12 bar battle
first to 5 win
3 votes straight ko
(voters) explain votes

how many bars???

I spit like automatics-with-full-clips, my bars-is-like-hollow-tips, the way I dead femcees/Lady Paniro is ready for any battle, I'm the gat and my brain is the armory/2
My metaphores is like tiger claws, they'll-split-you-into-pieces/I'll eat you up in a hundred ways verbally, cause-you-sweet-like-reeses/4
I'm so sick I spit phlegm like my flow-got-the-flu/You can spit a verse of antidotes and you-still-gonna-lose/6
In ya battle records, you can add another loss, I'll leave ya weak text toss/I'm taking over like Diana Ross, I'm rap worlds first lady boss/8
I'm the flame to the cigarette and you the ashes getting plucked, you the target when I'm aiming, you getting 16 in ya gut/My words is murderous like Frank White's flick, I'll delete you out the scene when I reload the clip and bust/10
The blade hitting ya neck whe the director yell cut, ending you quickly without no fuss/There's nothing to discuss, ya rhymes is half tough like brittle bones, so dont get 'em crushed/12

Say showty ~> You never hit me back detail the rest of the rules so I'm spittin 5-10 bars.....

Here we go!!!!

I don touched down and landed I'm in my own damn ZONE//
My rap tactics is PLATINUM you CUP yours like STYROFOAM//
BLOWN away cause there's no piece heavier than STEEL-PLATED CHROME//
That I OWN, don't spit wack cause I'ma spit 2 in ya DOME//
Let cha eyes rub TOGETHER MEASURE out da damage of da WEATHER//
Da storm blowin through creatin HAVOC GRAB IT but it won't do you no BETTER//
Slyvester I'd rather you post SPARATICALLY than RAPIDLY keys less WETTER//
If ya wanna get FRIED DYED and turned to da SIDE I'ma gon ahead and LETCHA//

STYLE FLIP

So you wanna EXPLAIN wit yo LAME RAP SHYT just how you gonna ATTACK THIS//
You can't compete wit real WRAPPERS all ya covers are FRONT and BACKLESS// (wrappers=rappers)
I came STRAPPED WIT punches that make ya thoughts hemorage up WACK SHYT//
I retired Jordan, so you know it ain't no comin BACK from THIS//
You LAUGH at THIS da whole time ya body gettin TAPPED wit SHYT//
Somebody SLAP dis BYTCH, fuck it Karnage just get dis Hoe a CASKET//
Gon lay face down cause ya whole apperance to me is just NASTY//
So I can shoot ya ASS HOLE full of BULLET HOLES RELOADIN' when I'm EMPTY//
Put da dirty eagle to ya head and let my five stars BREATH//
Im finna put ya whole career in a box before Porky get's to THREE// (Porky Pig and his stutterin' problem)
PLEASE BELIEVE the LYRICALLY challanged has sentenced THEE.....

Man I am extremely tired I have been writing poetry and music all day....worked 14 hours today and gotta do it again tomorrow....Sorry if I fell off at da end....my head is about to pop!!!!!


Uppin for VOTES!!!!!


~Furik~

how you gonna edit what you put down as rules......that's cheap you know that was not there in da beginnin.....


I'ma come back and spit some more just for you doin that.....lata today.....


~Furik~

i only edit to show u how many bars to spit it wouldn't let me send u a PM

empty ya e-mail i cant send u any PM's

i only have one message in dere, don't know what's wrong wit it.......Aiight leave it as it stands....

Uppin for Votes!!!!

I GOT YA...LADIES...N.S.T.E.D INTUITION IN THA BUILDIN ....

FLOW:FURIK
CONSISTENCY:FURIK
PUNCHES:FURIK
SO I GUESS INTUITION'S VOTE GOES TO........
------------------FURIK (3 -0)-----------------------
COMMENT FOR FURIK:"WWWWWHHHHHOOOOAAAAAA YOUR VERSE WAS A HOT BANGER....KEEP UP THE SKILLED DELIVERY ABILITY.....SHITS NYCE.....LOOKS LIKE AN ASSASSINATION .LOL

COMMENT FOR LADY PANIRO:YOU DO GOT SKILLZ BOO.. BUT REALIZE YOU BATTLED ON OF THE NICEST FEMCEEZ IN THE R-DUBB......FROM A LOOK AT YOUR VERSE...I CAN SEE MYSELF VOTING FOR YOU IN THA FUTURE....

BOTH OF YOU LADIES HELD YOUR OWN AND WENT BLOW FOR BLOW....GOOD LUCK TO THE BOTH OF YOU IN FUTURE BATTLES....

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Preciate the vote N.S.T.E.D.....1-0 Me uppin dis Joint......

~Furik~

verses from both ladies were pretty creative, but my vote comes down to da flow.

It is obvious dat Furik had the upper hand coming into this battle and she showed this by producing a verse that flowed alot smoother than Lady Parino. Ayo Lady, don't be discouraged, jus practice and elevate.

Vote = Furik

Peace

FLOW:FURIK
CONSISTENCY:FURIK
PUNCHES:FURIK

MY VOTE= Furik

Thanks Lady Paniro, good battle.....3-0 KO, keep elevatin and we can definitely do it again.....

To all who voted, Thank you!!!

~Furik~