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TOPIC - "Tormented Luxury"

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The Malevolent Leader Abides In His Keep, He's Been Harboured Tormented.
Luxuries Are Repetitive, Alas, Could God's Cerebral Armour Be Dented?
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The Malevolent Leader Abides In His Keep, He's Been Harboured Tormented.
Luxuries Are Repetitive, Alas, Could God's Cerebral Armour Be Dented?


*The Annual Conversation Between God And Satan Takes Place In Purgatory, Their Neutral Meeting Point,*

*God Is Almost Weary Looking, And Holds His Sacred Visage In His Hands.*

*He Speaks To Satan In A Defeated Tone.*

The Worlds In Chaos, I Never Thought This Might Happen, Havoc Oh How It Ravages!!
Repeating The Averages, Tyrants Out Of Control, And Humans Are Feeding These Savages!
My Mind Is Reaching And Grasping, The Humans Slip Away, They're Discreet And Outlasting
My Plot, Obese Beings,They Care Not About Me, Yet They're Barely Creeping To Begin Fasting,
Worried By Certain Disdain, I Am God Of Everything, My Shoulders Are Burdened With Pain.
I Would Return Jesus To Earth, But I Can't Allow Him To Heal Simply To Be Hurtin' Again.
Im Assertive My Friend, I Can Smell A Change, But We Need To Reach An Agreement.
Henceforth, Shall We Call Upon The 4 Horsemen? And Quite Simply Steal An Achievement.
Or Shall We Wait, Isn't That What They Repent For? Give Lent For, Now Answer Me Fallen One.
Us? We Shall Co-Operate For Once, For I Dare Not Risk Jesus Again.. Oh, My Solemn Son.

The Malevolent Leader Abides In His Keep, He's Been Harboured Tormented.
Luxuries Are Repetitive, Alas, Could God's Cerebral Armour Be Dented

*Satan Views God Now.. He Realises What Exactly He's Thinking, 'God Is Weak.. I Should Pounce', Which Way Would Be Best To Approach This?? He Ponders To Himself,

*He Replies In An Ingratiating Manner.*

I Thought You'd See it, My Brother, Have We Not Had Patience With These Mortal Beings?
They Are Too Greedy. Centuries Have Passed, And They Still Possess Immortal Dreams,
Ahh Oh Holy One, I Have Been Lying In Wait, Wonderin' Could You Keep Denyin' Me Fate?
Still Defyin' The State, These War's Have Murdered Our Earth, In My Mind It's Too Late,
These Men Have Fouled And Polluted, The Atmospheric Problem Has Been Disputed.
We Have Power,We Must Rise Up And Crush These Pilgrims, Like Its Seen'N'Reputed.
With Fright, The Lands Numb,The Ultimate Alliance, It May Seem A Fight So Random,
I Have Told You, My Friend We Must Join As One And Ultimatly Unite In Tandem.
Let Us First Destroy Our Competition, Wipe Out The Four Horseman, I Would Not Betray You.
I Pray, Truth! Don't Laugh With Scorn, I Know, As Your Feelings Portrays What Your Face Do.
What Do You Say, Join With Me? Release Me From My Tormented Luxuriy? Do Disperse.
I May Rule Hell.. But It's Not Enough For Me, Together We Can Build A New Universe!

The Malevolent Leader Abides In His Keep, He's Been Harboured Tormented.
Luxuries Are Repetitive, Alas, Could God's Cerebral Armour Be Dented?


*God Sighs, It Is A Terrible Sound, Felt All Over The Universe.. It Has A Sense Of Helplessness About It.. He Looks Up, His Majestic Features Are Aged Beyond Time, And A Tear Falls From His Cheek.. Like A Crystal Droplet.*

*He Looks At Satan,*

* Satan Smiles With An Aura Of Complete Triumph.*

Its Not What I Wish, But You Make It Sound Wondrous And Carefree Which Is Top Of My List.
Its True I Ponder, As You Offer Me This, Who Can Deny? A Complete Eternity Of Bliss?
Ive Seen Your Elated Face, But You Agree...That I Would Accept Your Stated Case,
You Already Know, My Decision's Been Made.. It's Now Become A Tainted Race,
A Saintly Taste, Is What You Have Recieved Satan, Who Knew You Could Spin Such Tales?
Me Your Brother?! Scum! Are You Off The Rails? Nay, Here is Where Your Story Fails,
You Speak Of Loyalty And Enthralling Feelings.. And The Souls Purity And Enrichment.
Im Last And Resistant, Indeed, You Felt All These Once, But Bastard, The Past Is Distant.
I May Be Weak, But I Created Man, I Will Stand By Them Until I Choose To Move On.
That Is Not Now, Thats Another Story.. Which Is Entwined Upon A New Song,
You've Never Been In Love, Nor Felt Romance.. Therefore Man Is Greater Than You,
Your A Liar, Would Gladly Betray Me If You Had Half The Chance, Nay, Tis True.
Don't Play The Fool Nor Jester, You Have Some Wits About You, Still Lurking Around.
Leave As Your Found, Return To Your Hole, And Forever Remain Deep In The Ground.


*God Waves His Hand, And Satan Once Again Is Banished To His Land Of The Dead.*

*God Stands Up With Awe Inspiring Fluency And Laughs, A Bemused Look Upon His Face*

*He Utters A Sentence In Solitude , Almost Inaudible Against The Wind In This Place

''HaHa, Well I'll be Damned, He Almost Got Me*


The Malevolent Leader Abides In His Keep, He's Been Harboured Tormented.
Luxuries Are Repetitive, Alas, Could God's Cerebral Armour Be Dented?

I haven't written my verse yet. I'll write it and post it tonight. You can DQ me, of course, so if you want to do that, go ahead. If not, then I'll be docked one vote.

Your choice.

I haven't written my verse yet. I'll write it and post it tonight. You can DQ me, of course, so if you want to do that, go ahead. If not, then I'll be docked one vote.

Your choice.


You Know Quite Well I Won't DQ You.


And When You Drop I Don't Want You To be Docked A Vote, That's Retarded.


Just Drop Homie.

I'd like to say, that is a VERY beautiful verse, man. And I honestly think you would have beat me. I can't write man. I'm sorry to say, I've been trying to write for the last two days, but I can't get into the topical frame of mind. I would like to apologize, because this is the second time I've done this to you, and I really wouldn't have done this to you again, but after a night of trying to start off a verse with no success, I knew I couldn't postpone this tournament any longer because I couldn't get over my writer's block. This win is to you.

You did good Hades. Your elevation is shocking the shit out of me. Keep it real.