattest ass-caramella
cutest dimplez-queen
strcuture-queen
punches that actually conntect-caramella


3-2 vote-caramella...nice battle ..queen your elevatin quite nicely ..im proud of u(ugh) anyway caramella u gotta some competion now ma.oo0o0oo0 youuuu in trouble..alexia prolly want you and ms marry mack want your phat ass..so get ready o0o0o

peace

eNiTe
07-13-2003, 06:04 AM
Caramellas Fav. Lines
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The ‘wooden puppet’ in your crew. I clip the strings and you’re through

We both have ‘good hair’. That’s the only connection you could take
Any other assumption you could make is clearly a mistake//


Queens Fav. Lines
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Stuck up hoe, I can read you like and open book, I know what you about

So shut yo mouth, and keep that on yo sig, cuz I ‘love you not’



Too Lazy To Do That LIne By Line Crap..

So Ima Do It The Ezier Way Of Voting


Wordplay-Caramella
Punches-Caramella
Flo/Structure- Tied
Personals- Tied
Complexity-Caramella


Vote-Caramella


The Fake Pic Part Of Gq's Verse Threw Me Off.. Caramella Posted A Fake Pic Too?.. Or Am I Just Trippin..

W/e Good Battle.. And I Think Ppo Are Sleepin On This Battle Cuz Caramella Scared Them Off With The Whole No Posting Thingy :p

GhettoQueenLori
07-13-2003, 11:28 AM
o dayum this shit is hard tah vote on yo both madd good but im'a have to go wit queen on this one dayum girl u elevatin im proud of u this was a madd close battle but shit i liked queen endin so

VOTE= DA QUEEN

-Evey-
07-13-2003, 01:35 PM
Your pics are fake it has been proven, one and a minus
So get on your knees bow to the queen, cuz Im your highness

this line was riiiight str8 blow to her jaw (i liked that)

Aint noone wanna be like you, get out of your fantasy life, you're fake
Think you can be better then me, think again, dun' make that mistake

queen were you angry when you wrote this?
this line seems like it was str8 from ya heart true and true

Look at the shit you brought, bitch give up you got cought
So shut yo mouth, and keep that on yo sig, cuz I ‘love you not’

nice raw ending

vote=QUEEN -good shyt girl keep it up


Caramella your drop was exceptional also but i was feelin queens a lil more

**looking forward to the next battle**

BkBrawla
07-13-2003, 01:51 PM
^your sexy, anyway interestin its tied up 2-2.uppin for votez

CaRaMeLLa
07-13-2003, 03:23 PM
ooh...okay. 2-2 uppin

.LadyMarmalade.
07-13-2003, 06:03 PM
2-2, interestin, :) uppin

CaRaMeLLa
07-13-2003, 06:15 PM
looks like we're neck-to-neck, girlie! ah! (lol)

^'in

Ancient
07-13-2003, 07:09 PM
Vote=Caremella

Veres was more direct.. Punches were harder from a females point..Flow was pretty good, evenly recited.. Nice personals.. Ending was decent.. could have been a little better.. but over all that drop was fire..

G.Q.. I liked your verse as well.. I think you slightly lacked harder punchlines compared to Caramellas.. It seemed like you answered ehr verse.. And verse riding is just like reading a verse over again.. Your ending was pretty hot though.. Big ups to both..

.LadyMarmalade.
07-13-2003, 07:17 PM
hmm funny how thse ppl just SHOW up and vote, he aint eaven active, but whatever, 3-2. UPPIN'

Ancient
07-13-2003, 07:58 PM
How about... I have a life and I'm not on 24/7 like you maybe? Wether I am active or not.. A vote is a vote.. And since I don't go on freeposting frenzy *cough* doesn't make me inactive either.. Stop complaining

GhettoQueenLori
07-13-2003, 09:55 PM
o shit do i sence beef..?? hmmmm lol jp yo this was tight queen did a good job but so did carmella this is gonna be close but in my oppinion queens verse was from the heart and it was like she really ment everyword it was hot i was feelin dat queen good job n GL!

Your pics are fake it has been proven, one and a minus
So get on your knees bow to the queen, cuz Im your highness

*

Look at the shit you brought, bitch give up you got cought
So shut yo mouth, and keep that on yo sig, cuz I ‘love you not’

^^^^ THOSE TWO DEFF GOTTA BE MY FAVE'S ALSO!!! ^^^^

lil_luchi
07-13-2003, 10:14 PM
ill vote tomorrow im sleepy

Ancient
07-13-2003, 10:34 PM
Nah... There isn't any beef. I was just saying... I seriously doubt if I would have voted for Queen, she wouldn't have said anything about how "inactive" I've been.. It's just stupid.. But I am going to stop posting here.. Good luck you too

CaRaMeLLa
07-14-2003, 12:48 PM
GQL...you already voted, girlie~*

GhettoQueenLori
07-14-2003, 12:53 PM
o i know im jus sayin whut i liked its all good

THE TRUTH
07-14-2003, 12:54 PM
MY VOTE...AND THIS WILL UNDOUBTEDLY START CONTROVERSY, BECAUSE PEOPLE THINK I'M IN SOME WAY INVOLVED WIT BOTH WOMEN, GOES TO:

CARAMELLA

She wrote a verse that wasn't the cliche RW rhetoric, and she did it with a flavor that Queen didn't show in this battle. I like seeing the originality and that was what Nepha demonstrated. On behalf of Queen, she wrote a very good verse that was close but still not --in my opinion--as good as Nephaz....

VOTE ACCORDINGLY>

CaRaMeLLa
07-14-2003, 12:55 PM
thanx~* 4-2 me. ^'in

THE TRUTH
07-14-2003, 12:58 PM
Gotta talk to you about something Nepha, but I'm busy now. I'ma IM you a lil' later. It's important...in a couple hours when I can send messages back and forth...or later tonight. Make that possible, Nepha. Please.

CaRaMeLLa
07-14-2003, 01:08 PM
iight, E. i'll see whats up with today's scedule. we might head back to Six Flags later on today, tho. i didnt get to ride everything!

MamiMika
07-14-2003, 03:36 PM
^^lol
k im not gonna vote cas i cant....im my opinion this is a tie.

n-e-ways YALL SO FUCKEN GOOD!!!!!!!! dayum yall need ta help me elevate n be really good like yall fa reel n i aint playin(lol).

so yea like i already said i really cant vote...... BUT DAMN WERE YALL BORN DIS GOOD?????

CaRaMeLLa
07-14-2003, 04:26 PM
nah. actually, like 2 years ago, i was introduced to another site that was called "Rapworld.com" (not this site, though) I elevated from there and moved on up through mah net career (lol) the site doesn't work no more...that was mah home right there~*

n-ewayz, ^'in

.LadyMarmalade.
07-14-2003, 09:06 PM
u started writin 2 years ago? lol that a long time, i started 2 months ago, heheh no ownder you good, neways what is it now 4-2. smh obvious who won, UPPIN PPL!

~1~

CaRaMeLLa
07-14-2003, 09:11 PM
dont jump to conclusions yet, girlie. you still have sum time to catch up. it was actually a pretty nice battle in my eyes. you've elevated alot~*

.LadyMarmalade.
07-14-2003, 09:25 PM
thanx, i appreciate that alot,

uppin'

THE TRUTH
07-14-2003, 09:36 PM
she didn't get to RIDE everythign she said. No, she hasn't!

E

CaRaMeLLa
07-14-2003, 09:40 PM
^^triflin

THE TRUTH
07-14-2003, 09:50 PM
very.......do you have a problem wit it? RIDE (E)verything.....or nothing at all......

UPPIN FOR VOTES PPLS.

StIlL__ILLer
07-14-2003, 10:03 PM
damn what a battle

CaRaMeLLa
07-14-2003, 10:44 PM
...okay? what about the vote? we really wanna get this ova and done with, for real for real~*

.LadyMarmalade.
07-14-2003, 11:02 PM
^ yup yup

SiLLy iLL
07-14-2003, 11:40 PM
Weak battle.. Blah.. sawl good

Punches-...
Multies-...
Wordplay-Caramella
Flow-GQ
Structure-GQ

w/e.. vote=Queen..

Good job both... =\

.LadyMarmalade.
07-14-2003, 11:46 PM
3-4 uppin'

MamiMika
07-15-2003, 01:28 PM
wow this gon be real close!

.LadyMarmalade.
07-15-2003, 06:25 PM
yeah, lol, ok ive been gone for a whole day, and no votes, what is this? lol UPPIN!!

.Inphinite.
07-15-2003, 07:11 PM
vote - Caramella......

good verses from both femcees, enjoed reading both of em....

vored for Caramella coz she had some better punches and some slightly better word-play... aslo felt her verse flowed better too.....

GQ had a good verse but Mellas was better.....

CaRaMeLLa
07-16-2003, 12:18 AM
thanx, Nuk (lol) appreciate~*

*Well, that about does it, girlie. Very close battle. I hope we get to go at it again sumtime~*

*WuN

.LadyMarmalade.
07-16-2003, 01:06 AM
yup yup, nice battle :)
congrads
~1~

NFURNO
07-16-2003, 03:24 AM
*walks in and throws a pineapple at queen and walks out*

ViCeMoB
07-16-2003, 07:40 AM
^^^haha

.LadyMarmalade.
07-16-2003, 01:14 PM
LOL
meanie
:p

.Inphinite.
07-17-2003, 03:58 PM
Lol at Vision...... y?????.....:confused: