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Old 03-02-2008, 09:00 PM   #36
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Re: Harsh vs PayRoll

Damn.. doesn't anyone (besides Ell) explain a vote these days? Here:

PAYROLL

I c u come equipped wit them Tales...Waitin!, 2 drop Pre-written bars, So u can jus Sit in my Trail
U TUN now?, So Shit get Thick n ya Bail...Son, thats 'Lower than a Slugs Nuts', But 'You like Dickriding Snale!'/

OK double wp concept & personal

Me,You know I Dont Fake!...I'll Leave u wit 'Blank-Thoughts', n a 'Idle Brain'
Ill make 'u Kneel' to ya 'Rivals Reign'...When I "Rip LOD's heart-out", like "Ohio State loosin the Title Game"/(if u dont get dont even vote)

I get the LOD/legion of doom thing, I'm guessin Harsh is Lod.. ? If so this is an OK flip.. If not, & LOD is a reference to something you said earlier in the bar it's ehh, not feelin

I aint Even Seen it, I dont Believe wut he wrote...Legion of Doom,Please, Hes Needing Hope
his teammates a Joke, so he aint Recieving a Vote, n the Only Way u'll see 'H, Rock'...Is 'Free-Bassing Dope!'/

Nahh.. very generic nameplay, it was boring

Ive never, Felt this Poets Pain...ill make u Fold in Shame, ull be Exposed as Lame!
cuz ya brains useless, n "Frank Lucas"...Couldnt Help "H, Control the Game"/

This was better than the last line but drugs flips are pretty much ALL generic/played.. also two in a row isn't good

I would Make a Run at ya Spouse...But ur Gay! thats y when verses Cum Hard, u Come out ya Blouse
n y ur Landing None in this Joust...Cuz the "Last 2 Letters in ya name", Is the "best thing 2 Ever come out ya Mouth"/("Sh"...Silence!)

OK nameflip, more creative than the others

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HARSH:

Hes got uncontrolled rage since his goals stay uncompleted cause UL beat his whole base
Youd think we had terrible heartburn the way we ran through every one of ROLL-aids*

Cool personal, you set it up well in the first line. WP's ok

You get owned-and-sonned, You make NO DINERO and stay broke ya chump
So throw ya ones! It’s like mexico switched to the Euro the way Pay-so(Peso) is done!

Good wp concept, except you shoulda flipped it with Spain instead of Mexico - they actually went from pesos to euros.. Mexico isn't even in Europe... But yea the concept was OK

Bring your ‘A’ game and I just keep commin up with ways to make the crowd hate it
His sounds basic, I must love buying new cars the way I keep making “Down Pay-Mints’

OK wp.. coulda made it a stronger punch somehow

It’s a sad matter this wack rapper could never hit the big screen youd hear mad laughter
We’ll be seeing PAY-loss fast after, cause im fuckin up THIS ROLE(ROLL) like bad actors

OK nameflip here

His crews some hos though, I already beat this clown in a tag match im abusing bozo,
This battles like Pay seeing his best crew members leave, we know he’ll be ‘losing SOLO’**

OK personal & punch


delivery: Harsh, less filler and he sometimes used his set up line to actually set up the punch
personals: Harsh - 2 personals & 3 nameflips vs 1 personal and 4 nameflips
punches: Payroll - 'you d/r snale' and 'best thing you ever said was shh' were the best punch concepts, followed closely by H's opener.. the rest was all "I'll kill you" stuff from both
complexity: tie, didn't think either outdid their opponent by a considerable margin here
creativity: Harsh, the two drug references from Pay were the most generic things in this battle
enjoyability: Harsh, I found less faults with his verse & preffered the to-the-point delivery


Vote = Harsh
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