Since this is the first time we are doing a poetry league, rules will be fairly lenient. Don't be surprised if things change next week....

For now:

Line Limit: 50 lines
Check In By: Saturday, June 2, 2007 11:59pm
Poem Due By: Wednesday, June 6, 2007 11:59pm
3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, or first to 5 wins

NO EXTENSIONS WILL BE GIVEN! Call it tough love... but if you want to be part, please make the time.


You will be voting on:

- On Topic
- Depth
- Imagery
- Originality
- Flow
- Word Choice/Diction
- Enjoyment
- Overall

(A lot like the Topical League)

Not just "A" did better than "B", but explain WHY... we are all here to elevate and get more feedback on our work!

YOU MUST vote on at least 2 other battles to make this work in the beginning!!!

TOPIC: War, from a child's perspective. Write as you will.

thanks bump.



my check

dude hasnt checked man...do i still need to drop?!

My eyes grow comfort from the bullets
the resite prayers to die for.
i cry more over left overs;
that are placed in hidden places
just like the way, my daddy hid from me.
playing hide and seek...
it was so cheap yet,
i was so fond of the thought i was being chased.
the adrenaline rush left me
asleep with these frantic emotions.
yet... the game was over soon after...
i was caught but never had the energy
to get back up.













meh something to show for as a no show verse.
lmfao

That's All That's Needed Lol... I Knew Kharn Would No Show... Havn't Seen Him Drop ONE Thing He Signs In For.. Pathetic..

Thanks for droppnig osmething, Method... If you had a real one written for an actual battle, go ahead and PM it to me... I'll post it up in the Poetry forum for feedback without your links. :)