Rules:

1. 10-12 bars (1 bar is 2 lines)
2. No feeding off verses
3. First to 5 wins, 3-0 KO
4. Explain votes


POST MUST BE MADE BY MIDNIGHT ON TUESDAY OR YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED!!!!!

mk i'll drop lata, im goin to the lake for tha day wif sum of muh peepz. i'll drop when i get home

mk, ima drop, cuz i dont wanna do it last minute, checkin in....droppin....

Furik couldnt unlock the door to sucess if the 'key maker' from the matrix gave you the key/
she would never have word usage on her mind, even when on her head she balances a dictionary/

this kid duck tapes tampax to her back thinkin the wings will help her career 'take off'/
cause if your skill could be measered in speed, then people would have a better chance recruiting a sloth/

your bound to suck, like slappin a bucket of blood in front of a starved leech/
touching the monitor to lay your palms on my verse to finally state 'a win is in reach'/

her rhyme are like mini me measuring up to shaq, she cant step next to this/
face it you wouldn't get your verse to turn heads freestyling to the girl from the exorcist/

your ego has grown to big, your picturing your self as the ultimate big boss/
yet even if i strapped handle bars to your head, your mind couldnt 'grip the reality you lossed'/

Me you tested, and you I lyrically bested, you so bad, I havin’ you arrested/
But for real, you bein charged by little boys claimin it was them you molested/

Don’t Resent this, especially when you comin at me defenceless/
No dissent on these polls, I comin at ya Relentless and bout to knock you Senseless/

You thought your “one man army” could compete, but shit my rhymes complete and solid as concrete/
You won’t be able to defeat, I’m comin as strong as the “U.S. Naval Fleet”, better retreat
Before I start bringin some heat, splittin you apart makin you discrete/

doing this shit, man, your an embassesment to your nation/
you need toi give it up while you can and select a new occupation/

its danger..Ill stick ya dead body in an alley..cause this cat is trash/
im not trying..your skills wouldnt be current if it was cash/

ya bash..you weak like days..No1 can figure ya rhyme scheme out like a maze/
ya cant figure ya self like A-Mase..but this cat think she knows HOP when her HIP sways/

ya hang with gays..this nicca wouldnt be fully protected if was norton antivirus/
im bios..you lil prick..one slip..ill have killed n The Real World like syrus/

I murdered you before this was posted, now you're just vapors today/
The darts-I-spit, arsenic turnin' ya grandkids' skin into paper mache/

You handed-this to the top candidate, while you bannished-in ya PRIMARY, not even penciled in/
You can't pull a new hoax, with bars full of GLUCOSE, you need to stop tryin to get strong off INSULIN/

The post above are whack cause sayin your more than dull is a STRETCH/
With words beyond bein played your starting to make the Mullet look FRESH/


ok uppin for your spit, lol want this to be over, wun

checkin i will drop lata.....

I will write this real simple for those who are easily confused!!

Say dog, check this out......*yellin back at Lyrical*

*WARM-UP*

Have you ever seen a chick pumped up to get slumped up//
Shot wit shells of hot shyt that'll blow her life up//

This is aint no game, bytch so why ya turnin da fuckin heat up//
Ima smother ya ass quick teach ya speech not to buck da fuck up//

Back down while you still got da chance, while ya still own ya life//
Fuck this votin shit.....let's gon handle this shit right//

Aint nobody gon save ya ass cause I'ma hide da body when I'm don//
I came prepared for dis mission, brought a rope, a bag and a gun//

I got sixteen in da clip and 1 in da chamber if ya wanna try n run//
But I must warn ya I'ma sharp shooter rarely miss when I aim one//

So my advice to you would be zig-zag threw this whole damn verse//
if ya run straight 4 of 'em is gon get cha guaranteed that it'll hurt//

When I catch ya my gun's done, now my knife's gettin to work//
after this you should spit better, cause ya shyt can't get no worse//

Why you even in dis shyt, bytch we don't even need your verse//
Now dat I think about it how can you spit when ain't been exhumed from the dirt//
Maybe da Prophet boys ova there can explain how that shit spposed to work//




*Jump-Off*

You a pot mouth trout, that spit hot sticks and stems//
you couldn't blow-up if I smoked ya or if you was fuckin' Eminem//

How many know a SpIcE GiRl that rather spit than swallow//
You doin a lil of both cause my lyrical blows'll leave ya whole mouth hallow//

Sad to say, Teeny's da next victim, watch me skin dis bytch alive//
You got a five-bar head start, judgin ya rhymes, ain't no where to hide//

You run duckin between buildings, i'll pull da heat-seeka to get cha//
Pull da trigga back, "Kristyle" spit 5 rounds aimed, they hit-cha//
Split-cha//

No way to ID her cause her head's been dismembered//
You think I'm kiddin I collected and kept all 8 of her fingers//

And both thumbs//
You want some, get some, CAN ANYBODY DETINATE THE ASSASSINS H-BOMB?//

*Cool Off*~>Not!!!

See what I'ma do is raise da roof wit ya throat (wait)
Don't choke, I aint don yet, I found YOU a beam and some rope//

Let me hang ya ass to drain like ya called da wrong damn house
I wrote my name in ya stomach and da cops still aint figured it out//

Now ya team comin' at me pissed off, foamin at da mouth
cause I took Teeny, somebody must've left that prophecy out//

Yall know.......we so underated in dis bytch
*Teeny's Verse* blah blah blah blah just a bunch of bull shit//

Soon as she open her mouth, I snatch and grab her tongue real quick//
Slice it up da middle, then chop it off and feed her dat shit//

I won't run, I'll walk off calm to my nigga $wipa posted-up wit a gun
He pickin you hoes off one-by-one now aint this how yall wanted to do this HUN//

You can sit and pitch a fit, but this is where real flowas spit
But since ya came anyway, put in yo 2 cent and suck $wipa's DIC//


Gotcha $wipa~>:)

Both broke rules...too long girls...this tourney is turning into a free for all with crew votes, and rule breaking....c'mon ladies, get it together...

too long? the rulez say 10-15 bars and mine was 15 barz, im not breakin the rulez, furik went 20, its all good tho, hers was still hot, good spit FURIK....uppin for votes

10-12 Bars darling...

oh damn, neever mind, it was kinda 12 barz max tho wasnt it? lol WELL! FUCK the rules *right furik?* lol damn i need to go back to kindergarden to read/write/spell WHATEVER! also, lets keep it real in our battle, keep it to know crew votes, and lets see what the other crews/emcee's/femcee's think...alrigt? wun

It's all well and good 'fuckin the rules' as you both broke them, but this ain't just a personal battle, it's a tournement...that's why i said this is becoming a free for all, cos it seems like you ladies are doing whatever you want when it should be a moderated tournament to see what femcees can hang with who....but still, w/e if y'all happy with it then do your thang...I'll wait 2 see what Ms Mack's gotta say before I vote.

Sorry if i'm coming across stuck up about this when y'all just fun loving with it....just don't wanna see a promising tournament go down the drain.

Peace.

Raps were way too long........there are rules for a reason people. I'll leave it up to the other competitors to decide whether or not you two should be disqualified.

Good call...

i mean, we was both having fun, shows you how much we love doin this, dont disqualify us, we dont deserve it, i missread the rules, OH WELL! it happens everynow and then, damn, since its the first battle of the tourney then give us a chance, and hemlock who you supposed to be? a mod? ANYWAYS! she said leave it up to the other competitors, and yet they the ones lettin crew vote...hm...doesnt sound quite fair to me, oh well furik if we get DQ'd then there will be another tourney again :) we'll show em then

does it really matter that both verses were too long, they've both dropped ill stuff and i think ppl should just vote as it is. or you could edit some lines out, i really am against the idea of you both gettin DQed...

thank you

DONT DQ THEM THEY DIDNT REALISE IT WASNT FAIR

No, I'm not a mod...but I give as much effort into every piece of feedback I give...and I came to vote on this, but told y'all you broke the rules and that I was waiting for the mod to make her judgement on the situation AND i was just giving my 2 cents as to that judgement from the mod, cos I personally didn't want 2 see you both get DQ'd, and I think Ms Mack done the fairest thing possible.

Lastly, I told you I didn't wanna seem like I was talking as an authority figure, as it wasn't my place...I was merely stating facts and my opinion. You don't like it, then I won't step a foot in another of your threads.

lol damn cant take a joke, WHATS REALLY GOOD! so wutchu think mack? all the ladies gotta put an input in? or is this cool? and oh by the way, sorry hemlock *muah* better? lol LET ME STOP!

Alright people, let's put an end to this.....we'll let it go this time since they are both rookies. No more exceptions. Let's vote. By the way...the winner of this tourney gets to become a moderator for this forum....good luck

DQ em!!! ..haha, jp.. i dun care.. stay =]

lol oh i see how it is silly lol alright uppin for votes....

did someone shut hemlok up??? i hope so. i wanna vote but yall said no crew. this sux, crew votes are always exempt, but i always vote fairly.

well since we already broke the rules i thought it would only be fair to mack that we at least went with one of the rules *even tho it wasnt posted as a rule* but thats usually like a general rule ya know?

damn this a long ass thread and yet there are no votes! c'mon uppin for votes!

Teeny dropped pretty nice. Some ok meta ideas, but a bit too basic to hit hard. Did have some good punches in places tho, and hit with some originality.

"your bound to suck, like slappin a bucket of blood in front of a starved leech/
touching the monitor to lay your palms on my verse to finally state 'a win is in reach'/"

^ Average meta in the first line. What would've been tight, was if you played off the 'bound to...' aswell, something about tying the leech to her face (bound to-tied to). Clever original punch tho.

"her rhyme are like mini me measuring up to shaq, she cant step next to this/
face it you wouldn't get your verse to turn heads freestyling to the girl from the exorcist/"

^ Maybe a played punch...but I can't recall hearing it before, strangely, so that was quite nice.

"its danger..Ill stick ya dead body in an alley..cause this cat is trash/
im not trying..your skills wouldnt be current if it was cash/"

^ Nice original punch...and kinda nice linking from the 2nd punch...would've been better if you played more on the first line relating trash to something else old..would've made the punch real tight...but still nice as it is.

"I murdered you before this was posted, now you're just vapors today/
The darts-I-spit, arsenic turnin' ya grandkids' skin into paper mache/"

^ nice multis...not a great punch, but nicely dropped.



Furik: To be honest, poor drop. Try to actually diss the opponent, with meta's and wordplay rather than just saying you'll do this and that. There was one bar where you did hit alrite...

"How many know a SpIcE GiRl that rather spit than swallow//
You doin a lil of both cause my lyrical blows'll leave ya whole mouth hallow//"

^ Good original concept. A few more of these and it would've been closer. As it was Teeny murdered this one.

Vote-Teeny.


No offence taken about our 'almost' argument, lol...and hope I didn't offend, just tryin to help cos I don't wanna see this tourney get ruined.

Peace.

Oh..and Kickz, fuck you.

lol ey ey now, lets keep it clean, alright 1-0 uppin

I think Teeny got this win cus she had better punches and actually disses Furik...I didnt feel Furik really disses Teeny but w/e
vote= Teeny

2-0 uppin

yo, just to let yall know what the deal is, im goin out of town till this weekend and dont know which day ima be back, theres no way that i am going to be able to get ahold of comp there, so if any of youz wanna battle me or i make it on to the next round, then yall gunna have to set the due date to one of the weekdays *of next week*, alright, thankies

in the rules it doesnt say crew cant vote therefore im gonna vote--

teeny had a pretty good verse as well as furick but i think that furics verse didnt hit as hard as teeny's did therfore my votes goes to

teeny GOOD JOB BOF FEMCEES

KO to Teeny, tight battle both femcees

Teeny wins her 1st round battle