View Full Version : QUARTERFINALS: ((NYCSPITZ)) vs. Black D.


ZuLou
04-15-2007, 04:14 AM
*ANY MAJOR PROBLEMS CONTACT A MOD*
NO FREE-POSTING
NO SWAYING VOTES
SHIT TALKING GOES IN DESIGNATED THREAD


LINE LIMIT - 60 LINES MAX



HOOK CAN BE INCLUDED DOESN'T COUNT AGAINST YOU. aS WELL AS DIALOGUE. JUST DONT MAKE IT EXCESSIVE.
FIRST TO 5 (4-1 TKO...3-0 KO)
VOTE ON:
ON TOPIC
DEPTH
IMAGERY
ORIGINALITY
FLOW
MULTIS
VOCAB


PARTICIPATING MEMBERS & MEMBERS WHO WERE INVOLVED CAN VOTE. ALSO VETS CAN VOTE. EACH MEMBER MUST VOTE ON TWO (2) BATTLES!!!



CHECK IN BY MONDAY, APR. 16 AT MIDNIGHT EST
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VOTING ENDS TUESDAY, APR. 24 AT MIDNIGHT EST
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IF BOTH TEXTCEES ARE LATE, THIS RULE DOES NOT APPLY.
ANYTHING OVER 24 = NO SHOW


TOPIC - The Spark That Began Time

Black™
04-15-2007, 12:10 PM
aye..

NYCSPlTZ
04-15-2007, 01:06 PM
uggggggghh, do I have to explain how I created the universe all over again ....... ?

Check

Black™
04-19-2007, 10:53 PM
if it's alright with you..i'll have it up tomorrow

all but forgot about this, didnt realize the date came up so soon

got some done, not enough to post tho

sorry yo..you can dq me if you dont wanna wait.

NYCSPlTZ
04-19-2007, 11:13 PM
nah nah my internet was out until now (dead serious) so if It's fine w. zulou I'mma post 2morrow too, make it hot (mega no homo)

ZuLou
04-20-2007, 12:56 AM
Post tomorrow, then.

NYCSPlTZ
04-21-2007, 12:21 AM
yea I see you haven't been active since 5:17, I don't wanna win by no show so Zu extend this 1 more day

ZuLou
04-21-2007, 02:00 AM
Okay, but this is the limit.

NYCSPlTZ
04-22-2007, 12:18 AM
Noshow verse:

BOOM

Spirits entombed, their flights shared - dash through night's air
Lights flare – a phenomenon peeps'll heed in night prayers
Atoms might fare at velocities nearing the speeds of light squared!!!
Despite glares - grappled a cepheid star, hurling with a massive thrust
Exploded it toward another, then breathed in the galactic dust!!!!
The result? In laymens, an astronomical flux of wavelengths
As rocks big as galaxies collided and pulsated like busts in phalanx!
Amen, that shit is sick son, but yo yo
Let me finish this Key up cuz black D’ll no show…

Hordes and groups of debates, they abhor the fluke-
Questioning if it was God or the primordial soup
Ha....Started to have an eye, apart from the grandeur I
Taught ancients from the East the art of the samuri
God/me or Aero the devil? Dudes fearin the allegiance
I told aliens to give the pyramids to Egypt
My cock is wide, girls bow and lost an eye
I saw the last soldier fall on the ground of Thermopylae

Yea I’m done smh no showers

Yurluzn Bracket
04-22-2007, 12:29 AM
Amen, that shit is sick son, but yo yo
Let me finish this Key up cuz black D’ll no show…
^^^^DIED IN MID VERSE FROM THAT SO I NEVER FINISHED READING...SHIT

Multis-NYC
Imagery-NYC
Flow-NYC
Depth-NYC
On Topic-Black D(lmao)
Creativity-NYC(for that middle line)

Overall-NYC

:)

ZuLou
04-23-2007, 07:52 AM
Black D is DQ'd. NYC wins