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Han Solo 08-15-2007 07:01 PM

Jon vs. bayshark
 
5 bars max, house rules, due in 2 days tops.


i'll drop a verse in a little while.

bayshark 08-16-2007 02:18 AM

Re: Jon vs. bayshark
 
Imma take care of my links tomorrow, but before i went to bed, i wanted to give this to you. My 4 bars.

************************************************** *******
This guy don’t battle rap, he’s a fag with a tattoo on his lower back, call him elton john on the flow-track/
I dispise fruits like witherspoon so imma snap his spine in half, slap him on his saddle n have him head to the mountains with a broke-back/

I keep my bars stored at fort knox, my metaphores are in an extended clip in a glock, so im equipt for a k.o. win/
That means I can spray, 24k, to spoons face with infinent shots, then cool him off, so give the bitch version, of snoop a cup of juice with no gin/

Sorry but u lose kid, my punches are for your spoon to scoop n chew this, like your mom on your dogs knob you blew it/
This was ruthless, anyone battle him, it’s a guaranteed win, "its so easy even a caveman can do it"/

Your best bet is to be ghost, disappear, leave, never repost, believe its clear, read this close, whether west or east coast, you’ll know who took the show/
So imma end this on a good note, and let you know spoon, I put novacaine to ease the pain of this flow, so there was no pain and no gain when you get k.o.’d.

bayshark 08-16-2007 02:59 AM

Re: Jon vs. bayshark
 
******Explanations******
1
Elton John- Gay musical artist
Back Broke= Brokeback Mountain

2
Fort Knox- Where all US gold is stored (if your dumb n dont know)
24k= 24 karats obviously
Sippin on Gin and Juice- By Snoop (If you dont know that you shouldnt be on a rap site lol

3
Blew it- Blow job and losing
Geico- Caveman commercial

4
Self explanatory
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bayshark 08-16-2007 08:12 PM

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...=1#post1352669
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...=1#post1352680

Han Solo 08-16-2007 11:50 PM

Re: Jon vs. bayshark
 
wow..you suck! bet a thousand bucks i can kill a shark without a line or a hook
despite your a rook, don't mean your composing 4 string quartets, when i say you rhyme like opus!
your verse requires a book? but even in libraries get "shh'd!.."so stop explaining ya' punches
to my flames you a munchkin!..and wouldn't mecca dope line, exporting opium with iranian gunmen!!
i see frail in your cuzzin!..i ain't like them others using symbols, i'm piping this kids dreams!
and i ain't sweating you bite me, cuz no ones died of a shark attack..since jersey shores of 1916!!



that should be enuff.

Han Solo 08-17-2007 12:41 AM

Re: Jon vs. bayshark
 
i meant "shushed!" there...

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=104870
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=104484

Han Solo 08-17-2007 03:16 PM

Re: Jon vs. bayshark
 
fuck it..

this fucking kid's a joke! ever seen his lyric qoutes? i think Doctor Suess has a better surgical hand
i murdered you fam, and your whining is just 'dictionaries in helicopters'..just words of a fan!!
you deserved to be banned! n' fucking fake, adjust ya' weight..before i really have to snuff ya' face!
i mean..with ya' name not grabbing 'capitols', ya' file won't reach a 'supreme court'..cuz ya' death's not even an 'upper case'!!

bayshark 08-17-2007 07:05 PM

Re: Jon vs. bayshark
 
Man please, if you wanna battle again we can do that, but dont post up more flows, you already had your chance, lol....

Han Solo 08-17-2007 10:22 PM

Re: Jon vs. bayshark
 
well, after you swaying the battle i think we're about even.

jacoblat 08-18-2007 10:15 AM

Re: Jon vs. bayshark
 
I think the both of you were wack. I this is kind of retarded, you have a 4 bar battle? At least make it a full 8 bar verse, you guys are stretching 4 bars out to 8 bars anyway might as well call it what it is. And those fuckin metaphors go on for days. Punchlines are supposed to be quick and unexplained, thats why they are called PUNCHlines. I mean, Johnny takes it because his multi's were... existant... and his rhyme scheme kicked the shit out of baysharks, and bayshark was stretching like it was 8 in the morning. But I think both of your battle structures need to be cleaned up. Do work.


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