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Old 11-05-2008, 07:40 PM   #1
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My Mate Pen And Paper

When I write these rhymes sometimes I loose respect,
For this magical hex thatís been cursed on my neck,
Im a shipwreck at best, cause this minds too complex,
To forget or regret these lyrics that jump in my head,
Or this pad and this pen, that I badly want to send,
Back to its owner but ends back on my bed,
So instead this led bluntens with words that ive said,
In my defense in the past, but its how this verse starts,
Thatís how broken hearts tend to mend and lasts,
Till the broken parts of this puzzle come together and sparks,
And ignites your mind like land mines for rhymes,
And this cycle continues like human kind and crime,
Thatís why I work blind, like a worn out appliance,
Cause soon as I start writing without denying gods trying,
And finding ways for this wordplay craze to obey,
And come out on this page, that one day makes me famous,
Whether painful or painless, full of shame or shameless,
The only mate I play with, is this pen and paper, so take it,
To a level of greatness, while I create bliss on this paper,
Like a razor, this pen trims fat and leaves me weightless.
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Old 11-18-2008, 09:09 PM   #2
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Re: My Mate Pen And Paper

wiggety whak yo
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Old 11-27-2008, 06:53 PM   #3
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I liked the first couple of lines.
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I thought this board was for graffiti......
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Old 11-28-2008, 06:34 PM   #5
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"The Written Wall Share your graffiti pieces and get some tips from fellow heads."

Im not a head, but im a step ahead of you
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"The Written Wall Share your graffiti pieces and get some tips from fellow heads."

Im not a head, but im a step ahead of you
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who the fuck are you talking to.
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who the fuck are you talking to.
I was talking to the person that started this thread..
but now that you're getting a bit ridiculous, I'd like to know what in the fuck made you get so damn hostile?
Does it really fuckin matter if i said "ROASTED" to you?

calm it the fuck down son..
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^^ayyyy my bad foo i was havin a bad day that day. we coo?
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