sketch battle no colour. word = "stain"

my shit:

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/6990/photo00301ur9.jpg

yeah sorry I havent posted mine yet, i couldnt get onto the site before i went on holiday so i couldnt post it. I'll put it up really soon when my cam has charged.

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00047.jpg
although it shows up when i try and edit it...i cant see it otherwise....whats wrong....

Vote: Feral

Like ur simplistic style looks like you followed wars tutorial steps quite nicely with ur outlines. Nice background also man best work iv seen u produce.

Mez = Lettering, shadowing was uneven. Not really worth commenting on, looks like u forgot to post and put this together in 2 minutes. A dissapointing sketch after looking through ur blackbook

Vote: Feral

Not much to be said really, i was feeling ferals a lot more. I dont know how else you would vote at these things but his looked more cleaner, more pro looking whilst Mez's looked like someone at school drew them when they were bored. (no offence).

Vote: Feral.

Feral's was a lot smoother and looks much more well polished, and the background is sickness

yeah i didnt spend much time on it at all, definately not up to my usual standard. I tried it again straight after doing this but didnt like the word, dunno why I picked it to be honest....

Vote: Feral

Mez' looked a bit like juvenile bubble writing, his lines weren't smooth, lettering was disproportional, and that S was just horrid.

Feral's was more involving with the lettering and the background being visually involving, and the lettering being better over all - although the body of the S falls a little out of proportion.

not gonna vote...cause you both were horrible.......
both need alotta work.........but good job...onezzzzzzzzzzzzz

FERAL wins......