View Full Version : Quick "Spoke" Sketch


feral
02-19-2007, 09:17 PM
Just a quick one that went balls up, the S was okay, but the rest is shite. what's more i started outlining in the wrong pen then got extremely pissed off. Drop some feedback; what you did/n't like.

http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/4746/photo00031va3.jpg


I carried on with the wrong out lining to see if it looked anydifferent:

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/9570/photo00041xs5.jpg

Don Vito
02-19-2007, 09:20 PM
yeah man thats wicked u got talent

Eddie Talent
02-19-2007, 09:21 PM
pretty sick..basic strucker now just work on great detailing in the letters and u will have a master peice...im liking ur basic writing 2...sick style

feral
02-19-2007, 09:29 PM
pretty sick..basic strucker now just work on great detailing in the letters and u will have a master peice...im liking ur basic writing 2...sick style

Cheers but i really didn't think this was good at all, The loop on the p should have come down behind the O and the K was at the strangest angle ever. The E was just rushed cos i got pissed off. cheers for the looks though man. And haha at makevelis new sig, the best one yet.

.meZ
02-20-2007, 06:43 AM
the K isnt that great, looks a bit like an R. I like the bit that sticks out on the bottom of the S, you should have done more of those on the other letters.

Burden, ..
02-20-2007, 11:31 AM
i liked this man..
i dunno anything about graff..
but it looks good lol

ALUCARD
02-20-2007, 02:47 PM
the e was shitty but the rest of it looked decent

keep it up

KR3@T10N
02-21-2007, 01:36 AM
Its aight....but how does it look on the streets? Thats the question!

I Deal Eyez
03-13-2007, 02:49 PM
eh, wasnt feeling this one as much as the one I just peeped from you. The style's decent, just need to tweak a few things... like you said the 'p' isn't right, the curve is up way too high, and how it relates to the 'o' is just awkward to me... the 'K' could use a little work to, but I think you were definitely on the right path here...

-iDeals

feral
03-13-2007, 02:55 PM
yeah i did this all in one, did the S fairly good then just rushed freehand the rest.

I Deal Eyez
03-13-2007, 03:20 PM
I do the same thing... I'll get a few letters looking perfect and then I rush the rest and junk the whole thing. Either that or I'll chang the style at the end and have to go back and re-work the beginning... which is why pencil's are lovely LOL

-iDeals

KR3@T10N
03-14-2007, 05:53 AM
Ill show you a dope way to fix that when I get my camera......