View Full Version : Furik vs. GhettoQueenlori
Furik 07-18-2003, 01:43 AM Rules!!!!
1. 5-10 bars
2. No feedin/Crew votes
3. 3-0 KO If no KO first to 5 wins
4. Explained votes PLZ!!
5. Verses due 24 hours after check in
Now it's set.......shall I spit first
*thinkin'*
~Furik~
Furik 07-18-2003, 04:23 AM Aiight.....Checkin and Spittin'!!!!
I invision bitches listenin' as I spit incisions wit intentions
of leavin' no witnesses to defy destiny's decision//
Most like dis chick, hopin'-and-wishin' I didn't spit so much shyt
I'm Roc-a-wear wit-venom downsizin' denim, killin' dis LEVI Chick//
GhettoQueen, more like fiend, Ima sew ya asshole to ya seams
Bust ya shyt open wide, go inside and email da world ya dreams//
Mark dis down as a tragedy that never sadden me but I'm gladly
postin' hot shyt while you wackly throwin wrappings back at me//(wrappings=Rappings)
Shreddin' yo whole existence, in a instant, consistent-wit goin da distance
I don hacked into yo system, crashed yo shyt, and stole ya whole identity//
I guess you'd call this your induction of repercussions for challengin' to battle wit me
how you gon battle optimistically wit a glass that 's half empty//*Furik pushes glass off table*
wit no identity, ya shyt's empty, I'ma finish dis beatin' eatin up both "Self" and "Esteem"
which means-things have just been kicked to da highest level for Extreme Killing Sprees//
Standin face-to-face wit da queen's esteem servin' dat ass wit multiple eulogies
figured I'll put da shyt where it fit in one of Freddy's Nightmar-ish dreams//
and see how you do against a real killer who wouldn't die in 7 flicks
BEWARE!!! YOU MIGHT AS WELL GON N SWALLOW CAUSE YOU AIN'T 'BOUT SPIT OUT SHYT!!!!
Furik 07-18-2003, 04:59 AM Uppin for yo Verse!!!!
Karnage 07-18-2003, 01:44 PM whoooo...Furik, you illed that shit, I respect ur battling skills son. Good shit.
GhettoQueenLori 07-18-2003, 01:52 PM i told u to pm me before u set it up aight ima spit it soon...
CREW VOTES WILL COUNT IF EXPLAINED WELL!!!!
GhettoQueenLori 07-18-2003, 02:13 PM READ THA WHOLE VERSE DONT JU STOP IN THA MIDDLE!!!!!
furick- girl how u do tha colors?? lol good verse hope this beats it:
listen im'a take my knife n "slit yo throat"
Im'a have u swimin in yo own blood n "hope u croak"
im'a leave u paralized n put u in a hme fo tha "metle folk"
cuz afta im done wit u, u is gonna be "scarred to sleep"
im'a cut off yo limbs n watch them float down tha "riva in a heep"
so hold yo breath cuz im a "bout to cut deep"
ima pop a cap n leave a "hole in yo head"
ima have every one dat know u sayin " HA HA SHES DEAD"
aint "no body love you" aint "no body wana roll wit u"
so ima go "do how i do" n "leave u" tah "get coo"
you need alla da "help u can get"
cuz everyone around you had "enough of yo shit"
jus like fitty its easy ta "love me"
its all becuz of the lord n the great "heavens above me"
its so great how god lef me "lyrically Blessed"
so bitch step back before i "leave u messed"
ima have u beggin fo yo life befor i pop a cap in yo "fake chest"
ima have all yo sdilicon "drippin loose"
u gonna go cryin to ya momma n sip on yo "juicy juice"
you aint eva gonna beat me so "whuts to use"
everytime u gets in trouble u go "crying to yo momma"
you a fake bitch dat knows "nuffin but drama"
dayum girl how u jack up yo face u look like the bin laden "OSAMA"
need i say more u see how fake this slut is
so bitch listen up from now on stay in yo own biz
so peace n one love im done wit this
UPPIN FO VOTES!!!!!!!
GhettoQueenLori 07-18-2003, 02:27 PM ohh yea and one more thing..... crew votes will only count if it is explained thuroughly!
~Eclipse~ 07-18-2003, 03:28 PM iight this is up to Furik whether you count this vote, bein crew an all so i'll try to explain it!!
Originally posted by Furik
Most like dis chick, hopin'-and-wishin' I didn't spit so much shyt
I'm Roc-a-wear wit-venom downsizin' denim, killin' dis LEVI Chick//
this was a very tight line but as far as gettin into a verse goes, my vote (if accepted) goes to Lori.
Furik was a hot as hell but Lori had an extra edge to her disses. i really liked both verses to this battle, and both of you have elevated a lot.
quotes i really liked from LOri were:
it's so great how god left me lyrically blessed
so bit** step back before i leave you messed//
and
ima have all yo silicon drippin loose
yo gonna go cryin to yo mama n sip on yo juicy juice//
Loris verse made me laugh an also dissed Furik well.
was a very good battle from both though
i'll understand if you dont count this, its up to Furik really!
Peace to both gurls
Mighty 07-18-2003, 03:31 PM im not votin, but im here to give some advice. Pretty tight both ways, but Lori try not to use ima as much, it messed up your flow, but props to both and good luck wit the votes....
Scitzo 07-18-2003, 03:50 PM Furik's verse makes me feel "patriotic" all over again...BUT THE GIRL IS A KILLAH WITH DA WERDPLAY!!!
I was like all hype in my seat and shit when I read ur piece. Very nice punches that straight killed that chic. Lori, you were aight, but not enough to get my vote#
VOTE: Furik
PeAcE
Scitz*
.LadyMarmalade. 07-19-2003, 03:23 PM -blinks-
ok this battle was....complicated
you both tried to be complex, but that ddint work out too well, furik, you ttried way way to hard to make your verse complex and barely used multies, and bar structure needs some work
lori,
i think you tried to make it look complex with the " " at the end of yo lines, (maybe its me)
both were decent enough verses but loris made more sence, and it hit harder and better, cuz furiks was mad confusing, (nice colors tho)
vote-lori
better punchlines and flow,
~1~
GhettoQueenLori 07-19-2003, 04:43 PM aight im gonna use alla yall advice dont worry im gettin better! 2-1 Me UPPIN!!!
SiLLy iLL 07-19-2003, 05:18 PM Y'all is wack.. -cough- Lol.. sawl good.. uhmm, Wack shit from both of ya.. but Furik Took it tho.. w/e..
Lol.. jp, was nice.. y'all did aigh.. Furik had an overall better verse.. yup yup.. uhmm Peace.. WuN HunDriT.. =]
Furik=My Vote...
Bobbyhustle 07-19-2003, 05:59 PM dont know if rooks can vote...jus here to view and i like em both. my girl "furik" was nice...i think she should win, but i caint jus vote cuz we tight i guess....and as lori... jus want to tell lori her verse was good too, but to definitely work on bar structure...good luck to yall....oh yeah peep me in bobbyhustle vs. dominox5000 and witness a st. valentines day massacre..holla
.LadyMarmalade. 07-19-2003, 06:13 PM umm i think furik is the one that needs to work on bar structure, loris bars were righton da dot..
GhettoQueenLori 07-19-2003, 10:08 PM umm.... 2-2 UPPIN
GhettoQueenLori 07-21-2003, 11:27 AM 2-2 UPPIN C'MON YALL DONT SLEEP ON DIS!!!!! VOTE!!!
Furik 07-21-2003, 01:56 PM Aiight, I've been away for a while...but I will say this....UUUPPPPIIINNNNN!!!!! 2-2
Furik 07-21-2003, 02:00 PM And as for crew votes.......i did put in the rules No Crew votes, but it is my understandin that these rules are not always followed.....and being I'm the only femcee within the Skilled Assassins, where does that leave me? Let's leave the crew votes out of this one. Make it fair!!! My boi (BobbyHustle) didn't vote for me cause he my boi and that wouldn't be fair, so NO CREW VOTES!!!!!!!!!
Furik 07-21-2003, 02:01 PM 2-1..........If there is great opposition to this then we'll just leave it and next time I will write the shit in BIG read LETTERS!!
._.Lady.Sage._. 07-21-2003, 03:18 PM furik- came hard in her verses, they was complex but not to the point where they couldnt be understood, i like ya style, ya lines was ill
lori- she didnt come as hard as furik, her lines was funny but some of them i wasnt feelin, the style was young-maybe its just me, but it coulda been better
my vote=FURIK
GhettoQueenLori 07-21-2003, 03:29 PM crew votes count as long as explained well!..... there for its 3-2 furic UPPIN!
MamiMika 07-21-2003, 04:09 PM ^^^UNH HUH!!!!!
my vote goes ta GhettoQueenLori cas of tha better structure n flow
furik yo verse was tight girl but i think lori did better.
keep doin ya thang ladies!!!!!!!!
o n yall confooosin me like KRAZZI!!!!!!(not wit tha verses but wit all tha comments.....huh?!?!?)
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Furik 07-22-2003, 07:44 AM I guess there was opposition.....Even tho da damn rules say.....No Feeding/Crew Votes........O well, If that's how yall do it then why make rules.
GhettoQueenLori 07-22-2003, 01:48 PM 3-3 UPPIN!
Kickz 07-22-2003, 03:18 PM i aint gonna vote because of rule i jus set wit TSA. i liked both verses. both girls have great skill and had very sick verses. good job ladies, good luck wit the votes. good luck babe.
GhettoQueenLori 07-22-2003, 03:20 PM ^^ thanx hun..... 3-3 UPPIN FO VOTES
Royalty 07-23-2003, 12:15 AM ...Azerdae Thoughts...
1.Good stuff from both of you..
2.Creative punches and schemes..
3.Constent flow not iffuy..
4.Who Won?
lol well i believe this was a great battle pushed amongst both of you... Lori girlie you did good...hun...but i feel that your opening was decnt but Furik hit just a tad bit harder,,,..so
Vote- Furik
Great job Hunnie
Peace,
Azerdae!
Furik 07-23-2003, 12:18 AM 4-3 UPPIN!!!!!!!!
N.S.T.E.D 07-24-2003, 04:20 AM YO......YOU LADIES SPIT SOME HOT BARS....
YALL KEEP THAT REALSPITTA SHIT GOIN'
VOTE: FURIK
SHE CAME OFF WITH SOME TIGHT PUNCHES AND WORDPLAY FOR DAYS..
=EVEN THOUGH THE FIRST COUPLE OF LINES SOUND REALLY FAMILIAR?????(WINK)
YALL KEEP DOING LIKE LIKE YALL DOIN' AND STAY UP SHORTIES....
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GhettoQueenLori 07-24-2003, 02:11 PM FURIK U WIN GOOD JOB!
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