Thread: jos1 vs arko
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Old 03-11-2008, 12:21 PM   #7
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Re: jos1 vs arko

Jos1 -
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can't match me mentally dude, make sure you're credentials are scooped
after i beat you over and over like instrumentals on loop
decent opener... wording coulda set it up a little better

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guess you meant to be rude, so watch close as i roam the dark
the capture and burn this bitch, like Joan of arc
nah... wasnt hitting too good here

[quote]then stone ya heart, slash your back and shock your front
beer here for a year so i guess this loss starts your sophmore slump[quote]

not good....

Arko -
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Hold it... you'll never link-bar's-like astronaurts finding-life-on MAR'S
Stop! ya-not-hittin like ya face on rw's ya just-not-FITTIN
didnt rhyme... no punch

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Like ya-written's cause il shatter ya face-tastin pain~bitten
Stand up! cause your bar's cant-look-tall like they were "sitting"
putting-dashes-in-your-text-doesnt-make-it-a-multi.... the concept of the punch was there, tho generic, if it were worded better, maybe it woulda been more effective

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Leave..jos barly-breathin-heavin..dude dead best-be-belivin leave this man...
"Defeated" leave this whole battle-scene-heated like you upset..like-children-wheppin
focused too much on the flow, w/o considering the structure and the punch...
______________________
punches - Jos1
personals - neither
name/wordplay - neither
flow - Arko
structure - Jos1
wit/creativity - eh, Jos1, if any

overall, this was a pretty weak battle to say the least.... Arko, you need to focus on your punches rather then multis and flow... Jos1, you got potential... make your punches a little more direct w/ some personals...

and also, STFU IronLung...

w/ all ^that^ said....

VOTE: JOS1
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