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MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0) (3-0 KO)
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Verses Due By Thurs. Dec 6th Midnight EST 4-6 Bars Only Anything over will result in 1 docked vote. |
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11-30-2007, 07:03 AM
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Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0)
Check... Good Luck...
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11-30-2007, 01:13 PM
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Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0)
Check, G/L to you as well....
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12-02-2007, 12:31 AM
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Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0)
I guess I'm the under dog, but you're the bitch, I mangle your verses
You've proven you can't be champ, 'cause you couldn't handle the burden!* My mission's to show you couldn't cook up a hot line spittin in the stove You get the votes? You couldn't take the cats workin for pet control!** I'm killin this lame, I'm the truth, he got lies fillin his brain We know you ain't the American Psycho punk, you just got a Lil' Insane!*** You look like Wierd Al with a fade, tatoos and a gay lover (2-0)/(2-0) is funny, 'cause it's clear to see Lo displays Dun's(Dunce) words!**** You gotta admit me losin is impossible because you can't see it, Dun Sorta like Micheal jackson, race leaves, you're a pansi that runs!***** I know I'ma get Done Low like I was havin sex with a midget, dude I've proven I can get three to win, but all dun can (dunkin') get is 2!****** * - Under dog, the female dog, bitch... he Lost to Burden... ** - categories... cats... pet control... *** - His sig... his boy, Lil' Insane... **** - Look at his pic... Dunce means stupid, ignorant... ***** - Michael Jackson was black, now he's white, race left, race as in running, pansi is a flower that has leaves (petals), pansi means he's homo... get it? ****** - Note in the first line, there is a comma after midget... I don't fuck dudes... lol... second line: I've got 3 wins so far, Dunkin in basketball only gets 2 points... there for... do the math... I win... lol...
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12-02-2007, 01:35 AM
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Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0)
STOP EXPLAINING SO MUCH!!!....WE’RE ALL NOT AS DUMB AS YOU, WE GET YOUR BASIC BARS!!!
This Punk is a faggot and worthless...but the truth is I’m stronger than your surge is… Left to ponder and your nervous… Quote:
^^^Cuz like ‘stalling battlers’, your ‘explanations read longer than your verses’!,(Versus) His latest written showed his sin hand…cuz he delivered a ‘skinny plot’ with a ‘thin plan’… Honestly you’ll never win fam…cuz you couldn’t put ‘Heart in-The Game’ if ‘Black Wall Street had the Tin Man’!...(His new written piece 'Heart in The Game') What did this bitch expect?!...he's never ripped the vets, or even spits correct... You'll miss respect...Cuz 'you logging off RW's', is the only way a 'FranchiZe Dis(s)-Connect'!, This belt I’m back to clench…spit with raps intense, then react and bash the trench… He’d never extract a quench…Cuz ‘The FranchiZe is no threat to the net’, like if ‘S. Francis sat the bench’!, Make sure you don’t get another win with poor shit…so let Dunny settle the score quick… Saw you had ‘3 wins’ made me more pissed…but ‘2/3rds’ of them were ‘no-shows’, so with you I don’t see a ‘four-fit’!, (forfeit) Your bars are never felt whore!!!....I’ll leave his health tore, and make his self sore… Watch him melt more…His whole ‘career is a waste/waist’, so that’s the only thing he'd ‘need a belt for’!! *Dunny Knocks FranchiZe out with a hard left, Grabs his belt and walks away humble, goodnight faggot....* Bar by bar breakdowns only, If you don't get the bars, don't vote.... I don't need a whole additional 10 bars to explain my shit....peace bitches.... Last edited by DunLo; 12-02-2007 at 01:38 AM. |
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12-02-2007, 01:48 AM
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Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0)
I only explained so there were no misunderstandings... anyways, vote people...
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12-02-2007, 12:40 PM
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Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0) (0-0) Verses In!!
Flow-Fran
Punches-Dun Personals-Dun Multis- Dun Metas-Dun Vocab/W.P- Dun Creativity-Dun Enjoy-Dun ----- Vote-Dun i gave em flow...so its not a complete CAT sweep i guess..but again Dun jus killed wit the punches n the metas n everything...no hate towards Fran...Dun jus came better in almost all CAT's imo...Nice job 2 both
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12-02-2007, 12:55 PM
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Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0) (1-0) Verses In!!
there will be no bar for bar.. it is NOT required, no one can change the rules, the rules are already set, next posts after me are votes only..
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12-02-2007, 12:55 PM
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Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0) (1-0) Verses In!!
I'm not trying to change the vote I'm trying to improve, which if it's a cat sweep, I would like to see how my bars were weaker...
Without explanation it's harder to do so... Thanks I appreciate it... 1-0 Dun
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12-02-2007, 01:04 PM
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Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (2-0) vs The Franchize (2-0) (1-0) Verses In!!
I guess I'm the under dog, but you're the bitch, I mangle your verses
You've proven you can't be champ, 'cause you couldn't handle the burden!* ^setup was weak. your explainations for underdog/bitch made me think you're gonna do a play on those words. you didnt,so the explanining was for what? and the burden line was decent at best. My mission's to show you couldn't cook up a hot line spittin in the stove You get the votes? You couldn't take the cats workin for pet control!** ^weak. i know whatchu' saying,but this was weak I'm killin this lame, I'm the truth, he got lies fillin his brain We know you ain't the American Psycho punk, you just got a Lil' Insane!*** ^pooooorly flipped. could've made a difference if you took time. You look like Wierd Al with a fade, tatoos and a gay lover (2-0)/(2-0) is funny, 'cause it's clear to see Lo displays Dun's(Dunce) words!**** ^wack. You gotta admit me losin is impossible because you can't see it, Dun Sorta like Micheal jackson, race leaves, you're a pansi that runs!***** ^wack again. I know I'ma get Done Low like I was havin sex with a midget, dude I've proven I can get three to win, but all dun can (dunkin') get is 2! ^damn,i'll just give you the benefit of the doubt. shits still horrible ^^^Cuz like ‘stalling battlers’, your ‘explanations read longer than your verses’!, ^i didnt bring down the setup...but this is true. His latest written showed his sin hand…cuz he delivered a ‘skinny plot’ with a ‘thin plan’… Honestly you’ll never win fam…cuz you couldn’t put ‘Heart in-The Game’ if ‘Black Wall Street had the Tin Man’!...(His new written piece 'Heart in The Game') ^werent yo talking about LONG explanations? tin-man line was decent. What did this bitch expect?!...he's never ripped the vets, or even spits correct... You'll miss respect...Cuz 'you logging off RW's', is the only way a 'FranchiZe Dis(s)-Connect'!, ^played and poorly executed in here. This belt I’m back to clench…spit with raps intense, then react and bash the trench… He’d never extract a quench…Cuz ‘The FranchiZe is no threat to the net’, like if ‘S. Francis sat the bench’!, ^spit w/raps intense is forced. follow-up was eh. Make sure you don’t get another win with poor shit…so let Dunny settle the score quick… Saw you had ‘3 wins’ made me more pissed…but ‘2/3rds’ of them were ‘no-shows’, so with you I don’t see a ‘four-fit’!, (forfeit) ^could've hit harder. still decent here. Your bars are never felt whore!!!....I’ll leave his health tore, and make his self sore… Watch him melt more…His whole ‘career is a waste/waist’, so that’s the only thing he'd ‘need a belt for’!! ^damn you're forcing the multi's too much. belt line is blah. could've been better. oh well,that'll allow me to still use mine. horrible battle IMO,but v/Dunlo. he edged it out w/a FEW disses. |
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