Hey gurl, ima ready

Rulez:
1. 12-15 lines
2. First to five wins, 3-0ko
3. No feeding off verses
4. No hate, d/p riding votes

Here i am again, and i know it's been a while
But don't be fooled little miss, i aint lost my style//
Are you ready for a beatdown? Are you ready Miss Furik?
Leeta comin' atcha wit da rhymez that make you feel sick//

Peeps look at this bitch, she aint got shit on me
Runnin around like she da queen, when she's actually a fein//
Don't be fooled by her big tits, and her nice long legs
Because she's actually a man, who goes fo da dregs//
I'm da only one in this battle who is actually for real
Spittin rhymze to a beat that i know yall feel//

Furik, i'll take you on, and i'll make you scream
For help when i'm ripping out yo tongue, and stomp on it wit a gleam//
I'm a violent bitch you see, and you should be running scared
So back up from this battle, yo rhymez don't need to be shared//

aiight I will drop in a min.......!!!!!

WARM-UP

What's up did you think I'd let you blow dis here up
ya should've just no showed cause you spittin' is like eatin throw up//

You a lyrical spiritual mishap that should've been put back stead of slapped (doctors slap ya ass when ya born)
I can logout back in ya crew help and ya shit would still be wack//

UPHORIA

I attack skulls with ease partin'em like a c-section spread
You'd still punch like Glass Joe even if you and Einstein switched heads//

Ain't no describin this phenomenom surgically skilled in assassinatin keystyles
you wanna get down get buck chill out this ain't no try-out for Girls Gone Wild//

F I N I S H H E R ! !

Since ya took the innitative to spit dis ripped up series of gased up text
Ima Bow-ounce on ya Wreckord steal a win another femcee murdered.....whose next// (Bow Wow's song "Bounce")

I couldn't just leave without sealin da cap on this can of whoop-ass
You still wouldn't beat me in dis race if ya had lanes wrapped around ya ass

I only edited because I misspelled a couple of words...prolly still some in there, but o well!!!

Uppin for Votes!!!!

Furik becase i thought she hit harder

ayo, Furik, ill verse, uppin

wordplay-neither
punches-furik
multis-neither
flow-both
vote-furik

Preciate the vote.....there are multis, but maybe I need for someone to give a clear definition on what multis are.....2-0 Me.....

Thanks again ~Furik~

vote= Furik. Leeta, you were iight, but sum of your lyrics were a lil borin and i had a hard time tryin not to skip sum lines. put in more punches next time and make it more exciting and enjoyable. it was nice, but not as nice as F-Gurl (lol) nice battle. game ova~*

*WuN

Wordplay-n/a
Multis-n/a
Style-Leeta
Punches-Furik
Originality-Furik

My vote=Furik


Ugh! I despise that voting method. Can't be scientific with rap.


But anyway, Leeta didn't do bad. I mean you're still new right? I think you need to use better punchlines. Seems to me like you're thinking of something that rhymes and hoping it has a punch. Instead of thinking of a punch and making something rhyme with it. There's a huge difference. And Furik had a pretty good drop, but we could do without all the titles. I mean it's not a research paper. Just spit. I wouldn't mind seeing a rematch between the two of you once y'all get a little more experience. That would be good. But until them I vote for Furik. good shit

Multis-Not a damn similar syllable(see that was a counterfeit multi)
Wordplay-NONE
Punches-Furik
Enjoyment-Furik

Vote: Furik

Basically....Furik is ill, nice verse.....Not many ignorable lines...Good punches....The c-section line was nice

Leeta....Up ya punches a little....Mediocre verse....I almost fell asleep on your ish.....You got a nice style/flow genre....Just work on punches

Both were horrible in wordplay and multi's.....Work on those.....Look at the quotes on my sig and you'll see nice examples of wordplay and multis

lol this thread ended a long time ago from a 3-0 KO now its 5-0 FURIK!

Preciate all that voted and yes....we both are new...I have a lot of growning to do. Thanks and everyone stay active...!!!!!

Sorry for the down time.....it's hard to get to a comp
~Furik~

NICE BATTLE FURIK.......STRAIGHT VERSE....
-LEETA...YOU HAD SOME TIGHT BARS YOURSELF....

BOTH OF YOU SHORTY'S STAY UP....RESPECT TO BOTH OF YA'LL

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smh. let this damn thread go!!