Vaughn187 vs. Jon

[Han Solo]

House rules
16-20 lines
due in 2 days tops
check in and post links
whoever don't show,
is an automatic loss..
that goes for me 2

[vaughn187]

locked and loaded...

[Han Solo]

checked, it'll be up in a while.

[vaughn187]

I’d rather serve em quick why eat him, his verse just like bitter prune
He’s hardly sick just nauseating food for thought for Mr. Witherspoon
Mediocre text at best, umm.. your styles more of a queer Donnie
Singing soprano trying to recreate himself so where’s Johnny?
Out there on his day to day probably proclaiming façades
I’m mean he admits to mixed views of Christ yet he claim he a god
That’s hard, well with the flames I spit I must be Satin
Nope I’m just bored, some I said its getting interesting yet I’m still waiting
Send a couple shots to his head you’ll see when his mind get mauled
That I’m not no longer Vaughn I’m Yong Zheng causing the Han’s to fall
Where’s he fall? he falls short his best days are done
Holding more weight here cuz discpline weighs oz regret weighs a TUN
His threat phaze is none, you could see for yourself, look bar for bar
Han seeing our skills through rearview thinking they closer than they are
He’s going nowhere fast and seems that’s all a shame
Over 3000 posts and no where near the Hall of Fame

[vaughn187]

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...3&postcount=12
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...3&postcount=19

[Han Solo]

good verse.

but no execution though.

[Han Solo]

*he's from Bed-Stuy Brooklyn.
*North Korea hates americans.

don't need links for personals, they're pretty obvious.


could tell by his wordplay, he's amatuer..not mad at cha'..but Han will damage ya'/
cuz vaughn, take ya music out the country?..and they'll be eating rice wit' ya mixtapes in Africa!!/
won't badger ya'..but thought you needed advice, cuz ya flowing don't go past the text fam/
it's like having cameramen film Brooklyn's elderly, when i make ya' whole rap career Bed-Pan!!/(Bed-Stuy)
forget chance!..you don't have wild cards luck in hell of beating me Sir, easily served!/
Vaughn needs to re-learn, if losses out weigh ya' presence..you don't NEED to return!!/
preaching these words..with better multis than YOU!! cuz all i read was shaky rhymes
i'll take my time, cuz this is V's: Final Battle..like the corny Alien series show in 1985!!/
You can hate me, why?...my executioner swings but i'll palm his head like a hat from Costa Rica!!/
cuz this wack ass said he left U.S. to "better his rap skills", where'd the fuck you go to North Korea!!!?/*
ya whole fames an onomotepia, well...meaning a joke, and well...meaning your slow!/
teasing at most, cuz ya' verse will get 'sub-sided'...like contractors listening to a cult!!/
i'm supreme with the qoutes..cuz i'll bottom teams, and ya futures just bottled dreams!/
shows you left Rapworlds too, cuz you're "scratchy" as "hell"..like Simpsons cartoonists working on Halloween!!/
want more proof of his rusty factors?..simply ascend your pupils above, trust these captions/
this she male, pretty much said it best: "with the flames you spit..guess you must be SATIN"!!/


~Fin~

keystyled, if ya'll can't read it ...fuck you.

[Han Solo]

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...23&postcount=5
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...34#post1412034

[Stylin On You]

Punches- HS
Personals- HS
Flow- HS
Structure- HS
Multis- HS
Metas- V
Vocab- HS
Enjoyment- HS

Vote- HS

A couple of the cats are closer then they seem...Although HS did pretty much sweet this battle...Vaughn your lines were just poorly structure and half your verse was praising yourself/ not throwing punches...this is a battle...every line has to have a punch/personal, and if it doesn't it needs some set-up or multi's...you had some content, you just need to put it together better...

HS- not your best stuff but enough to take this one

[Raw-Thoughts]

I Get Tha Hoods PIMPS ON THIS NEWBIE Getcha "Dome Split In Half" Like That SIMPSONS MOVIE
Leave You TORMENT N EMBARASED When Raw SLAUGHTER FAGGOTS Opps A Sniffed "vIAGRA" Instead of "coke" Now Your DAUGHTERS HAD IT (Ouch)
This WEEK BUM a STARVER (No fOOD) like ma "Punches on Viagra" They KEEP CUMIN HARDER (Damn)
RIFLE ACTION SHOULDNT BE PUSHED Theres a Boy Behind His Screen MICHEAL JACKSON WOULDNT TOUCH
Raw thoughts EXPLODE HOLLOWS Got More "Chease" Then ROSIE O DONALD


ma first battle what yall think