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Old 01-24-2010, 03:28 PM   #1
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check ma flow

Listen… I cant control when it is my time ends
That’s why my rhyme sends lyrics so vibrant.
Cause when I spit I want the world to hear my voice
Sit and rejoice and listen to the sound of my voice
listen to my problems so they can make a different choice
sometimes its like whats the point, but I continue on
reminiscin on all the places that ive been and gone.
Shit in this song is true feelings its more than text
Not ready for whats ahead I cant afford whats next
Im absorbin in the shit around me tryin to drowned me
In tears lookin at my fears its astounding.
But death comes… I mean I know shit happens
I know its tragic but I just cant quit askin.
Man its magic, one-minute im alive and well
High as hell, then the next minute I might as well
Be dead my lifes gone stale, its like a nightmare
And right there is a bullet my head just might wear.
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Old 01-27-2010, 10:13 PM   #2
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Re: check ma flow

liked the last line the most man, nice peice for what it is
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Old 01-29-2010, 11:03 AM   #3
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Re: check ma flow

Pretty solid and I liked the piece.
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I know its tragic but I just cant quit askin.
Man its magic, one-minute im alive and well
High as hell, then the next minute I might as well
Was the best flow.

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Old 02-07-2010, 06:41 PM   #4
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Re: check ma flow

This flowed well. And the first 2 lines were great openers. Good drop overall.
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