Okay, let's try this all over again. Maybe this time people will give votes.

Unlimited Bars
No C'R/Hate/Revenge/Stupid/Crew votes will be allowed
Explained votes only
Deadline for verses is Friday at midnight

I prefer going first, because it forces me to not procrastinate. I'll spit tomorrow. I would go tonight but my brain is dead. Plus, you're like my fiercest competitor and I wanna make it good. So look forward to me spitting tomorrow.. G'Luck girl!

this coming friday or last friday?

Alexia, I know you said you prefered goin 1st but, i dont know when I'll be able to get back on here and drop. I told you Monday so, here goes my verse. SERIOUS WRITERS BLOCK>>>UGH!

Seriously, you are on my level...I gotta be honest
But, Ima still have you like a devil worshipper, cuz you dont want it wit the GODDESS!
Ya flow gon fly by me like a maxi pad w/ wings
Ya previous verse was surpeme
but I gotta feelin this next one is goin to be as powerless as the rest of the kings
Youre a waste of conceived sperm, ya mom shoulda swallowed
And if she didnt have $ for an abortion, for free I woulda ended you wit 3 tips and a hallow
I lyrically 'fail' bitches who dont excel in 'class'
What the fuck is up wit ya avatar dressed in red trash bags?
It's a shame and Totally Clueless to Substitute knock off for Coach
And the closest you get to Burberry is Lumberjack Coats
As for you bein the Best Femcee...sweetie, its 'nuttin' when you 'cummin'
Peeps think my flow is gay bcuz n*e chick on Rw, Lady plan on lyrically 'fuckin'
But this ya 2nd time at it w/ me, I guess to clear things up
Spelman made you a fully grown 'pussy' cuz you dont mind gettin 'fucked'
Thats just how sick I get...
My spit game like a 'virgin', it aint never been 'dicked'
Battlin me, you playin rushin roulette with ya life, woulda been better gamblin wit *pick-its*
Cuz Im like a genie to your 'grim reaper'...I grant death wishes
Alexia, stop biting ya nails and post ya verse...no need to be nervous about the endin
I know you wish after the 1st battle you woulda left my name behind Pending!

Ok I carefully read the verse over and over, at first it strats simple with low vocab, as you move on it gets bettwr with the disses,

the wings and the kings was a cleaver diss, very unique, it made me laugh
you need to work on your complexity and vocab, and maybe the flow because your bars/lines dont match up, 7/10 on the verse, enjoyable but yet too plain,

honest feedback (no beef)
:D
uppin for alexia

uppin for Alexia's verse..

i think we gots a no show

nooooo lol i realli wanted to c this :(

btw great verse ladyflamez

NO, alexia will do it,
just wait, shes just..somewhere, she wont back out

uh oh, where's Alexia?

should i close this?

naw just leave it open she might be busy or im outdated ass hell Lmao..


HELLA HOT VERSE FLAMEZ GIRL


peace

Originally posted by Teeny
should i close this?

Yea, just close this thread. Its been a while now. Im pretty sure when she comes back we can do it again. Thanx!

*LaDy