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Old 06-20-2007, 12:50 AM   #1
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DunLo Vs. FlatLine.....(Topical...) 4-3

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TOPIC-"Over The Horizon..."

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Old 06-20-2007, 10:27 AM   #2
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Old 06-24-2007, 06:18 PM   #3
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"Over The Horizon"
1 Out Of 5 Die, Leaving Quartets, Thoughts In Pirouettes
Masses Of Breathing Flesh, Grasping At Life Thieving Threats
Might, Heaving Regrets, Whilst Gassing The Grieving Cadets
Like Laced Needs Of Cigarettes, Inhale Deceiving Silhouettes
1 Out Of 5 Die, Leaving Quartets, The Militant Statistics Of Death...

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Souls Dressed In Naval Attire, Stance Upon The Deck Of Faith
Morale A Fable Desire, Shouting "Ta Heck With Fate!"
Just A Step To Late, In Unison Like Ties For Last Place
Cause When Death Awaits, Time Flies At A Fast Pace

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Sails Been Set Like Proper Boating Techniques
Across The Red, We Dyed, Like Floating Batiks
Directly Devoting Cheeks, Captain In Plain Sight
Taking Commands From The Nest, Incoming Aimed Flight
The Same Night, The B Two Five Destructions Repeat
Visions Of Land, "Storm".. Instructions Complete
But Explosions Leave The Fleet Reluctant To Speak
With Such Grim Speech, A Black Glaze Over Their Eyes When...
They Saw Their Lifes Demise, With Sights Over The Horizon...


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Old 06-25-2007, 03:24 AM   #4
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Under The Horizon….
Where gazing only makes my dilated eyes dim…
The skies spin…where ‘loose ends are fluttered’, and ‘nothing ties in’,
Where a race suffers nervously….and any form of help costs a service fee…
A worthless plea…where were the only species that’ll kill each other purposely…
Under the Horizon….
Further than the stashed grams, out past the grass where ash spans….
Where cash lands in brash hands…mothers ‘throw away life’, like ‘babies in trash cans’,
Using 380’s in past plans…while were reporting through silence…
Where no one is supporting…so now were resorting to violence,
Through the storm and thunder…lightning will form and slumber…
Torn in wonder…Infants in poverty, while children are born in hunger,
Under the Horizon…
Looking at hysteria and destruction,
An area in reduction...like malaria, spreading to Bulgaria in seduction,
Self satisfaction is a ration…because most men only witness glory…
Life’s diminished gory…cuz the futures ‘not written’, like it’s an ‘unfinished story’,
This situation is plenty live…in this foreign land where money thrive,
And bullets from a 12 year old, do as much damage as a man that’s twenty-five,
Moving forward to a gross brink…where even Titanic boats sink…
Where the smoke stinks…and politicians lie, to make each others votes shrink,
Humans are severed than ditched…Sunshine is rain, plain weather can switch,
This never can bliss…So I gaze ‘Over The Horizon’…
With hopes it’s better than this…



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sorry im late, had to work, thanks, links tomorow...good luck

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Old 06-25-2007, 05:56 PM   #5
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Re: DunLo Vs. FlatLine.....(Topical...) 0-0

ON TOPIC-dunlo
DEPTH-flatline
IMAGERY-dunlo
ORIGINALITY-flatline
FLOW-dunlo
MULTIS-dunlo
VOCAB-flatline

overall-dunlo

I voted dunlo because it seamed that flatline didn't really stay on the topic
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Old 06-25-2007, 07:12 PM   #6
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Re: DunLo Vs. FlatLine.....(Topical...) 0-0

nice battle to both of you guys....shit was dope

since i cant vote, i just wanted to say dope verses to bboth..



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Old 06-25-2007, 10:15 PM   #7
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Old 06-25-2007, 11:15 PM   #8
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I think it's legit homie, but whatever, uppin'...
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Old 06-25-2007, 11:41 PM   #9
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Alright Then, On Second Thought Keep It, 0-1...
Naw, im sayin', if you got beef with the vote then discard it...I have no probs with that...Im just sayin' ive never spoken to the man, and he broke down the voting properly...It's up to you, I really don't give a fuck bro...
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