Mafioso
04-28-2007, 10:20 PM
Ive looked at alot of shit b4 so i decided to do my own piece.
Im a cowboys fan, as u can see.
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4125/04280720141zg3.jpg
Feed = Rep:)
4fifth
04-28-2007, 10:29 PM
ok first UM NO..u got graff all wrong get a tutorial...sorry
1/10
Tekstyle
04-28-2007, 11:58 PM
^hater......but truthfully yea....thats not really along the lines of "graff" but...uh....nice post though
Al-Capone
04-29-2007, 08:15 AM
gosh,so harsh in here
just to tell you that football has nothing with football
,but its a nice start though try making keyboard letters for a while and then you can evolve to something nice
Mafioso
04-29-2007, 11:27 AM
Thanks for the feed Al and Tek. 4fifth go suck a dick.
Just so yall know i really didnt try to make graff but instead i was just meesing with the letters tryin to make a "different" design that is not often used.
I'll drop another soon.
ignore 4fifth ive never seen him post anything worthwhile. To be honest for a first drop it is above average. Its important to keep practising and with time (not as long as you'd think) you will get a lot better. Try different words, colours and styles and you will improve.
keep up
ILL Mefodz
04-30-2007, 03:30 PM
Ive looked at alot of shit b4 so i decided to do my own piece.
Im a cowboys fan, as u can see.
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4125/04280720141zg3.jpg
Feed = Rep:)
wasnt feelin th is homie...try doin your letters in blocks. its easier that way. n make sure your 3d goes in thesame direction unless your goin for an inwards pointy look. but keep doin your thing. everyone starts off weak. i wasnt so great myself. im still not. keep workin.
peace
can anybody apart from Feral and War actually make a post that is decent critique? Why not give helpful advice instead of 'I dont like it', how does that help you elevate?
SomethingAwfl
04-30-2007, 06:06 PM
Sure it's not wildstyle, but I still think its kind of graffish. I like the font you used and how its connected with the outline. The shadowing is done pretty well. Go for a little more complexity next time, like part of the S wrapped around the Y or the C having a long bottom that turns into an underline for the whole word. Also, try adding some more common graffiti aspects to it, like intersecting arrows, and those breaks where a letter breaks off into pieces.