ok, no crew/dickridin/or hate votes
10-12 lines *short, i know* due by tomorrow midnight
chill..i'll spit first

This kid was serious, when he said he wanted to battle.. kids these days..

..: **Enters Victim, door slams** :..

What afraid? afraid of bein maimed by words lyrically played, suffered from your main-frame insane like afghans in airline planes?//
Deranged? nah just well-trained became sane to carry my reign in vain from faggots like you who hold no name//

Puttin you in hostile conditions.. renditions of wack rap definitions.. no fun.. its business//
Like straight men in prison.. you aint winnin, big men on you pinnin, sayin bear it while grinnin.. impossible missions, openin you like split fission.. well you get tha vison//

..: On with tha carnival :..

Scope-this dopeness.. hangin you would be that only way you'd know what the ropes-is.. I'd try to help you, but face it, your hopeless//
Lost like fish in oceans.. its like im comin wit 90 mph fastballs and your swingin in slow motions, lyrics so tight they give u an extreme case of claustrophobic//

your like ja rules acting.. "Half Past Dead".. shoulda cast em.. givin you 20 minutes to spit cuz you couldn't Last ten//
Like pretend, hes a fast-trend.. started off good now at his trash-end.. shouldn't have accepted.. onto tha next leave him in the last thread//

..: One last thrill-seeker :..

Geez, now this kid believes that you ane me dont belong in the same league..ima say this once.. you suck! cant you read? servin you wit silver platters//
Glass shatters on wannabe rappers puttin you ashame wit vets in silent laughters.. i win.. and metallica said it best "Nothing Else Matters//

ok uppin for ur spit...

haha. for sum reason, you remind me of Emi. nice verse. uppin for "miss_attitude's" verse. hope she could do betta than what i've seen (whoa)~*

*WuN

lol well she got like 24 hours to post, so im good.

hey you thougth i wouldnt reply/ you thought wen i heard your ryme ide hit sky high/ shut up it wasnt that good/ stop complimenting your self/ just cauz every one else cud-ent you bent/ thats why i went/ but hey i had to reply.. you all thought i was being a wimp/that i was ascred of a pimp/ well guess wat ?/ im not/ there see i came bak to giv your ass a virtual ass kickin/ and while im flicking yol this must / his there licking his mums puss/ my rymes are the talk of the century/ and yours are are last century/ your rymes r old they should already be in a cemetry/

and your spittin' is obserd /and im sure the people will agree u cant unuder stand a mother fuckin word/ cauz it sounds like a mother fuckin burd/ and no i dont mean hevenly i mean the sqeak and the sqark your a mother fuckin dork/


and your a loser/ your mums a bitch and your daddys a booser/

and i dont care if im new/ and so wat if i lose/ i'll take you and your hole fuckin crew/ my problem is i have no pride/ wen some one challlenged me i cried/ and just now i lied/ haha

you think i care ? thats why im miss_atittude / it cauz i have no sypathy and no grattitude/ and if you mess with me i'll ge tyou sue'd/ and boe'd- of stage/ till your full of temper and full of rage/then you and my fist will have a marriage/ i'll make you too become one / then i can bend over and you can kiss my bum/ thats wat i say to you and your crew/ cauz all this battling you makes me wanna spew!!!!!!!!!!

U GO GIRL!!!!.....er.....boyz can come right??

lol ok im going to write this as if i was looking at it and voting, even tho it doesnt count, this is just how i feel about your rhymes....

the whole first paragraph was about how I was givin myself compliments, well I scrolled up and didnt see SHIT! lol i was just uppin for your verse. and i never said you werent going to spit, the due date was tonight at midnight neways lol, so i was rushin nething

the 2nd paragraph...hmm...maybe is you actually read it, then you wouldve understood it, lol, mine might not be all quik like urs but its goes deeper. obviously youre not capable of that.

the 3rd paragraph~did you really feel the need to bring my family in it? you dont know SHIT about me or my family, PLUS you was battleing ME NOT MY MOM AND DAD! so save that for battling your own self, cuz u wont get nowhere on RW with talking about peoples parents, you just dont know....

the 4th paragraph, you dont really care if you loose but you could stil take my whole crew....makes no since, since im in my crew and if you loose then you obviously didnt 'take me' did you? lol so if you cant take me, then how you gunna take muh crew?

5th paragraph.........::tubleweed rolls by:::....................

overall seemed like you was tryin to hard to make everything to rhyme and instead you came up with some whack rhymes...but hey someone out there might like em so im sure youll get some votes, at least you came tho hun, and you won tgo under my list for a no show. oh and by the way, in ur rhymes you said him, he, all that stuff, well this is kinda in the female battle arena, dont you think that IM FEMALE! just something to ponder about....UPPIN FOR VOTES!

baby how laaarge...i'm drunk....*burP*

i will hav to say that teeny had the best verse her verse was so good , u r rly good ur use of multis was amazin ur word play was cool ah guys what can i say i liked everythin about tweenys verse what more could u ask for i did not likt the verse much i jus thort that teenys was alot better


paece

my vote teeny

teeny u madd good girl VOTE = TEENY (NEED IT SAY MORE)

2-0 UPPIN

no its, 1-0, no crew votes, sry lori thanx tho

punches-teeny
flow-teeny
wordplay-teeny
everything-teeny

miss attitude u shoulda started wit some more punches in ur first paragraph instead of jus talkin bout how teeny complimented herself. good rest of it tho jus not as good as teenys.

vote-teeny

now its 2-0 uppin

iite iite... this how i see it::

TEENY:: had more and better punches, multis, and flow was pretty decent.
Punches-8/10
Multis-7/10
wordplay-8/10
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23/30
Over all verse was nyce, some played ish, some orginal ish. try to add harder hitin punches tho


Miss attitude:: ya verse was too simplistic.... you shoud of had more punches and multis etc.
punches-6/10
multis-6/10
wordplay-5//10
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17/30... needa alot of work on ya verse, but youl get it evntually, just keep practicin an what not

VOTE=TEENY

~KAL

guess this is y attitude is a thugged out ryda aint it?? sry, wasnt saying that to be seriously mean but tor is trash, attitude i think u should get outta that crew, it gives everyone a bad name and rep, and u wont get much help from many other emcees in this site if ur in it. u would get a lot better adn get more help on getting better if u werent in that crew. no beef with attitude, lots of beeef with TOR tho. good battle. teeny i think u took it girl. way to rep. uppin for votes on this battle.

kickz i wannac battle u...since u'r so (good)




faGGOT

biatch , u wanna battle challenge me in the challengers place not in the femcee arena. dumbass, freeposting, wanna be thug, biotch.

i know the battle is over and all, but i wanna give mah 2 cents (at thelast minute)
iight,
Teeny hit hard, but ladies wheres the bar structure at?
thats what youre both missin, Teeny, you had a real nice verse

Miss Attitude
You need to do alot of elevatin, some of your disses and rhymes are maaad whack, if you need any help id be glad to help ya and all,
you had an iight verse, id give maybe a 5/10 if not less, sorry just my opinion
holla netime

good job to both ladies
my vote wouldve been teeny

3-0 KO good battle attitude, elevate and then come at me again iight?

pussy shit

who?

ignore the rookie, good job teeny....

lol

fuck you mighty mouse

i did not know what the littel box was for

right.... smh, damn rookies, got a problem, do somethin, ya know where challengers is...

free post somewhere else