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09-18-2007, 03:51 PM
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Mic-illatp2!! Vs. DunLo....
This is no vote swaying homie just posted his verse in the challengers thread instead of the TBA, I'm just moving it...It has not been altered at all....
Here is the link to that thread to prove it... http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=106777 Mic-illatp2!! - Verse.... whether it counts or not, least it was done no advantages? please, its already my advantage-to-spit// i'll rip this 'pussy' up so bad it'll damage-ya-'clit'// white rabbits? u must be that magician who vanished-to-shit// only reason they call u "dun-lo" is cuz ya punches never manage-to-hit// this battle might be over but i'm hardly-outta-this// ironically, i'll spin heads when my bars-re-route-a-twist// then comes confusion, that's the part-he's-bout-to-miss// i'm the type of emcee to dig up ya bones like an archeologist// n it wont cost-a-price to keep ya raggety ass fossilized// u lost,-surprised? watch ya cross-ya-eyes n tangled in knots-n-ties// as i have more than half of this 'board' "monopolized// u can beg for no mercy, while i beat the fuck out of u till ya thoughts-arise// have u sit-in-gore, as u watch ur own throat get slit-in-war// throw a fit-n-roar, while ur damn dignity gets split-n-tore// like a ghost swinging in a fight with no chance of winnin, even if u had written-more// in the past i didn't show, cuz u were never worth spittin-for// I'll have mine here in a second, just relocating this to the right section.... |
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09-18-2007, 04:19 PM
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Re: Mic-illatp2!! Vs. DunLo....
Ladies and gentlemen, get ready for a complete waste of my time and skill....Let's do it...
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I located this herb, now he’s grievin’ charted…so his wack raps I’m leaven parted… An un-even margin…*A MOD COULD CLOSE THIS UP*, cuz I ‘KO’d him before this even started’!, Quote:
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Lyrically my rain and thunder flew…while he migrated with pains and hunger grew… ‘Best’?, his text is ‘under few’…cuz however you ‘do the math’, ‘Mic-ill’ always 'ends at(p) number 2!!', Tell me the purpose this thread serves?...besides the aggravation, bullshit and head nerves… This fag will 'dread verbs'…cuz he ’types retarded’, like ‘his font’s the only time he’s RE(A)D WORDS’!, The whole site told you it could of stopped!....Nobody even said that you should of dropped…. You never ‘stood a shot’…because ‘No-one wants to be like Mic-’, like if ‘MJ would of flopped’!, He’s made the wrong tribute to rap…he’s trash, like his best attributes to lack… Never distribute true fact… Quote:
I said 5 bars, but this dumb fuck dropped 8, I already keyed up 5, but I’ll throw one more grain of salt in his wounds…. He couldn’t fuck with Dun on his best hour….I almost feel bad, here, I’ll send him a death flower… Take your last breath coward….cuz what’s more pathetic, 1) ‘your age’, or 2)it being ‘double your rep power’?!.. *Dun Throws the flower on Mic's grave, pisses on his casket and walks away without hesitation* R.I.P. FAGGOT...  Last edited by DunLo; 09-18-2007 at 04:27 PM. |
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09-19-2007, 02:42 PM
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Re: Mic-illatp2!! Vs. DunLo....
Ok, uppin' this...and I realize a mistake in my 3rd bar, no biggie, just i put his instead of my...
Here's the fixed bar... Tell me the purpose this thread serves?...besides the aggravation, bullshit and head nerves… This fag will 'dread verbs'…cuz he ’types retarded’, like ‘my font’s the only time he’s RE(A)D WORDS’!, Ok, up up and away... |
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09-21-2007, 02:56 PM
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Re: Mic-illatp2!! Vs. DunLo....
Mic
no advantages? please, its already my advantage-to-spit// i'll rip this 'pussy' up so bad it'll damage-ya-'clit'// nope...punch is played.... white rabbits? u must be that magician who vanished-to-shit// only reason they call u "dun-lo" is cuz ya punches never manage-to-hit// Better...decent wordplay...personal was ok...but not great this battle might be over but i'm hardly-outta-this// ironically, i'll spin heads when my bars-re-route-a-twist// self rep is a no no...whats the point of this bar??? honestly...tell me... then comes confusion, that's the part-he's-bout-to-miss// i'm the type of emcee to dig up ya bones like an archeologist// nope...not feeling it again...w/p was played n it wont cost-a-price to keep ya raggety ass fossilized// u lost,-surprised? watch ya cross-ya-eyes n tangled in knots-n-ties// not feeling it again...you got awesome rhyme scheme and structure...but you have NO content... as i have more than half of this 'board' "monopolized// u can beg for no mercy, while i beat the fuck out of u till ya thoughts-arise// again just flow...punch sucked... have u sit-in-gore, as u watch ur own throat get slit-in-war// throw a fit-n-roar, while ur damn dignity gets split-n-tore// punch...no personal...flow is there...again..where is the PERSONAL? like a ghost swinging in a fight with no chance of winnin, even if u had written-more// in the past i didn't show, cuz u were never worth spittin-for// personal...it sucked but at least it was an attempt... DunLo I located this herb, now he’s grievin’ charted…so his wack raps I’m leaven parted… An un-even margin…*A MOD COULD CLOSE THIS UP*, cuz I ‘KO’d him before this even started’!, funny...good flow... Lyrically my rain and thunder flew…while he migrated with pains and hunger grew… ‘Best’?, his text is ‘under few’…cuz however you ‘do the math’, ‘Mic-ill’ always 'ends at(p) number 2!!', Nice personal and good wordplay. Tell me the purpose this thread serves?...besides the aggravation, bullshit and head nerves… This fag will 'dread verbs'…cuz he ’types retarded’, like ‘his font’s the only time he’s RE(A)D WORDS’!, nice shit...punch...personal...and flow is there... The whole site told you it could of stopped!....Nobody even said that you should of dropped…. You never ‘stood a shot’…because ‘No-one wants to be like Mic-’, like if ‘MJ would of flopped’!, Nice Shit!!!...good personal...lol "He’s made the wrong tribute to rap…he’s trash, like his best attributes to lack… Never distribute true fact… And without ‘potent lines’, how the fuck did you ‘contribute to that?!’." good personal He couldn’t fuck with Dun on his best hour….I almost feel bad, here, I’ll send him a death flower… Take your last breath coward….cuz what’s more pathetic, 1) ‘your age’, or 2)it being ‘double your rep power’?!.. nice closer...good personal... Mic...You had a nice flow man and a sick rhyme scheme. But...you lacked punches and personals in almost every bar...and if you had them...they weren't really hitting...battling a good textcee you should have brought more personals...because you know what hes going to bring... Dun...good wordplay flow and content...and of course funny punches and personals...not much else to say Vote-Dun
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10-13-2007, 12:53 PM
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Re: Mic-illatp2!! Vs. DunLo....
need links
and then its only 1-0 dun
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10-20-2007, 12:11 PM
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Re: Mic-illatp2!! Vs. DunLo....
tru dat,.. link under nieth my sig
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10-28-2007, 07:24 PM
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Re: Mic-illatp2!! Vs. DunLo....
Dunny
I located this herb, now he’s grievin’ charted…so his wack raps I’m leaven parted… An un-even margin…*A MOD COULD CLOSE THIS UP*, cuz I ‘KO’d him before this even started’!, ^lol..good intro. Lyrically my rain and thunder flew…while he migrated with pains and hunger grew… ‘Best’?, his text is ‘under few’…cuz however you ‘do the math’, ‘Mic-ill’ always 'ends at(p) number 2!!', ^err, i feel salty about lines like these..where breakdown someone's name..but it wasn't really wack either, decent. Tell me the purpose this thread serves?...besides the aggravation, bullshit and head nerves… This fag will 'dread verbs'…cuz he ’types retarded’, like ‘his font’s the only time he’s RE(A)D WORDS’!, ^lol...pretty funny. The whole site told you it could of stopped!....Nobody even said that you should of dropped…. You never ‘stood a shot’…because ‘No-one wants to be like Mic-’, like if ‘MJ would of flopped’!, ^kinda dry..no more MJ punches, unless there's something really new to say about them..Jackson/Jordan. He’s made the wrong tribute to rap…he’s trash, like his best attributes to lack… Never distribute true fact… And without ‘potent lines’, how the fuck did you ‘contribute to that?!’...^^^ ^the dope dealer personal, probably one of the best lines here...dopeness He couldn’t fuck with Dun on his best hour….I almost feel bad, here, I’ll send him a death flower… Take your last breath coward….cuz what’s more pathetic, 1) ‘your age’, or 2)it being ‘double your rep power’?!.. ^double his rep power...it's a little dry to me. I mean just the comparison seemed likely..doesn't mean rep power/his age was VERY strong concept together, but it's decent enuff. Mictap no advantages? please, its already my advantage-to-spit// i'll rip this 'pussy' up so bad it'll damage-ya-'clit'// ^no..too simple/old. white rabbits? u must be that magician who vanished-to-shit// only reason they call u "dun-lo" is cuz ya punches never manage-to-hit// ^aweful nameplay. this battle might be over but i'm hardly-outta-this// ironically, i'll spin heads when my bars-re-route-a-twist// ^doesn't make sense. then comes confusion, that's the part-he's-bout-to-miss// i'm the type of emcee to dig up ya bones like an archeologist// ^corny/old. n it wont cost-a-price to keep ya raggety ass fossilized// u lost,-surprised? watch ya cross-ya-eyes n tangled in knots-n-ties// ^what? as i have more than half of this 'board' "monopolized// u can beg for no mercy, while i beat the fuck out of u till ya thoughts-arise// ^no reason that 'board' is highlighted, useless bar. have u sit-in-gore, as u watch ur own throat get slit-in-war// throw a fit-n-roar, while ur damn dignity gets split-n-tore// ^filler...and wack filler at that. like a ghost swinging in a fight with no chance of winnin, even if u had written-more// in the past i didn't show, cuz u were never worth spittin-for// ^so basically, you lost a battle by no show...makes you look worse buddy. Vote= Dunny Reason, it's obvious..DunLo barely tried hard here. He pretty much waxed him in every category, Mic-ill has a style that sound a little like Nems to me...which would be ok if he actually had material to say, more similes/metas, and stronger concepts..then he would be better than Nems. All Mic did was just go from multi to multi with nothing in between.
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Re: Mic-illatp2!! Vs. DunLo....
Punches-DUNLO
Multies- DUNLO Metaphors-neither Personals-DUNLO Wordplay- DUNLO Complexity- DUNLO Creativity- neither Enjoyment- DUNLO Overall - DUNLO Vote -DUNLO. the quotes mid-verse were irritating as fuck, but they made the personals resonate so bah humbug... Dunlo, again..was throwing punches...mic was just taking em...
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11-02-2007, 12:20 PM
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Re: Mic-illatp2!! Vs. DunLo....
you both suck parrot cocks ! how the fuck come here's only whack spitter on this site ? and han solo, you have no fuckin life!!
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11-02-2007, 01:13 PM
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Give it up.... Han has no life?...Your going into threads talking E-Shit, being a computer tough guy.... Just please, don't 'pull out your piece' and shoot us with your mousepad... Lol...Lame-o |
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