Hey everyone i was 10 when i wrote this

I miss you daddy.
What do you not understand?
I would do anything in the world
just to have one chance
to show you
I am worht at least a penny
of what you send mommy.
I know your love didnt last for mommy
but do u have any left for me
i will except scraps if thats all thats left.
that lady ur with
the one that hates me
do u feel the same she does
i dont really care
i still want you here.
i will not hold anything against you
because ive decided to blame all on myself
no matter how many shrinks say otherwise
their job is to tell me lies
i guess its time to grow up
and realize the differences between
reality and make-believe
i love playing pretend
in the magical world of make believe
because there you love me
like a father is suppose to love his child


http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=88211
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1119444#post1119444
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1119446#post1119446

well since nobody else left you feed, overall not a bad peom...it was creative in some ways but again some things needed help, ok job...keep it up..:)

^^pretty much, i liked the emotion behind it..and its pretty good for a ten yr old.

**YAWN** i got half way through and nearly fell asleep....

nice poem