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Old 07-28-2007, 01:06 PM   #1
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DunLo Vs. PayRoll....

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Due 48 hours after check in.....

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Old 07-28-2007, 03:38 PM   #2
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Re: DunLo Vs. PayRoll....

aight check...ima get my links now
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aight ill drop in a while...
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Old 07-28-2007, 04:18 PM   #3
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Re: DunLo Vs. PayRoll....

ayo...lets cut that 48 hrs to 24...if its aight wit u
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Old 07-28-2007, 10:34 PM   #4
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Re: DunLo Vs. PayRoll....

aight...ima get something up here soon so we can cut that deadline...dont need 48 hrs for 4 bars
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Old 07-29-2007, 01:27 AM   #5
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Re: DunLo Vs. PayRoll....

aight...heres 4
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He usually come wit a "good verse"...but that just mean I'ma "eat-well"
cuz this lame "dont play the game", cuz his "name stay" on on the "D-L"/ ('disabled-list' NOT down low)

watch how, i "eat-n-birp-him-up" cuz...I'm filthy, "throw-dirt-in-cuts"
so "no one gonna "vote" for wut "you wrote", so "ur post" just "hurting ups"/

this gonna b-easy-believe-me,I accepted ur challenge cuz all I seen...was the rep u might-bring-me
cuz u get on the "site-n-write-freely",but couldnt get "paid off the corner", if u was "D'Wight Freeny"/

so you aint even "on-point" when u "get-outta-bed"..."dillusions of grandeur" u need to get-out-ya-head/ i kno u dont want this read
so jus let me go "solo" instead, n do like "fat girls in spandex", and "NO-SHOW" 'the thread'/
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aight thats 4...drop whenever...no rush...ur challenge, ur rules
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Old 07-30-2007, 12:37 AM   #6
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Re: DunLo Vs. PayRoll....

It's late, I'll key this shit, links coming soon......EASY....

Ayo....
I'll leave his set bashed.....who is this noob?...I asked for a vet match!...
His rep crashed...cuz I'll put 'Pay on Hold', like 'workers not getting their checks cashed!',
His desperations a true *sigh*....so he'll get finished quick, with no resperations to die...
He saw Dun's 'medications flew by'..
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i would expect Dun to have something real sic..

Well Your verse was 'drunk sex', and we didn't set the 'expectations too high'!,
His pre-writtens plottin' whole...so he'll get 'burnt up' with a rotten soul...
Pay's forgotten goal?...it's like 'pulling fire-alarms', whenever I'm 'Drop'N-Roll'!,
'Pay' must have shitty fitness...cuz his '3:(00)-:4(00)' record is quickly finished....
A 'TUN head', but it's 'Strictly Business'...so do the math, RW's only 'clocked on:PayRoll' for 'sixty-minutes'..
and....... Again.....
One Owned for each bar homie, haha!..

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Old 07-30-2007, 12:51 AM   #7
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Re: DunLo Vs. PayRoll....

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...93#post1333193
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My Links, now vote the fuck up......
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Old 07-30-2007, 01:55 AM   #8
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Re: DunLo Vs. PayRoll....

Payroll
He usually come wit a "good verse"...but that just mean I'ma "eat-well"
cuz this lame "dont play the game", cuz his "name stay" on on the "D-L"/ ('disabled-list' NOT down low)
didn't like the set-up much at all...and DL was forced in there...not a great opener at all...great concept just didn't connect
watch how, i "eat-n-birp-him-up" cuz...I'm filthy, "throw-dirt-in-cuts"
so "no one gonna "vote" for wut "you wrote", so "ur post" just "hurting ups"/
ehh, multies and more multies with a subpar punchline that is very much played...I've done it myself unaware of it's playedness...the uppin' whole thing is played kinda like da-feet lines...so this was again sub-par
this gonna b-easy-believe-me,I accepted ur challenge cuz all I seen...was the rep u might-bring-me
cuz u get on the "site-n-write-freely",but couldnt get "paid off the corner", if u was "D'Wight Freeny"/
ehhhh, decent...not a great punch for the last line...I liked the set-up more than I did the punch...should of kept the same structure cause u hurt ur flow by lengthenin' ya lines...so sub-par again
so you aint even "on-point" when u "get-outta-bed"..."dillusions of grandeur" u need to get-out-ya-head/ i kno u dont want this read
so jus let me go "solo" instead, n do like "fat girls in spandex", and "NO-SHOW" 'the thread'/
decent...good concept but was worded wrong and again the structure bein' different ruined it...so decent ender, would of been a better opener though...


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Ayo....
I'll leave his set bashed.....who is this noob?...I asked for a vet match!...
His rep crashed...cuz I'll put 'Pay on Hold', like 'workers not getting their checks cashed!',
ok, nothin' great but was a good concept...actually the worded messed up this line
His desperations a true *sigh*....so he'll get finished quick, with no resperations to die...
He saw Dun's 'medications flew by'..

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i would expect Dun to have something real sic..


Well Your verse was 'drunk sex', and we didn't set the 'expectations too high'!,
ok
His pre-writtens plottin' whole...so he'll get 'burnt up' with a rotten soul...
Pay's forgotten goal?...it's like 'pulling fire-alarms', whenever I'm 'Drop'N-Roll'!,
that was perfectly worded and the wordplay was dope...a great punch too
'Pay' must have shitty fitness...cuz his '300)-:4(00)' record is quickly finished....
A 'TUN head', but it's 'Strictly Business'...so do the math, RW's only 'clocked on:PayRoll' for 'sixty-minutes'..
decent, nothin' amazin' again and also a decent ender...

Punches=Dun
Personals= Dun
Multies= tie
Mets/Sims= Dun
Wordplay=Dun's was more advanced
Structure= Dun
Flow= Dun
Creativity=Dun
Complexity=Dun
Consitency=Dun

Overall=Dun

Vote= Dun was way more consitent...

Dun- do ya thing homie...

Payroll-ur improvin' with each battle I have seen u in...don't focus on ur multies man and just throw a punch, that seems to be ur problem...the multies are good but the punches are lackin' bad, that's all I see that ur messin' up on...wordin' and the way u set-up ya lines...just switch ur worded around with ur punches and stop throwin' so many multies around to u understand the FULL concept to a punch...and I'm not bein' an ass, I'm just tryin' to help a fellow emcee out...

again Vote=Dun
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Thanks for the vote End, 1-0...Uppin'....
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yer i agree with end
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