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Old 02-04-2005, 12:27 PM   #1
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YOUR TOPIC: You are extremely drunk at a club. You meet a girl/man and take her/him home with you. Things start geting heavy, then halfway through you realise the girl/boy is one of your good friend's new girlfriend/boyfriend. What do you do?


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Old 02-04-2005, 02:08 PM   #2
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Re: ad~one 0-0 [-vs-] snowwizza 0-0

I hope you realize Im a girl and would not be taking a chic home with me anyways.......Checking in
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The Lord is the strength of my life; of whom shall I be afraid?
When the wicked came against me to eat up my flesh
My enemies and foes, they stumbled and fell
Though an army may encamp against me
My heart shall not fear
Though war may rise against me
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Old 02-04-2005, 08:25 PM   #3
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Re: ad~one 0-0 [-vs-] snowwizza 0-0

replace 'girl' with 'boy' and 'her' with 'him'... easily fixed
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Old 02-05-2005, 02:57 AM   #4
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...in...g'luck wiz...
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Old 02-07-2005, 05:20 PM   #5
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Re: ad~one 0-0 [-vs-] snowwizza 0-0

** I SCREAM **

…flashback to the night before…

phone rings
“you…wassup…it’s Terrell…get your raggedy ass down to the club tonight – I gotta hot new chick I’m datin & she’s bringin some friends…who knows you might finally get some instead of going home solo playing with ya twinky..ha ha”

here we go again…see…..

I’d be lyin if I said I excelled in the female department…that don’t stop-me-tryin/
De-fyin knock back after knock back…a barrage of women not-re-plyin/
So tonight I brace myself for the battlefield…an army of beauties that’re too-cute/
My white horse – it’s a taxi cab…my suit of armour – a brand new-suit/
I’m ready for the sights-and-the-sounds of another night-on-the-town/
Today was a failure…it’s a whole new ‘day’ when the sun light-goes-down/
So I’m getting real hyped…this could be alright – perhaps tonights my-night/
I’m feelin syched about this evening & I aint leavin without a fly-type/

Ego inflated – I’m ready for war…
Ego deflated – I spot the queue at the door…
Nights turning sour – I mean what’s the point…
Half an hour later – I finally check in the joint….

Straight to the bar gotta quench a thirst…spill beer on my new shirt/
Is it possible that this nights going to get any worse?/
ten drinks later & the liqours on a fast course directly to my head/
Terrell & here...i look like a loser...prepare to head home to bed/
Then I spy two fine ladies standing over by the dance-floor/
‘take a chance man…ya might score…time to make an advance-or/
pussy out again…are you man?...nod head…well act like-one'/

think of something dope to say make my approach to the right-one/
I step and say “can I buy you a drink – cos you look hotttt"…she slaps-my-face/
Stumble & mumble “guess that meas you won’t be comin back-to-my-place”/
She stomps off & her friend laughs – I ask “why didn’t ya warn-me?”/
She says my approach was too corny – reply “at least she didn’t ignore-me”/
She laughs & says don’t worry her friends uptight – buy me-a-beer/
What’s going on here – a beauty before me talking to me…she’s-a-queer/
But to my surprise we get to chattin -…her humour compliments her exquisite beauty/
Her personality’s down to earth – outta my league…phone rings –‘excuse me’/

Just as she finishes her conversation my pager beeps/
‘Terrell…I’m runnin late…hook up with ya later…peace'/

she tells me she was meant to meet someone & I reply the same/
you wanna go where the music’s not so loud – like your place…I’m not in-sane/
grab her by the arm & head straight for the door where my chariot awaits/
spit my address at the cabbie say make haste – don’t touch the brakes/

reach my place…

upstairs things start getting hot & heavy…slowly she starts to undress/
I prepare to migrate south…she says she got something to confess/
I’ve been dating someone *insert nervous chuckle* “don’t tell me he’ll beat me”/
Nah he’ll never find out…besides Terrell’s a real sweetie…../

Pause…

Contemplate…this is wrong I mean-think…do we fornicate/
Been a long time between-drinks – plenty of fish…I use the wrong bait/
I gotta voice in my left ear sayin ‘go on do it’
I gotta voice in my right yellin ‘ you gotta pursue it’
In unison they’re screamin ‘drill her…fill her…slay…kill
Just let her lay still'
Terrell will never know…yeah but I always will…/
My emotions are wrestling…finally my urges tap-out/
Mates are forever…say it now before you get a chance to back-out/
“sorry you won’t believe this…I gotta ask you to leave'/
as the words fall from my lips I feel my nether region start to greave/
her expression – curious…progression – furious…’you got issues’ she storms-out/
another night home alone…one thing to do – get the tissues & some porn-out……/

next morning…knock at the door…..

it’s Terrell & some fine chick that I’ve never seen/
‘this is that girl I been datin…it ain’t her – **I SCREAM**/
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at the equinox i hold the sun and the moon in a might tightly-clenched-fist/
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i physically inhale stars and nebulars which i then impart-in-my-art/
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Lets start from the beginning................

Its bar time this chic is checking me from the other side of the dance floor
Im like damn shes really lusting I swear I've seen this chic before
B-more spots is twisted its to many hoes in here talkin they wanna lick it
But Im strictly~dick right I don’t know for some reason tonight my thoughts convicted
She keeps eyeing....my home~girl says its my thug appeal
Lets keep it real I’ve never walked that side of the street but shorties got my mind in wheels
So she approaches “buenos noches...in other words lets leave this spot
I can show you some things mommy half of these dudes just talk a lot”
“Whoa”...shorty got more game then Milton Bradley in her veins
Its strange but I let honey take my hand and walk me to her Range
She says...my spots bout half a mile up the block
Just relax I can tell you never touched cock simply lay back and let me rock

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This liquors got my head fucked maybe I should B-more conscious
But every~time shortie touches me I cant resist her hottness
Goose bumps inflame “am I seriously bout to let this chic give me brain
Fuck it...its only one night right...so lay back and let her do her thang”

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So we arrive quarter past 3 like Tweet my body cries “Oh My”
Didn’t even make it past the steps before shes on my neck whispering “you so fly”
Process of elimination Im sure you can tell where this took me
Thats when her man walks in my face drops when he says...whats up “C”
Quickly I pull my skirt up what the fuck its my boy La~La
He like “damn I know my girl gets down but I aint know you ate cock”
Shocked I apologize... “La its not what you think stop”
He winks and his face smirks... “na Wiz sup with a menage trois”
So........I guess you know what prospered
But for the story thats off the roster.............ha
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In this I will be confident



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Re: ad~one 0-0 [-vs-] snowwizza 0-0

DAMN- its a real close one, I know that,

AD-
FLOW-4/5
Creativity-5/5-liked the ending, real creative
MULTIS- 4/5 good use of them
Consistency- 3/5- lost my interest in some parts

16/20

WIZZA
FLOW-4/5
CREATIVITY-5/5-You flipped it, and i liked it. nice
Multis- 4/5 used some throughout
Consistency-5/5-you stayed on topic,was just right in length

18/20
My vote goes to Wizza, but both of yall brought it.
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good battle.....both had nice verses......i liked the way ad played his verse to show someone thinking about there mates that was cool.....but you did lose me in places flow through me off and i started to lose concentration........Wizza came sick with her verse liked the concept you flipped it nice, keep my attention throughout.......it was tight but i think its gotta go tio wizza due to the fact she keep my attention

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Flow: ad-one
Vocab: Tie
Multi's: ad-one
Imagery: Snow
Consistency:Snow
Complexity: Snow

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Re: ad~one 0-0 [-vs-] snowwizza 0-0(Vote Now)

Nice BTL, Y'all..

Ad'....

"..Contemplate…this is wrong I mean-think…do we fornicate/
Been a long time between-drinks – plenty of fish…I use the wrong bait.."

^ Fav' Bar.. U Kept This Feeling Of Bein' 'Jinx'd' Throughout Ur Drop, Which Was Funny @ Points..

"..She laughs & says don’t worry her friends uptight – buy me-a-beer.."

^ & Lines Like This One Threw Me Off.. U Used Da Word 'Her' In Da Wrong Context Of Da Conversation.. Other Than Dat, Nice Wordplay.. Flowed Good @ Some Spots.. Nice Multis.. Nice Imagery, Too..


'Wizza....

"..“Whoa”...shorty got more game then Milton Bradley in her veins
Its strange but I let honey take my hand and walk me to her Range.."

^ Fav' Bar.. I Was Really Surprised Dat U Actually Switched Da Topic Up To Dike It On Out, Lmao.. Dat In Itself Kept My Eyes Glue'd To Da Storyline Itself..

"..Process of elimination Im sure you can tell where this took me.."

^ Only Line Dat Kinda Thru Me Off, But I'm Assuming U Meant Da Absense Of Clothing.. Ha.. Could've Been Expanded On Alot, My Opinion.. Good Imagery, Nice Wordplay, A Few Multis Here & There.. But What Makes Ur Drop Stand Apart - In A World Of It's Own, U Can Say - Is Dat U Took Da 'Experimental' Route.. Gurl-On-Gurl....

Both Verses Were Nice, No Doubt.. I Like How Ad's Stayed On TRK Dealin' Wit' A More Conscience Issue, & Was Also Comedic In-Context.. A Feelin' Of Heartbreak/'Blue-Balls' @ Da End.. Ha.. However, 'Wizza's Was Jus' Mind-Bogglin'.. I Can Speak For Da Masses When I Say Dat I Didn't Expect What She Delivered.. What Was Lost In Actual Bars Was Made-Up For In Da Story, Fa' Sho'.. Dough I Feel She Could've Made It Much Longer.. But Da Point Of Her Drop Was Not Mistaken, & My Attention Was Kept, Moreso Not @ A Loss.. Good BTL By Both Tex'cees.. My Vote....

'Wizza.. Stay Up, PPLZ.. :cool: Trillz..
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