hey gurl, ok ima up fo ma first battle

Rules:

~ 15-20 lines
~ No crew/hate/pussy/clit/dick votes
~ First to 5 wins, 3-0 ko
~ Explained votes ONLY

I'll spit first:

Listen up yall niggaz to this new "import" to RapWorlds
Ima goin smash this bitch wit ma rhymez, while she's spittin terds~~
Dawn gots da mic and Dawn gots da verse
To make this Leeta bitch scream, leaving her to curse~~

Leeta you better listen up to this mean bitch from Asia
Listenin to my rhymez is like Euthenasia~~
I only just met you, and you think your so adorable
But reading your other rhymez, man, it's deplorable!!~~
Peeps look at this bitch, have you seen her in other battles?
Takin on thugged out niggaz, tryin to get onto their saddles~~
Leeta, give it up, you aint got no business here
Just go back to your room and read about "Fear"~~
Coz that's what you should have, (Fear), not a dream
You gots to have da talent, not be a crack fein~~
You little crack whore, i'll kick you in the guts
And when you double over i'll kick you in the nutss~~
Yo probably like "Big Momma" a whole lotta woman wit a dick
Bitch it's niggaz like you that make me feel sick~~

Niggaz, i've finished with this bitch, Leeta, try and drop a punch
Leeta i eat pieces of shit like you fo breakfast and fo lunch

Since you didn't specify, i'm gunna feed of yo verse
Dawn, i have no idea what you just spat, but i know it's da worst!!//

Listen to you, wit yo little slanty eyes
I aint tha "Big Momma", have you seen "Romeo Must Die"?//

I'm not Aaaliyah who shows sympathy for Asians
I'm tha thugged out bitch, who rips yo ass wit an exclamation//

My rhymes are poisonous, like Anthrax or SARS
They'll infect your ears, and leave you in a coma, with 69 scars//

You aint no MC Lyte, Queen Pen or Lil'Kim
I'm the only black in this battle, you gots da yellow skin//

Don't get me wrong by my rhymes, i aint no racist,
I'm just a lady on tha streets, oh and did i mention i was a Facist??//

Don't worry i aint goin ta put a bullet in you head
That's the easy way out, i'll torture you instead//

I'll stick flaming bars in yo eyes, and make you cry tears
And ma crew will stand back, and encourage me wit their cheers//

Next i'll nail you to a cross, and spread da word there's a crucifixion
And everyone'll come around and scrawl their inscriptions//
All over your body wit Nine Inch Nails
And then stone you to death, smothering your wails//


Votes Please!!

ill verse Leeta!!

Aiight ladies....heres how I see it and anyone can correct me if I am wrong!

Wordplay: Leeta
Punches: Leeta
Personals: Leeta
Multis: Neither had any...but then I am not really sure of the exact definition of a damn multi...everybody be changin it and shit
Flow: Leeta

Vote=Leeta ~> you have elevated, stay active and try and figure out what multis are (since I've been told I don't know what they are) and use those to go along wit your verses

Dawn ~> you're new here so my suggestion would be to view other battles to get the hang of what's goin on and how all this shit works...other than that I have nothing else!!!

~Furik~

thanx gurl, i'm not sure what multis are either!!
Can someone help us out?

1-0

Wordplay: Leeta
Punches: Leeta
Personals: Leeta
Multis: None
Flow: Leeta
Structure: Dawn
Vote: Leeta

nice battle!


nice to hear my gang mentioned which is being rebuilded if any of ya'll wanna holla at us just post in our threads.


er i think dawn had good flow and punches but i felt leeta's more.


vote-Leeta


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DAMN I NO THATS 3-0 KO BUT O WELL IF IT MENAS ANYTHINK YOU HAVE MY VOTE LEETA!!
FLOW=LEETA
PUCHES=LEETA
WORDPLAY=LEETA
LETS JUST SAY THAT WAS A GOOD BATTLE LEETA YOUR VERY GOOD R U IN A CREW YET?

3-0 ko good battle gurls :)