Getting round two underway....


Line Limit: 50 lines
Check In By: Saturday June 16, 2007 11:59pm ET
Poem Due By: Tuesday June 19, 2007 11:59pm

If you no-show, you will not be permitted to participate in the next round. If it becomes a habit, you will not be a part of this league.

NO EXTENSIONS WILL BE GIVEN! Call it tough love... but if you want to be part, please make the time.


You will be voting on:

- On Topic
- Depth
- Imagery
- Originality
- Flow
- Word Choice/Diction
- Enjoyment
- Overall

(A lot like the Topical League)

Not just "A" did better than "B", but explain WHY... we are all here to elevate and get more feedback on our work!

YOU MUST vote on at least 2 other battles to make this work in the beginning!!! If you do not vote, votes may be discounted from your battle.

TOPIC: You are a con man who falls in love with their victim... Explain the events that follow. Do you follow through? Do you let them out of it? Are there repercussions for your actions?

Good luck, gentlemen!

checking in

check if i dont show sorry to you all and just sign me out but if i show then scratch that...


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Die heart; directors cut

Knocking on heavens doors…
…well at least I thought it was heaven.
a pearly gate gold as can be…
…shaded it’s reflection off my mascara.
The heat no more I could take…
…so the sweat descended, like the waterfalls of Niagara.
So soft and gentle,
…palms all sweaty as well.


Light dims in so I get up and begin shooting.
No mercy what so ever,
I guess…
Piercing each enemy entering through the door,
…they wouldn’t let me in for free.
GAYS...
Beauty though pierces me slowly,
…they way her suit accents her body.
Was just a beauty to be in the same room…
…now I leave… cause I ran out of bullets.
So good-bye..
…as the pearly gates have opened for me.

DIRECTOR: CUT... great scene guys. thats a wrap.



stale no show verse

Method Wins... Closed...