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TOPIC - "Last Breath of A Colussus"

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consider this Sly's check-in...

explanation in the predictions thread...

...(A Strong Breeze Turns The Pages)...

Deep in sleep - we notice that the pyro spits ...
The core of the earth forces the work as it's spiral quits ...
We should've known from the ever so obvious heiroglyphs,
That this legend was truer than the questions that Spyro lifts.
Everyone's yellin', "Dont disguise yo shit!"
As they pick up on the truth that the fire's gon' rip.
The embers spreadin' wildly, higher - go quick!
Before we all end up wired in Cairo's ditch.
...
`Brushes and picks uncover our preserved skeletons,
Which eventually ended up responsible for deterred Hellish grins...
As interns in turn find themselves as conserved, fellow men...
Refer to these times as the End .. centered mellow - Grim!
But the real discovery comes when a being is propped
Completely different than the rest; believing we're hot ...
On the trail of what we need, breathing just stops,
When we reveal that this organism that we're seeing is God.
His death was not alike the others, now reconstruction begins
First starting off with the destruction, we spin
Into another twist, as we realise he was bludgeoned by sin.
And so began the final judgement, published on skin.

"Never judge a book by it's cover."

In the war of the world, God decided to intervene ...
Forgetting that he had betrayed millions, upon arrival here at the scene
He was worshipped by ALL, but lost his sense of ALL-awareness
That's when the awe became the tall apparent...
Hundreds revolted, killin' their own in cross-combat
Sly as a fox, or a lost wombat.
Fighting to survive, but revenge consumed the souls....
As man selfishly fought to prune the whole
Of Earth ... even supplied the fuel to rune the coal
Blanketing our world in secrets, from caves, to dunes, to holes.
But it was with one swift strike that he re-tuned the flow...
Deicide killed the Earth, so soon - so slow.
But through time and tide came life in a new form
A climate that's too warm proved to be use for
This new species of inhabitants ... far more developed and keen ...
That is how they discovered us enveloped by scene...
A new age in Earth's cycle, through the water filled- sod
Arose man from the remains of dinosaurs, a thrilled-pod.
Such a demented evolution, a shrill squad ...
The destructive force of man's nature killed God.

...(And then the wind settled)...

ok so im not going to be able to drop.. Im not long home from work.. i was offered some overtime and i took it (yes i could have said no but the moneys more important as it keeps food on my table and a roof over my head aswell as bills lol) so yea.. i got few horus sleep then up again for more work.. so.. my bad Sly Stilla.. Hope well meet again soon man i really sorry for letting you down though fma.. both you and the tourny organizers..

So Sly Stilla Wins.. Kharn Cant Show ;)

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