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Old 02-29-2008, 04:50 PM   #1
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Re: Don Delucci vs. Maleficent

This faggot replies but don't answer, my rhymes will get quotes faster.
He thinks he spits acid so he named himself after somebody who died from throat cancer*..

Im loving the hype, but he dont want no trouble with I.
If this stumbling guy is Driving Drunk; I guess I'm the DWI**..

He'll meet his crumbling demise, cuz when he spits his weak shit.
I'll show Double D's*** more fake than Pamela Lee's tits..

Jesus!! I got cold hearted mutha fuckas feelin the heat.
Why rip him wit a fourth bar when i just killed him in three..

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**-self explanatory but DWI is Driving While Influenced
***-His initials is DD=Double D's to all the idiots

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Old 03-02-2008, 12:40 PM   #5
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this shit was due 5:40 yesterday... i'll give you til 5:40 today to key ya shit... don't no-show... thats not gonna look good at all for T.U.N.
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Re: Don Delucci vs. Maleficent

sorry i have a life

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Cause a tragedy with millys, all the hypes about, your ass to me really
you Seeing me is like gillie da kid spotting Cassidy in philly!
Mal you could get hit with the kay, or I could slay you and leave ya blood to drip in a lake
He's dropping garbage, man the shits a disgrace, leave him 'blue, like I punched a crip in the face'
the mag is tucked, so swallow ya pride or i'll blast ya chump!
Pro-homesexuals supporting his campaign is the only way this fag is up!
i'm a vet compared to this rookie, on the edge, fam dont push me
and fuck ya lame wordplay, this 'bitch is played, like all i want is the pussy'!
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Re: Don Delucci vs. Maleficent

This faggot replies but don't answer, my rhymes will get quotes faster.
He thinks he spits acid so he named himself after somebody who died from throat cancer*..
not about to click a link and read a whole damn article 4 1 bar u feel me.. but a pretty average opener
Im loving the hype, but he dont want no trouble with I.
If this stumbling guy is Driving Drunk; I guess I'm the DWI**..
okay personal, but really you could have worded it better or sumthin so that it wasnt as forced
He'll meet his crumbling demise, cuz when he spits his weak shit.
I'll show Double D's*** more fake than Pamela Lee's tits..
honestly the double D and pamela concept is pretty played out, i know its a nameplay and all but you could have been more creative
Jesus!! I got cold hearted mutha fuckas feelin the heat.
Why rip him wit a fourth bar when i just killed him in three..
not feelin this.... remind me of something that would probably be used in the movie 8 mile


Cause a tragedy with millys, all the hypes about, your ass to me really
you Seeing me is like gillie da kid spotting Cassidy in philly!
ehh not really feelin this, i've seen the "you seeing me" concept too many times now
Mal you could get hit with the kay, or I could slay you and leave ya blood to drip in a lake
He's dropping garbage, man the shits a disgrace, leave him 'blue, like I punched a crip in the face'
i liked your multi usage, but really the punch wasnt all that hard hitting at all
the mag is tucked, so swallow ya pride or i'll blast ya chump!
Pro-homesexuals supporting his campaign is the only way this fag is up!
once again a pretty played out concept, it would of been a better punch if you would of worded it better
i'm a vet compared to this rookie, on the edge, fam dont push me
and fuck ya lame wordplay, this 'bitch is played, like all i want is the pussy'!
ehhh a pretty weak closer


wordplay: don- even though every concept you used is pretty played out, you managed to hold off mal in the wordplay department, nothing extraordinary just pretty basic wordplay in my opinion
punches: mal- your punchlines were more directed toward your opponent, dons punches lacked the creativity to give him this category
structure/flow: mal- your verse just flowed better in my opinion, Dons verse was structured nice in his beginning few bars, but towards the end it was all over the place
multis: Don- self explanitory


overall,

you both came out pretty weak, i didnt really see any creative concepts or anything that really stood out to me, but there is only 1 winner and really the only reason that im voting for maleficent is because he used more direct punches


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Re: Don Delucci vs. Maleficent

maleficent: first bar was nice...punch=3/5
second bar was forced to me didn't really like is....punch=2/5
third bar was good, felt you coulda played off it more but oh well...punch=3/5
fourth bar was more of you bragging which is cool, shows confidence....punch=3/5
overall 11/20

Don Delucci:first bar was decent flowed good....punch3/5
second bar was good i woulda said "leave em all blue" but oh well....punch=3/5
third bar was ok but not worded well enough to really hit....punch=2/5
fourth bar wasn't as strong as the rest, maybe its me but i didn't feel it....punch=1/5
overall 9/20

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Re: Don Delucci vs. Maleficent

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This faggot replies but don't answer, my rhymes will get quotes faster.
He thinks he spits acid so he named himself after somebody who died from throat cancer*..
nice research... coulda been played w/ a little more wit... but still effective

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Im loving the hype, but he dont want no trouble with I.
If this stumbling guy is Driving Drunk; I guess I'm the DWI**..
it actually means "driving while intoxicated" ...but back to the battle... nice punch

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He'll meet his crumbling demise, cuz when he spits his weak shit.
I'll show Double D's*** more fake than Pamela Lee's tits..
coulda went a lot of directions w/ this concept.. nice shit... best bar thus far

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Jesus!! I got cold hearted mutha fuckas feelin the heat.
Why rip him wit a fourth bar when i just killed him in three..
a little confident huh? this last bar was lazy, shoulda attempted that kill


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Cause a tragedy with millys, all the hypes about, your ass to me really
you Seeing me is like gillie da kid spotting Cassidy in philly!
wasnt feeling it

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Mal you could get hit with the kay, or I could slay you and leave ya blood to drip in a lake
He's dropping garbage, man the shits a disgrace, leave him 'blue, like I punched a crip in the face'
good use of multis... but by the time i got to the punch, i was disappointed

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the mag is tucked, so swallow ya pride or i'll blast ya chump!
Pro-homesexuals supporting his campaign is the only way this fag is up!
decent... generic tho

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i'm a vet compared to this rookie, on the edge, fam dont push me
and fuck ya lame wordplay, this 'bitch is played, like all i want is the pussy'!
wasnt feeling the closing

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wit/creativity - Mal

overall, Don's punches were too generic... Male played on his name a lot... he coulda switched it up and didnt like the fact he wasted that last bar... his verse coulda been beaten easily but the lack of heat behind Don's verse got Mal the nod...

w/ all ^that^ said.....

VOTE: MALEFICENT
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