View Full Version : No Whispers vs. 00pimp
No Whispers 03-19-2003, 10:21 PM rules:
No dickridin' votes/crew votes
First to 3 votes wins, 2-0 is knock out.
6 lines only no more no less...if so automatic lose.
Since u challenged u pick who goes first.
No Whispers 03-19-2003, 10:25 PM Where u at....don't duck..u got 10 minutes to check in or u loose.
00pimp 03-19-2003, 10:29 PM aight, u go
00pimp 03-19-2003, 10:34 PM are u goin, please hurry
sorry to rush but i have to be to work at 9oclock
No Whispers 03-19-2003, 10:42 PM Ayo..
Kid save your rhymes cause they don't come close-to-mine~
I see no spotlight above u, maybe is because cats like u ain't suppose-2-shine~
Don't even reply cause sayin' you got a chance would be life gamblin' lie~
Just take the beatin' like a man and stop that childish ramblin' cry~
And face the fact that your skills are none like your double 0 name~
My shit is hot enough to bubble your game and prove ounce and for all, your shit is below lame~
This is my weakest battle verse yet...u better show u can atleast take my simple tactics.
No Whispers 03-19-2003, 10:50 PM Spit now...son.
00pimp 03-19-2003, 10:55 PM aight coo, u got talent, but check it
i'll saw off yo face and make yo bitch ass walk the plank
and ask how u want yo outline nigga chalk or paint
and where u want yo body found sewer, park, or lake
cause u only sound real when u talk it
u ain't street nigga, so go back chill in yo office
cause that rhyme gonna have me laughin until i'm exhausted
00pimp 03-19-2003, 10:58 PM how do u find out who won
mine was kinda weak
No Whispers 03-19-2003, 11:00 PM People on the site come vote...they say who they give their vote to and why..must be explained in order to count aight.
00pimp 03-19-2003, 11:01 PM i gotta bounce, they closen the computer lab. And kickin every one out
Raven 03-20-2003, 01:01 AM No Whispers:
Kid save your rhymes cause they don't come close-to-mine~
I see no spotlight above u, maybe is because cats like u ain't suppose-2-shine~
Great start and nice wordplay man.
Don't even reply cause sayin' you got a chance would be life gamblin' lie~
Just take the beatin' like a man and stop that childish ramblin' cry~
The first line was good but you slipped on the second, still a good diss though.
And face the fact that your skills are none like your double 0 name~
My shit is hot enough to bubble your game and prove ounce and for all, your shit is below lame~
The second line was a little long so it ruined the flow but flow isn't necessary in a battle. You hit him hard and had great punches. This should've been a longer battle.
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00pimp:
i'll saw off yo face and make yo bitch ass walk the plank
and ask how u want yo outline nigga chalk or paint
Multi at the end there, but there wasn't anythin dissin' him there, you were just tellin' me how you're gonna kill him.
cause u only sound real when u talk it
u ain't street nigga, so go back chill in yo office
cause that rhyme gonna have me laughin until i'm exhausted
Again you're just explainin' how he's fake, you're not really lyrically dissin' him. You have to be clever in these battles if you wanna win. Not just spit the "street" shit.
Overall No Whispers won this by a landslide. He proved himself the better battler and lyrically dissed his ass out.
Vote=No Whispers
Real Niggas 03-20-2003, 02:08 AM whisp won. he had flow....bottom line. he owned!
^^vote d/q 1-0 to whispers...up.
No Whispers 03-20-2003, 03:09 PM Uppin' for votes.
00pimp 03-20-2003, 04:02 PM apresheate the input.
i'll take it into consideration when inprovin my game.
blastinb 03-20-2003, 05:51 PM If you pay attention No Whispers you already knocked OOpimp out. no more votes needed.
sTreet kIng 03-20-2003, 08:43 PM wut tha hell u talkin about b...?
anywayz... This battle wasnt very good at all especially since it was only a 3 bar battle which is rookie. Whispers u should have made it longer... u aint a rookie anymore.
No Whispers
Kid save your rhymes cause they don't come close-to-mine~
I see no spotlight above u, maybe is because cats like u ain't suppose-2-shine~
^^Your best punch but flow wuz off
Don't even reply cause sayin' you got a chance would be life gamblin' lie~
Just take the beatin' like a man and stop that childish ramblin' cry~
^^No punch but flow wuz ok...
And face the fact that your skills are none like your double 0 name~
My shit is hot enough to bubble your game and prove ounce and for all, your shit is below lame~
^^First line had a weak punch...second had none
Overall a pretty weak verse in terms of punches and wordplay. Definitely not ur best...
00Pimp
i'll saw off yo face and make yo bitch ass walk the plank
and ask how u want yo outline nigga chalk or paint
and where u want yo body found sewer, park, or lake ^^Really no punch but a lil wordplay in tha first line...
cause u only sound real when u talk it
u ain't street nigga, so go back chill in yo office
cause that rhyme gonna have me laughin until i'm exhausted
^^Once again no punch and flow wuz off
Overall this was a very basic rookie verse and you broke rhymes into groups of 3 instead of 4 or by bar... No punches, low vocab and wordplay, and a bad rhyme scheme lost this one for you...
Vote: No Whispers
DA_PRISTINE_1 03-21-2003, 04:46 PM NW's verse was better than the last one that i peeped.......
good multis....
no real good punches...
flow was ehhhhh
the other dude was wack as hell
is this shit contagious or what..
no punches...
disses were like BLAH...
and flow was ehhhhhhhh
no multis...
vote NW...easily...
Prestige....
No Whispers 03-21-2003, 06:23 PM Thanx I'm not really that elevated...so I gotta work in my flow..I won.
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