I now write Raise a lot more than .meZ, heres some I've done....

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00055.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00054.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00053.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00052.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00051.jpg

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00050.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00049.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00048.jpg

I feel I've elevated quite a lot since I last posted sketches. Constructive criticism, which one is your favourite etc etc. please...

Cmon people I'd like some feedback if possible...

That skyline one is great, really like the lettering and the off-kilter buildings. That orange one is pretty damn good as well.

^^ Agree,

I also thought this was one of your better ones
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00052.jpg

Its Aight..

^^ Agree,

I also thought this was one of your better ones
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00052.jpg

I AGREE this is easily one of your BEST so far.....

Heres some more
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00058.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00059.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00057.jpg

comments

Yeah you're definately getting better mez, i prefer the ones which are kept in proprtion and the letters are relatively simple round the edges. i like the complex lines of your lettering though. The top one and bottom are your best as well as the one admrlz and gook mentioned, although that one would look a lot better if the letters weren't so cramped. Love the colours man, bare original. Keep it up mate.

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00059.jpg

This one would be proper good if the S and E were as simple as the first letter.


http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00058.jpg

^Easily your best man, keep it up.

first of all....
i LOVE your dedication homie...thats the foremost important ingredient needed to be better...and you have a lot of it.....the only thing that i would like to comment/judge on is you thickness of you letters...they are weird in a way that bothers my eyes...not that its just horrible...but that i think that your lineage should be more controlled.....try to think of you block letters as your tag and then keep the lines all in harmony with each other nahmean.....if not i can easily show you....

not feeling any of them....your to into the flashyness lol...not hating just letting you know...seems your stuck on one letter style and can't get anything else out.....try coming up with some better letter styles switch it up and bomb some pages.....your handys need work also...keep elevating

first of all....


i LOVE your dedication homie...thats the foremost important ingredient needed to be better...and you have a lot of it.....the only thing that i would like to comment/judge on is you thickness of you letters...they are weird in a way that bothers my eyes...not that its just horrible...but that i think that your lineage should be more controlled.....try to think of you block letters as your tag and then keep the lines all in harmony with each other nahmean.....if not i can easily show you....


as in they should be consistent the whole way through?

right well ive got a few more....

I tried a thinner letter and I think these came out alright...
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00064.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00061.jpg
Heres an 'RZ', I like the background on this one, different to what I originally planned but still came out nice (IMO)
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00060.jpg
Ive been working on my throw-ups

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00062.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00063.jpg

More on next post...

Sorry all these are a bit blurry, taken with my phone...

I tried a little character, the put some simple letters behind it
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00065.jpg

A 3D attempt at RZ

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e34/mez16/DSC00066.jpg