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Kronologik' 01-28-2006 12:08 PM

Kronologik vs NYCSPITS (0-2)
 
4 Bars
Vet Votes Only
No Hate/Unexplained/Bullshit Votes
Drop 1 Hour After You Check In

Good luck man

Edit:
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...t=59518&page=2
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...t=60110&page=2

NYCSPITS 01-28-2006 12:09 PM

Re: Kronologik vs NYCSPITS
 
check will get links lata

NYCSPITS 01-28-2006 12:38 PM

Re: Kronologik vs NYCSPITS
 
This being-is-heinous, and his freein-is-lamest
Cuz like "gay porn w/ Bruce" he got "lee-in-his-anus" *
U Keyin-ya-gayness but ya proving-frail
Only time "Kro-bars rip shit" is removing-nails
Ya food-is-stale, cheatin on topicals this rotten-dude-is-rude
Leave logik on the floor like "forgotten-rubix-cubes"
He flew-the-coup cuz u and ya male hoes-will-wrestle-gay
Cuz "Pourin milk in cereal" the only way ya "flows-is-special-K"

* Lost to Lee J.

** Note the links on bars 2 and 4

good luck

NYCSPITS 01-28-2006 12:49 PM

Re: Kronologik vs NYCSPITS
 
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=59518

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...d=1#post723334

no freepostin from non-vets plz

Kronologik' 01-28-2006 12:55 PM

Re: Kronologik vs NYCSPITS
 
^ Nice verse man

This American's gettin killed by a European, like Apollo~in~Rocky~Four
And chasing 'chocolate bars' the only time he followed~a~Topic~before!
This trick~is~lame, must be watchin horror flicks coz this bitch~is~afraid
Dude's a kid, Click~his~name! only awards he ever got were in~the~arcade!*
Shit, Even if I was Hindu, I still wouldn't believe in Re~Ink~R~Nay~Shun
Alliteration? Spits still some solitary soldier seen Seeking~Salvation
Ya Reign has Dropped, like losing towels in showers ya quickly~shamed
Text Champion? 15 wins and yet you've still had more~than~16~names**


* Click his username on the left, you'll see what I mean
** He has loads of names coz he keeps gettin banned. 2 of his other names - Re~Ink~R~Nay~Shun & ReignDrops

Click the links for references

NYCSPITS 01-28-2006 06:31 PM

Re: Kronologik vs NYCSPITS (0-0)
 
People sleepin like it's a slumber party n shit...

.3-Clips. 01-28-2006 08:00 PM

Re: Kronologik vs NYCSPITS (0-0)
 
Punches -tie
Wordplay -kron
Flow -tie
Personals -NYC
Multi's -NYC
Overall -NYC
very good flow and word choice for both of u...was pretty decent battle and very close but i have to give the edge to NYC. i was feelin him a lil more. nice job u 2

Vokals 01-28-2006 08:13 PM

Re: Kronologik vs NYCSPITS (0-0)
 
i know u 2 said vet votes, but people gotta vote on somethin for links

up to u whether u count it or not

ILLustrate™ 01-28-2006 08:56 PM

Re: Kronologik vs NYCSPITS (0-0)
 
I don't know whether you will accept this cus i'm not a vet, but I have battled for a while now none the less. It isn't for links I just thought it was a good battle.


This being-is-heinous, and his freein-is-lamest
Cuz like "gay porn w/ Bruce" he got "lee-in-his-anus" *
Flow was dope here, ill opener, personal and hit hard, nice multie too

U Keyin-ya-gayness but ya proving-frail
Only time "Kro-bars rip shit" is removing-nails
Another personal, flow again fire, can’t fault this

Ya food-is-stale, cheatin on topicals this rotten-dude-is-rude
Leave logik on the floor like "forgotten-rubix-cubes"
Nice metaphor here, multie was ill, good bar

He flew-the-coup cuz u and ya male hoes-will-wrestle-gay
Cuz "Pourin milk in cereal" the only way ya "flows-is-special-K"
Wasn’t sure bout the first line, but the second was funny, nice punch

Overall: Your flow and multies are faultless in this verse, your punches and the metaphors are creative and hard. Very nice verse.



This American's gettin killed by a European, like Apollo~in~Rocky~Four
And chasing 'chocolate bars' the only time he followed~a~Topic~before!
I liked this, metaphors were dope, multies dope too, nice first line LoL

This trick~is~lame, must be watchin horror flicks coz this bitch~is~afraid
Dude's a kid, Click~his~name! only awards he ever got were in~the~arcade!*
The end rhyme of the second line was off, but the rest of the bar was nice and personal

Shit, Even if I was Hindu, I still wouldn't believe in Re~Ink~R~Nay~Shun
Alliteration? Spits still some solitary soldier seen Seeking~Salvation
Creative second line, first line seemed a lil weak to me. Decent though

Ya Reign has Dropped, like losing towels in showers ya quickly~shamed
Text Champion? 15 wins and yet you've still had more~than~16~names**
Multies nice here, punch was hard and you got the personals too. Very good ender.

Overall: Another very nice verse, apart from the one rhyme which seemed off to me and maybe one or two weaker lines, this was a good verse.

This was a nice battle, refreshing to see some creative lines. Very close but…

Vote - NYCSPITS

Speak. 01-28-2006 09:44 PM

Re: Kronologik vs NYCSPITS (0-0)
 
[COLOR="Black"]NYC

This being-is-heinous, and his freein-is-lamest
Cuz like "gay porn w/ Bruce" he got "lee-in-his-anus" *

Quote:

nice opener, good hittin punch/personal. and nice fow, 5/5
U Keyin-ya-gayness but ya proving-frail
Only time "Kro-bars rip shit" is removing-nails

Quote:

nice punch with wordplay, and good meta 4/5
Ya food-is-stale, cheatin on topicals this rotten-dude-is-rude
Leave logik on the floor like "forgotten-rubix-cubes"

Quote:

once again, good punch and metaphor. 4/5
He flew-the-coup cuz u and ya male hoes-will-wrestle-gay
Cuz "Pourin milk in cereal" the only way ya "flows-is-special-K"

Quote:

nice punch, good flow, 3.5/5

overall: 16.5/20
Kron

This American's gettin killed by a European, like Apollo~in~Rocky~Four
And chasing 'chocolate bars' the only time he followed~a~Topic~before!

Quote:

ok opener, coo punch/personal also, like the multi. 4.5/10
This trick~is~lame, must be watchin horror flicks coz this bitch~is~afraid
Dude's a kid, Click~his~name! only awards he ever got were in~the~arcade!*

Quote:

lol, solid personal. again, nice flow. 4/10
Shit, Even if I was Hindu, I still wouldn't believe in Re~Ink~R~Nay~Shun
Alliteration? Spits still some solitary soldier seen Seeking~Salvation

Quote:

good hard hittin punch, and nice personal. multi was nice... again 4.5
Ya Reign has Dropped, like losing towels in showers ya quickly~shamed
Text Champion? 15 wins and yet you've still had more~than~16~names**

Quote:

good personal, nice flow to it, 4/10

overall: 17/20

vote: Kron

hella nice battle

one.


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