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Dominate 08-07-2008 09:55 AM

Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
5ish bars, match whoever goes first
Due midnight sunday EST at the latest

Good luck!

I'll get links with my verse

Hawk. 08-07-2008 09:58 AM

Re: Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
...Check!
Il go create some links later.
Good luck.


Hawk. 08-10-2008 09:17 PM

Re: Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
I didn't think you were going to post to be honest
[Which was obviously a sound assumption]
...So yeah i didn't text my ass off, meh it's still solid though.
Just post when you get a chance man it's cool.


Hawk


…Let’s go

I will disparage your verses, this dudes got no following like average sherpa’s
Because people only listen to dom in ears when dealing with arrogant workers

Reps barren & worthless! Never had provisions of drugs or been envisioned with slugs
But the way dom’s had a patchy career… I would swear that he was a parisian thug

…See I’ve done my revision and dug!

In 04’ you made the decision to suck... give up? Man I think you oughta
As the way his diss still is below standards, it’s like unclean drinking water

No need too think to slaughter, I will leave your stomach bloated like a cheap diet
Because if my
foe know logical... then he should have understood when too keep quiet

Why keep trying!? Dom's demise begins as ain't no-one going to side with him
Because even if he comes with
a tactic... he will no doubt still lack the drive to win

Hawk.

Expo's
- Domineers
- Apache
- Distill
- Phonological [Study of speech]
- Atactic [Ataxia affects your motor skills]

Dominate 08-11-2008 09:52 AM

Re: Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
Nah, I've never not had a verse for an opponent that's had one for me, just thought this wasn't going ahead for a min... anyway,


Quote:

Originally Posted by Hawk.
I’m far from a top head on the ave

Please, Lemme Quote you these Lines^, Seems You Ain’t Even Dope through Weak Sites
So a Site Battle Roster? Only Way HHA ‘Ad Hoc’ is if they DON’T use Pre-Writes
Nothin Jewish but I Told you - Leave ight? Retreat, or this Thread’s ya Last Stand
You’ll Doubtless Fail, Won’t Even ‘Make it Out to Bail’ w/o writing Cheques to Batman
Battle Me? Give Death a Lapdance.. the Fact Stands no Bitches can See Me
So Witless & Cheesy, I’ll ‘Rub him Out, & it’s Granted’ - like Wishes from Genies
Peer Approval: He’s Frenziedly Seeking.. It’s Near to Crucial whenever he’s Lousy/Wack
So When I Beat ‘em..
This ‘Trampoline on His Buddies’ so Much they’ll have to Buy him a Bouncing Mat
Just Announcing Facts, I Pack no Lies – Honestly, You Lack Dope Lines..
Facing me is an Uphill Battle
And for you the ‘Incline’s too Much’, like the very Reason you HAVE no Life:
Quote:

Originally Posted by Hawk’s HHA profile
Total Posts: 4,997
Posts Per Day: 11.22




- ad hoc (hawk) means off the top, impromptu, etc
- christian bale plays batman... make a cheque out to someone
- granted = settled, decided etc or as in to grant a wish... rubbed out of a lamp
- tramp'll lean
- ink lines

Hawk. 08-11-2008 10:27 AM

Re: Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
AIght,
I wasn't sure if this was going down or not so let me just get another link.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...=127015&page=2

Good luck [Explained votes please]

Dominate 08-11-2008 10:33 AM

Re: Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
Yah, you too.. I'm gonna put a blanket ban down on scorecard votes with no reference to the verses, cool?

I forgot about links :/... guess I'll go get some...

Hawk. 08-11-2008 10:57 AM

Re: Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
Not being able to edit your posts in a battle is really fucking annoying.
...It would save alot of freeposts in battle threads.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...=126027&page=3

Okay theres my 2 links, if i need anymore let me know.
Im not sure what you mean by the votes but yeah im sure we on the same page just using differant ways of describing it... so what dom said
: )

Snale 08-11-2008 12:48 PM

Re: Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
good battle i'll vote tonight cause i got class in a few

also *moved*

Snale 08-11-2008 02:17 PM

Re: Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
Hawk


…Let’s go

I will disparage your verses, this dudes got no following like average sherpa’s
Because people only listen to dom in ears when dealing with arrogant workers
This is a bit forced concept is good, but how else would they listen to dom?

Reps barren & worthless! Never had provisions of drugs or been envisioned with slugs
But the way dom’s had a patchy career… I would swear that he was a parisian thug
lol dope wordplay

…See I’ve done my revision and dug!

In 04’ you made the decision to suck... give up? Man I think you oughta
As the way his diss still is below standards, it’s like unclean drinking water
nice punch/wordplay

No need too think to slaughter, I will leave your stomach bloated like a cheap diet
Because if my foe know logical... then he should have understood when too keep quiet
alright, wording was ehh...

Why keep trying!? Dom's demise begins as ain't no-one going to side with him
Because even if he comes with a tactic... he will no doubt still lack the drive to win
nice wordplay

---------------

dom

Please, Lemme Quote you these Lines^, Seems You Ain’t Even Dope through Weak Sites
So a Site Battle Roster? Only Way HHA ‘Ad Hoc’ is if they DON’T use Pre-Writes
nice personal


Nothin Jewish but I Told you - Leave ight? Retreat, or this Thread’s ya Last Stand
You’ll Doubtless Fail, Won’t Even ‘Make it Out to Bail’ w/o writing Cheques to Batman
dope wordplay


Battle Me? Give Death a Lapdance.. the Fact Stands no Bitches can See Me
So Witless & Cheesy, I’ll ‘Rub him Out, & it’s Granted’ - like Wishes from Genies
Not feeling this bar, wordplay was alright, set up wasn't too relevant


Peer Approval: He’s Frenziedly Seeking.. It’s Near to Crucial whenever he’s Lousy/Wack
So When I Beat ‘em..
This ‘Trampoline on His Buddies’ so Much they’ll have to Buy him a Bouncing Mat
Dope personal and wordplay

Just Announcing Facts, I Pack no Lies – Honestly, You Lack Dope Lines..
Facing me is an Uphill Battle
And for you the ‘Incline’s too Much’, like the very Reason you HAVE no Life:
LOL nice personal

punches-dominate, his personals made the punches hit harder
personals-Dominate
wordplay-hawk, dom was close behind, but hawk had some dope wordplay
nameplay-tied, both has one bar
metas-tied

Vote-dom

very close battle, i felt dom edged it because of the personal level he brought with the punches.

both has about equal wordplay and everything else, the only factor that made a difference was dom got right at hawk with personals, while hak's verse was more suited with general wordplay.

Great battle, you two.

GodLikeTwo 08-11-2008 03:41 PM

Re: Dominate -vs- Hawk
 
I will disparage your verses, this dudes got no following like average sherpa’s
Because people only listen to dom in ears when dealing with arrogant workers
Alright.
Reps barren & worthless! Never had provisions of drugs or been envisioned with slugs
But the way dom’s had a patchy career… I would swear that he was a parisian thug
Coolish, decent.
In 04’ you made the decision to suck... give up? Man I think you oughta
As the way his diss still is below standards, it’s like unclean drinking water
Pretty nice.
No need too think to slaughter, I will leave your stomach bloated like a cheap diet
Because if my
foe know logical... then he should have understood when too keep quiet
Not feeling, it's ok though.
Why keep trying!? Dom's demise begins as ain't no-one going to side with him
Because even if he comes with
a tactic... he will no doubt still lack the drive to win
Again, not really feeling, although ok.

.........

Please, Lemme Quote you these Lines^, Seems You Ain’t Even Dope through Weak Sites
So a Site Battle Roster? Only Way HHA ‘Ad Hoc’ is if they DON’T use Pre-Writes
Simple, ok.
Nothin Jewish but I Told you - Leave ight? Retreat, or this Thread’s ya Last Stand
You’ll Doubtless Fail, Won’t Even ‘Make it Out to Bail’ w/o writing Cheques to Batman
Lol, cool.
Battle Me? Give Death a Lapdance.. the Fact Stands no Bitches can See Me
So Witless & Cheesy, I’ll ‘Rub him Out, & it’s Granted’ - like Wishes from Genies
Weak, not feeling.
Peer Approval: He’s Frenziedly Seeking.. It’s Near to Crucial whenever he’s Lousy/Wack
So When I Beat ‘em..
This ‘Trampoline on His Buddies’ so Much they’ll have to Buy him a Bouncing Mat
Nice wordplay/punch.
Just Announcing Facts, I Pack no Lies – Honestly, You Lack Dope Lines..
Facing me is an Uphill Battle
And for you the ‘Incline’s too Much’, like the very Reason you HAVE no Life:
Decent personal.

........

Hm, pretty close, let's go cats.

Flow/structure/multis- Both were basically on point most of the battle.. some fall offs, but yeah Tie.
Punches- Really close.. hawk had hard punches throughout, and Dom fell off a little on this... Hawk.
Personals- Dom
Wordplay- Hawk had wordplay in every bar, but dom's was a bit more complex... tie.
Creativity- Tie
Consistency- Hawk edges barly..
Enjoyment- Dom

Overall- Blah, this is way too close really.. both came pretty nice and consistent.. it was a decent battle, but I have to call it a Tie, sorry guys.. :( .




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