these are a couple sketches I did today, quality is crap cause its taken with my phone. I know theyre not the greatest thing ever but I'm looking to improve so constructive criticism if possible. Oh and the coloured one is done with pencils lol cause thats all I had...

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/mez1.jpg

^dont like the M at all on that one, but the rest is alright I spose

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/mez2.jpg

tell me what you think, peace

The first one is sick... sick colours, dope style all round... second one needs colour then it would be just as dope

!st one: didn't really like the style of lettering, the idea with the M was good, but it could have flowed better with the other letters. The colour scheme is amazing man, and i like all the extra graphics.

2nd one: Is sick. The forcefield is nice as fuck. Love the bits in the middle with the M and the E, only problem (in my opinion) is you should have carried the style further with the Z. If you did the arrow bits on the Z and made it look fluid it would make a solid piece.

Nice stuff mez.

^ yeah i see what you mean, helpful feedback, cheers

!st: No....this is all wrong.
2nd: Better....Keep doing shit like that before you dip into color.

I thought the lettering on the 1st one was pretty good...

i like both of them...

i might start tagging again one day.

I liked the second one better than the first
the outlining u did on the letters was sick
the first one was kinda basic

Feral hit it dead on with you should've incorporated the arrows with the "z" on the second one. The first one's color scheme was great and the extras were cool, lettering was a little too simplistic for my tastes, overall not a bad drawing though.

-iDeals