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nice work mate.. i feel it needs something more though.. not sure what exactly..

Yeah same here. The P looked bland so i extended the K over to the loop, but it didnt look that good.

I'd say the P's tail looks a little skinny, and the loop's a little broad.

How the K relates with everything else is dope, though. However, the other letters don't seem to be doing the same, so attention is only really being drawn to the right half.

Still, it's pretty dope.

Cheers man, decent feedback. I think it's too blank between the p and o.

I'd say the P's tail looks a little skinny, and the loop's a little broad.

How the K relates with everything else is dope, though. However, the other letters don't seem to be doing the same, so attention is only really being drawn to the right half.

Still, it's pretty dope.

What he said.

nice shit man keep it up

Add a thin solid shadow, bolder outline, and a little detail.......Plain but effective.

The 'P' is distracting from the word as a whole due to its inconsistency. The curve is thicker than the rest of the lettering anywhere else, and it appears to be a little larger than the other letters. The 'e' isn't bad with how it meshes, but there either should be something above it or you should raise it some, the rest of the letters are approx. the same height and that one is noticeably smaller.... nice little sketch though

Appreciate the feedback dun.

Big up the Amberleaf Crew :smoke:

represent!

you kno dat mang BIG up respcka

i just think that it doesnt really flow....creative as fuck imo but just doesnt flow....seems like you started strong and got bored with thinkin what else you could do to improve on it...i know the feelin homie...i get it always...but overall nice work keep at it.....