==RULES==
20 line minimum... 32 line max....
No biting. dickryding, crew votes (unless well explained), playing off verses, hating, beef votes and all tha usual stuff
First to 8... or 5-0 tko
All votes must be explained WELL
50 post limit count to vote
ANYONE FROM THA SITE CAN VOTE as long as its well explained and fits in with tha other rules
Voting ends when a winner is declared...
CHECK IN by Thursday 17th July, 11:59 CST
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Reason why Truth is here: Because of tha one vote... and mainly it would be hugely against tha spirit of tha tourney if someone who has lost was able to progress... this isn't Rapmusic.com lol And hes not tha type ta turn down a challenge hehe

Reason why FT is here: Me and two off-site people voted on it (Yur Worst Enemy doesn't seem to be around)... but before i got a chance to vote they both picked I'm Pissed marginally. So that seemed fine by me and Denz seemed to agree with tha idea... so thats why.

Both come ill... do yaselves and tha site proud!

PZ>

checkin

good luck truth

checkity check.........good luck to you to as you attempt to annihalate truth with deadly lyrics and such....see you in the verses.

^^lol....

Droppin...

Like Tarzan home from holiday, I’ll send you back to the ropes
After this show I’ll 'have you in stitches', without cracking a joke
You lacking a flow badly, you’re no match for my complexity
you can’t get a bitch, so you ‘tied the knot’ through a vasectomy
accept defeat…… you’re just a product of defective genes
and after this… you’ll be ‘losing face’, like nasal leprosy!
step to me?!?! ……Bitch I’ll rip out your entire cardiac
and with a flow like yours…… you need to resit the ‘bar’ exam*
I’ll cause a heart attack, ya punches older than artifacts
I’d surpassed the level your at now, before I started rap
I’m harder than ya section, leave ya head severed quickly
You comin’ like a chronic liar, cuz you just ‘cant level with me’
bitch you’ll never rip me, you ain’t real like myths and fables
this kids more ‘yellow bellied’ than Homer Simpson’s navel
I’ll leave this kid unstable, battling me ya risking death
I’ll mangle ya vocals til your ‘talking hoarse’ like Mr Ed
this fucking bitch is dead, it’s like you got worms at every battle
You’ve had plenty of ‘servings’, but you haven’t got any ‘phatter’
Pissed’ll end this matter, snap ya neck and damage your health
Like cruise in a few good men, you just ‘can’t handle yourself’**


didnt have much time to type it up, so you'll haveta find the multis and some of the wordplay yourselves....kind of a new stlye coz im working towards audio, i think it flows better....tell me whatcha think if your familiar with the old stlye (mainly for the start of the verse.....it wasnt as up to scatch at the end)

ummm

* = truth's a lawyer, the bar exam is what lawyers gotta sit before they can practise

** = yknow that famous line "You can't handle the truth!" - it's in the movie a few good men and its directed at tom cruise's character

editted coz i forgot these^^

pz, and good luck truth

Thanks for your luck, playah playah...I'll post up in a second or two.

I feel you changin yuh style to suit audio more. That's noble. And I'm not a lawyer yet.

dang...well ummmm....just pretend it says "you're gunna fail the bar exam" then lol

^lol that was nice fam good job

Eh yo Truth computer actin madd gay so give him till 12:00 today to post his verse he say he sorry...and also for tha delay he say he'll reward im pissed wit a free vote so yea thats it...Im out
~1~

thanks fer the info^^

its cool by me ta give him a day more, dont worry bout the vote

^do you have msn messenger cuz i got the whole crews but yours

Too many babies be “pissy”, they fuckin’ wit God
24 hour delay, no more waiting, we start
The verses wit flow, I’m the first to know, who blows
Who get hit low, who the fuckin’ novice and, who the pro
Get in my knowledge-gym, it’s bullshit you pushin’
Solid opposition, I’m pimpin’ portions of yuh style out
Made me wylde out on you wit my chrome tipped hollows
Who’s the winner? Votes for you—y’all never spot those, talk to the lawyer
Civil suits and criminal charges, I’m heartless, toiled
As Truth, soiled yuh boots (shitty), I don’t blame you
Never a leader, you always followed: Nullifiers
That’s why I’m, applyin’, verbal pressure to yuh dome wit iron
Too many liars told you that you better than Truth (MCD you bitch)
And so you drop first, my Glock burst and ends the whole of yuh crew
Always: watch for signs of, Messiahs, automatically
Findin’ themselves in the finals, especially when it’s me
Yuh rhymes are garbage, yuh “pissy” diapers need changin’
I flip it, battle’s no different, settled remainders
That I easily, change the “I” after the “P” make you a “pussy”
Wet you wit Teks and fuck you wit bullets, I’m God
Ten Commandments of Rhymes are mine, burnin’ bushes
Where I’m burnin’ pussy; you suckin’ “pissy” dicks that’s crooked
Two more lines, evaluate the two minds that just battled
Think back, voterz, what he wrote and what I wrote— “Yo Truth is better!”

I rustled up a quick audio for the above. Just as practice.

LO-FIDELITY FILE (http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=465318&q=Lo)

Because I did this so quick the lo should be fine or you could do the:

HI-FIDELITY (http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=465318&q=Hi)

Wun from the God. I need feedback in how to elevate in audio.

If votings open for everyone, then i'll cast my vote

Like Tarzan home from holiday, I’ll send you back to the ropes
After this show I’ll 'have you in stitches', without cracking a joke
^^ ok opener...not too hard hitting

You lacking a flow badly, you’re no match for my complexity
you can’t get a bitch, so you ‘tied the knot’ through a vasectomy
^^ so so diss...nice wordplay though

accept defeat…… you’re just a product of defective genes
and after this… you’ll be ‘losing face’, like nasal leprosy!
^^ lol nice diss

step to me?!?! ……Bitch I’ll rip out your entire cardiac
and with a flow like yours…… you need to resit the ‘bar’
exam*
^^ good diss...good wordplay

I’ll cause a heart attack, ya punches older than artifacts
I’d surpassed the level your at now, before I started rap
^^ ok diss

I’m harder than ya section, leave ya head severed quickly
You comin’ like a chronic liar, cuz you just ‘cant level with me’
^^ nice

bitch you’ll never rip me, you ain’t real like myths and fables
this kids more ‘yellow bellied’ than Homer Simpson’s navel
^^ not that hard hitting but funny

I’ll leave this kid unstable, battling me ya risking death
I’ll mangle ya vocals til your ‘talking hoarse’ like Mr Ed
^^ lol nice diss

this fucking bitch is dead, it’s like you got worms at every battle
You’ve had plenty of ‘servings’, but you haven’t got any ‘phatter’
^^ nice

Pissed’ll end this matter, snap ya neck and damage your health
Like cruise in a few good men, you just ‘can’t handle yourself’**
^^ good diss...not that hard but still good

Wordplay - 4/5
Punches - 3/5
Personals-3/5
Multi's - 3/5
Overall -13 /20 didnt think you did your best in this verse.


Too many babies be “pissy”, they fuckin’ wit God
24 hour delay, no more waiting, we start
^^ interestin start...so-so diss

The verses wit flow, I’m the first to know, who blows
Who get hit low, who the fuckin’ novice and, who the pro
^^ ok diss....good multi's though

Get in my knowledge-gym, it’s bullshit you pushin’
Solid opposition, I’m pimpin’ portions of yuh style out
^^ nice diss, like the wordplay

Made me wylde out on you wit my chrome tipped hollows
Who’s the winner? Votes for you—y’all never spot those, talk to the lawyer
^^ lol...nice

Civil suits and criminal charges, I’m heartless, toiled
As Truth, soiled yuh boots (shitty), I don’t blame you
^^ ...so- so diss

Never a leader, you always followed: Nullifiers
That’s why I’m, applyin’, verbal pressure to yuh dome wit iron
^^ interestin personal

Too many liars told you that you better than Truth (MCD you bitch)
And so you drop first, my Glock burst and ends the whole of yuh crew
^^ ok diss

Always: watch for signs of, Messiahs, automatically
Findin’ themselves in the finals, especially when it’s me
^^ not much of a diss...

Yuh rhymes are garbage, yuh “pissy” diapers need changin’
I flip it, battle’s no different, settled remainders
^^ i like the name play

That I easily, change the “I” after the “P” make you a “pussy”
Wet you wit Teks and fuck you wit bullets, I’m God
^^ lol tight personal...decent wordplay

Ten Commandments of Rhymes are mine, burnin’ bushes
Where I’m burnin’ pussy; you suckin’ “pissy” dicks that’s crooked
^^ nice diss...tight lol

Two more lines, evaluate the two minds that just battled
Think back, voterz, what he wrote and what I wrote— “Yo Truth is better!”
^^ not the best way of endin a battle...but interesting

Wordplay - 3.5/5
Punches - 3/5
Personals-4/5
Multi's - 3/5
Overall - 13.5/20 i thought the personals were tight...thats what won it for me

fav truth line
That I easily, change the “I” after the “P” make you a “pussy”
Wet you wit Teks and fuck you wit bullets,

fav pissed line
accept defeat…… you’re just a product of defective genes
and after this… you’ll be ‘losing face’, like nasal leprosy!

Close battle though...

mmmmmm hmmmmm.....

nfurno my msn is im_pissed03@hotmail.com

well, you dont have to accept it, just my opinion...

peace

Punches - I'm Pissed
Personals - Truth
Multi's - Tie
Meta4z - I'm Pissed
Flow - I'm Pissed
Wordplay - I'm Pissed
Creativity/originality - I'm Pissed

Overall Vote - I'm Pissed

OBLIVION:

i WOULD LIKE YOU TO AWARD THIS TOURNEY TO PISSY. I HAVE GOOD REASONING FOR YOU DOING SO.

Thanks for your time.

eh? youve alreadly got your verse in though mate....why not let the votes run in?

thanks to the voters,

1-1

i know something you don't know Pissed......it's impossible for me to win....YOU WIN

why is it impossible? If youre getting at something like dickriding or favouritism, im more than happy to take it to a neutral site where neither of us are known....

he just^ scared he's gonna lose...
i say keep it goin and i'ma keep it alive:

pissed... peeped ur semi-final match first
and though i thought mcd beat u, ur verse
was fuckin tight as hell- i was very impressed
u've elevated...this^ spit was aight, fav line:

"I’ll cause a heart attack, ya punches older than artifacts
I’d surpassed the level your at now, before I started rap"

-just funny and i like the punch

overall, much better before, but u can see
the cleverness in ur wordplay and each line
is tryin to diss, which is the main point...

truth... not sure how u really got to the finals,
so i'ma go back after i vote and see ur other shit....
ur verse spelled BASIC for the most part:

"The verses wit flow, I’m the first to know, who blows
Who get hit low, who the fuckin’ novice and, who the pro"

-weak rhymes....

^ur rhymes were all over the place and hard to follow...
punches were forced, accompanied by simple
wordplay....never caught the flow, saw the persy's,
just wasnt impressed....

vote - i'm pissed, in every category

yo, pissed, i think he's trying to back out, so
dont let him, unless ofcourse he's got a better
explanation....................thats what i though..hehehe...
u got this won n e ways, in my opinion its obvious...

n/b- liked ur^ semifinal verse vs. mcd alot better,
this spit's flow was off at times, the rhymes were off i felt...
if u're writin that for audio, i had some trouble trying to flow it.
but u prob flow differently than me, just sayin...

thats it...

peace

long time no see^^

thanks for the vote, yeah this definatley wasnt my best verse......but ah well, thanks for peeping

2-1 me

and thats it.

I'm Pissed is tha champion... congratulations dawh. Put it in ya sig or something lol...

And commiserations to Truth... still - second place is pretty sick.

Good one all round...

PZ>