coolplaya
11-18-2006, 09:56 AM
About time someone made a new story.
Juvie Break
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Name: G, Tedi
Age: 13
Birth Country: Albania
Current Country: Canada
Crime: Hacking mainframe database of popular internet website EBay
Sentence: 50 years without Parole
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Name: Lif, Drapht
Age: 17
Birth Country: Australia
Current Country: Canada
Crime: Assault with a deadly weapon
Sentence: 18 months
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Name: Hoods, Thomas
Age: 15
Birth Country: Australia
Current Country: Canada
Crime: Armed Robbery
Sentence: 6 years
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Name: Das, Omen
Age: 17
Birth Country: Poland
Current Country: Canada
Crime: Millions of counterfeit cash, weapons, movies and artwork
Sentence: Life with possibility of parole
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"How did these kids escape the juvenile facility?" asked Agent Rogers.
"They must have got help from the outside!" cried Agent Mariah, "Trace all phone calls at Uniria Juvenile Facility immediately!"
~ 13 days before ~
"Hahaha”, Tedi said to himself. “Just enter a simple telnet string, and we have access to the EBay database!". Tedi was a very smart boy. He could go to any school he wanted to and had plenty of awards for great achievement on computer technology. Yet he felt he had to prove the world that he was smarter then they thought. He practiced hacking school computers, friend’s computers, and websites. Although nothing could prepare him for this day.
Database... Accessed
"Whoohooo" cheered Tedi. Months of practice had paid off. He got into the EBay database and began searching for the richest people. He quickly hopped off his computer chair and went to get a beer. While opening the fridge, he suddenly heard the door knock. Tedi ran and closed the computer screen and opened the door. The man was well groomed, tall with an average build, and was dressed in a grey suit.
"Well, the CIA, have a warrant to search your house due to complaints about malicious activities happening here." Without hesitation Tedi let the man in. The man seemed very suspicious. He searched Tedi's bedroom, and also his parent’s bedroom, and then he asked, "Where are your parents?"
"They're at work," Tedi quickly replied.
"Shouldn't you be at school?" Then man was very suspicious now.
"Oh, I have a bad headache, decided to take the day off."
"I see, and your parents know about this?"
"No, I couldn't get a hold of their cell phone. I think they turned it off."
At this time the man was near the computer. Tedi hesitated, so he asked the Agent if he would be interested in a drink.
"Sure, water will do just fine."
Tedi went to the back of the apartment, the kitchen. He got a cup and filled it with water. As he walked out of the kitchen door he got tackled by the man. The man yelled "You’re under arrest. I'm Agent Smith. Anything you say will be used against you. You have the right to an attorney, if you can't afford an attorney we will provide one for you." He proceeded in putting the young boy in handcuffs.
"Wh...Wha...What did I do?" Tedi was really frightened now.
"I opened you computer. Found EBay database files on your computer. Mind explaining that" Agent Smith asked.
Tedi sighed. He learned his mistake and co-operated with the Agent. They left for court.
~ 2 days later ~
"We, the jury, find Tedi G guilty of malicious computer activity on popular auction site EBay. We sentence him to 50 years without parole." Tedi, parents, friends, and relatives all burst into tears.
"This is horrible!" cried Tedi, "the food is horrible, the rooms are horrible and the beds are horrible too!"
"Join the club," exclaimed Drapht. He was a very quite guy. He didn't complain much, and he would never tell anyone why he was in juvie. He was young and ambitious. He didn't seem like the type of guy you'd find here. "Oh well, only 5 months left for me," said Drapht.
"How about 5 days" asked Tedi?
"I don't think I understand you."
"You heard me, why wait 5 months, when you can get out in 5 days."
"Hahaha, what’s the plan mister?"
"E. Z! I got connections. I'll get a car to wait for us outside. While we are outside playing basketball, we sneak to the fence. We will get smoke grenades and put them on the main entry door that will keep the officers distracted. Then we will cut through the fence, run through the bushes and find a Chrysler Crossfire waiting for us!"
"Whoohoo! Sounds great but where you going to find a crossfire, a smoke grenade, and something to cut the fence?"
"I got everything we need in my bag. I managed to sneak it in!"
Over the next few days, Tedi carefully planned what was going to be happening when they escaped. The designated driver was going to be his cousin, Azim. Tedi called him and told him the exact directions. On the phone he called him Adrian and always spoke in Albanian.
The escape was going to happen in just one day. Before going to bet, Tedi suddenly remembered his grandfather’s storage room in Kitchener. It had everything they needed. Clothes, valuables, even 500 thousand dollars. He then fell asleep, delighted and ready to get out.
While going to get transferred to their school, Tedi accidentally tripped on the main entry stairs. The guards looked suspicious. While Tedi gathered his stuff, he slipped the smoke grenades to the right corner of the door. They were timed to set off in 4 hours. He quickly got up and headed to school. He caught up to Drapht in line.
"Smoke Grenades... Ready!"
"Good job mate," replied Drapht.
The school bell rang.
"You have 80 minutes of relaxing or playing basketball outside. GO NOW," shouted their teacher, Ms. Cornell.
The boys had positioned themselves. Tedi was standing in the back and Drapht was near the doors. Drapht was playing on defense, when he tripped a young boy named Arwin. Arwin was badly hurt. He was crying frantically. Drapht slowly moved to the back without being noticed. The guards ran to help the young boy. As they got him, a small explosion came from the main entry doors. Smoke filled the court, Tedi and Drapht started running towards the fence. Two boys named Omen and Thomas saw them. They started chasing them. When Tedi got to the fence he took out his toothpaste. He pressed a button and the edges turned razor sharp. He began cutting the fence.
"Hurry up mate," yelled Drapht. Then from the bushes came two guys.
"Were getting out too," they both cried.
"I don't think so," replied Drapht.
"You know, I got a loud voice. I'm great at yelling for help. We got some quick cops here," said Omen.
Drapht shrugged, "Fine, you guys can come."
By this time, Tedi finished cutting the fence. "C'mon, crawl in you three, FAST" he commanded.
Drapht was first, then Omen. With some difficulties Thomas got in and Tedi slipped in easy. They were now out. They began running through the silent woods, then they saw the blue crossfire, just where it should have been. In the drivers seat was Azim. Tedi went in the passenger seat and Drapht was in the back.
Azim pulled a gun on Omen and Thomas. He tied them up, and stuffed them in the trunk.
"Where to?" asked Azim.
"Kitchener," replied Tedi.
Azim started up the car but it wouldn't work. He tried again, didn't work. Then he was armed police officers in the back. The cops started shooting but all shots missed. They were getting closer. Azim started the car again. This time it worked. He sped off the dirty rood and had lost the cops.
"Darn!" yelled the male officer. "I didn't get the cars license plate".
Juvie Break
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Finished
Name: G, Tedi
Age: 13
Birth Country: Albania
Current Country: Canada
Crime: Hacking mainframe database of popular internet website EBay
Sentence: 50 years without Parole
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Name: Lif, Drapht
Age: 17
Birth Country: Australia
Current Country: Canada
Crime: Assault with a deadly weapon
Sentence: 18 months
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Name: Hoods, Thomas
Age: 15
Birth Country: Australia
Current Country: Canada
Crime: Armed Robbery
Sentence: 6 years
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Name: Das, Omen
Age: 17
Birth Country: Poland
Current Country: Canada
Crime: Millions of counterfeit cash, weapons, movies and artwork
Sentence: Life with possibility of parole
System Shutdown ... 5 ... 4 ... 3 ... 2 ... 1 ...
"How did these kids escape the juvenile facility?" asked Agent Rogers.
"They must have got help from the outside!" cried Agent Mariah, "Trace all phone calls at Uniria Juvenile Facility immediately!"
~ 13 days before ~
"Hahaha”, Tedi said to himself. “Just enter a simple telnet string, and we have access to the EBay database!". Tedi was a very smart boy. He could go to any school he wanted to and had plenty of awards for great achievement on computer technology. Yet he felt he had to prove the world that he was smarter then they thought. He practiced hacking school computers, friend’s computers, and websites. Although nothing could prepare him for this day.
Database... Accessed
"Whoohooo" cheered Tedi. Months of practice had paid off. He got into the EBay database and began searching for the richest people. He quickly hopped off his computer chair and went to get a beer. While opening the fridge, he suddenly heard the door knock. Tedi ran and closed the computer screen and opened the door. The man was well groomed, tall with an average build, and was dressed in a grey suit.
"Well, the CIA, have a warrant to search your house due to complaints about malicious activities happening here." Without hesitation Tedi let the man in. The man seemed very suspicious. He searched Tedi's bedroom, and also his parent’s bedroom, and then he asked, "Where are your parents?"
"They're at work," Tedi quickly replied.
"Shouldn't you be at school?" Then man was very suspicious now.
"Oh, I have a bad headache, decided to take the day off."
"I see, and your parents know about this?"
"No, I couldn't get a hold of their cell phone. I think they turned it off."
At this time the man was near the computer. Tedi hesitated, so he asked the Agent if he would be interested in a drink.
"Sure, water will do just fine."
Tedi went to the back of the apartment, the kitchen. He got a cup and filled it with water. As he walked out of the kitchen door he got tackled by the man. The man yelled "You’re under arrest. I'm Agent Smith. Anything you say will be used against you. You have the right to an attorney, if you can't afford an attorney we will provide one for you." He proceeded in putting the young boy in handcuffs.
"Wh...Wha...What did I do?" Tedi was really frightened now.
"I opened you computer. Found EBay database files on your computer. Mind explaining that" Agent Smith asked.
Tedi sighed. He learned his mistake and co-operated with the Agent. They left for court.
~ 2 days later ~
"We, the jury, find Tedi G guilty of malicious computer activity on popular auction site EBay. We sentence him to 50 years without parole." Tedi, parents, friends, and relatives all burst into tears.
"This is horrible!" cried Tedi, "the food is horrible, the rooms are horrible and the beds are horrible too!"
"Join the club," exclaimed Drapht. He was a very quite guy. He didn't complain much, and he would never tell anyone why he was in juvie. He was young and ambitious. He didn't seem like the type of guy you'd find here. "Oh well, only 5 months left for me," said Drapht.
"How about 5 days" asked Tedi?
"I don't think I understand you."
"You heard me, why wait 5 months, when you can get out in 5 days."
"Hahaha, what’s the plan mister?"
"E. Z! I got connections. I'll get a car to wait for us outside. While we are outside playing basketball, we sneak to the fence. We will get smoke grenades and put them on the main entry door that will keep the officers distracted. Then we will cut through the fence, run through the bushes and find a Chrysler Crossfire waiting for us!"
"Whoohoo! Sounds great but where you going to find a crossfire, a smoke grenade, and something to cut the fence?"
"I got everything we need in my bag. I managed to sneak it in!"
Over the next few days, Tedi carefully planned what was going to be happening when they escaped. The designated driver was going to be his cousin, Azim. Tedi called him and told him the exact directions. On the phone he called him Adrian and always spoke in Albanian.
The escape was going to happen in just one day. Before going to bet, Tedi suddenly remembered his grandfather’s storage room in Kitchener. It had everything they needed. Clothes, valuables, even 500 thousand dollars. He then fell asleep, delighted and ready to get out.
While going to get transferred to their school, Tedi accidentally tripped on the main entry stairs. The guards looked suspicious. While Tedi gathered his stuff, he slipped the smoke grenades to the right corner of the door. They were timed to set off in 4 hours. He quickly got up and headed to school. He caught up to Drapht in line.
"Smoke Grenades... Ready!"
"Good job mate," replied Drapht.
The school bell rang.
"You have 80 minutes of relaxing or playing basketball outside. GO NOW," shouted their teacher, Ms. Cornell.
The boys had positioned themselves. Tedi was standing in the back and Drapht was near the doors. Drapht was playing on defense, when he tripped a young boy named Arwin. Arwin was badly hurt. He was crying frantically. Drapht slowly moved to the back without being noticed. The guards ran to help the young boy. As they got him, a small explosion came from the main entry doors. Smoke filled the court, Tedi and Drapht started running towards the fence. Two boys named Omen and Thomas saw them. They started chasing them. When Tedi got to the fence he took out his toothpaste. He pressed a button and the edges turned razor sharp. He began cutting the fence.
"Hurry up mate," yelled Drapht. Then from the bushes came two guys.
"Were getting out too," they both cried.
"I don't think so," replied Drapht.
"You know, I got a loud voice. I'm great at yelling for help. We got some quick cops here," said Omen.
Drapht shrugged, "Fine, you guys can come."
By this time, Tedi finished cutting the fence. "C'mon, crawl in you three, FAST" he commanded.
Drapht was first, then Omen. With some difficulties Thomas got in and Tedi slipped in easy. They were now out. They began running through the silent woods, then they saw the blue crossfire, just where it should have been. In the drivers seat was Azim. Tedi went in the passenger seat and Drapht was in the back.
Azim pulled a gun on Omen and Thomas. He tied them up, and stuffed them in the trunk.
"Where to?" asked Azim.
"Kitchener," replied Tedi.
Azim started up the car but it wouldn't work. He tried again, didn't work. Then he was armed police officers in the back. The cops started shooting but all shots missed. They were getting closer. Azim started the car again. This time it worked. He sped off the dirty rood and had lost the cops.
"Darn!" yelled the male officer. "I didn't get the cars license plate".