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Old 11-30-2007, 10:52 PM   #1
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PayRoll vs R!can Theoryz

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Okay Then, Checking In Now .. G'Luck.
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-signs up to vote when this is finished, should be a good one.
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Old 12-02-2007, 12:08 AM   #4
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Re: PayRoll vs R!can Theoryz

aight heres something...aint really feelin it right now so...
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You've got the Worse Timing...When this battles over, U'll come out like ur Birth, Crying!
so this Isnt Worth Trying...Cuz u wouldnt be "Up on PR", "Reppin Turf on Your Island"/
U the Worse wit the Rhyming...So, You'll catch an Experienced Beaten, Left Bloody, like a Period, Leaking
Thinkin Win, U Seriously Reaching!...Cause 1 look at "ur Name Shows", Ur "Theories is Wreaking!"/
This Ya Enemy Speaking...So u better Go fix ur Flaws Fast, Or Risk Gettin ur Bars Smashed
n have everyone sayin dat R's Trash...Cause I'll 'Easily Dodge R/T's', Like 'Avoiding a Car Crash'/
So, Just join my Squad n Relax...You and I both Know,In this Battle, ur gonna Get Scratched
n u aint have 2 search Far 2 Get Matched...The Facts, Im Under ya Skin, like goin Too Long on da Patch/
So come Strong, Or Fall Back...Cause Youll get Erased for Fun, n Placed in My Latest Won
cause No-One comprehends wut ya Saying...Like u Writing, in Ya Native Tounge/(spanish)
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aight there ya go...I aint wanna do quote marks n all that shit so ...
u should b able 2 understand the w/p
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PayRoll


Believe Me Dude Picking You Is Shit Even Without Vote, Turds(Voters), Cuz I'm About To "Cut Pay In Half, While Being On The Job" Like Laid Off Workers'...!!
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Whatchu Spit Is A Joke Cuz Even Your Style Is Funny, You Don't Have To Catch a Cold To Witness Ya Nose Being Runny, Truth Is "Nobody Likes Payroll When There's Quick Cash" Like Under The Table Money'...!!
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Your Dreams Of Become'n Victorious Is Burning Fast, This Guy's Earning Trash, Is On Its Turning Path, Cuz "You Wouldn't Put Up Numbers" While Use'n This Foreign Tool Like Immigrants Learning Math' ...!!
(Four In Two)
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Your Carear Builds Up On Hate & Lose It, Prove Ya Live To Play Is Not a Trait Stupid, Style Rates Foolish, Cuz "One Touch And He Could Feel The Difference" Like DJ's Flexible Reach For Great Music'....!!
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Beat You Over Ya Skull With A Metal Pole, I Won't Get Passed Pay? Yeah Only In Tolls, Cuz "Your Life Gets Driven By What Moves You" Like Motivation In Achieve'n Certain Goals'...!!
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Hit Ya From Under Like a Punch That'll Blow, You a Bitch So You Do What Your Told, Cuz I "Wouldn't Need Personals To Reach To Ya Boiling Points For Cash" Like Old MTV Shows'...!!
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Yo I Don't Know If You Did 5 or 6 bar But Your Structure Makes it Look Like 6 Bars So I Did 6 Let Me Know If I Need To Remove 1 Ok? & Good Luck Man.
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Old 12-02-2007, 12:08 PM   #6
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Re: PayRoll vs R!can Theoryz

nah mine was 5..but i aint trippin...u aint gotta take nuttin out if it gets ridiculous n everyones voting cause u had 1 more bar than ill add one...but im not worried bout it...nice drop

Ill get links n a sec...but while i do that...lets get some votes
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Old 12-02-2007, 12:11 PM   #7
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lol@payroll's comment under his verse. i sure can see w/p!

You've got the Worse Timing...When this battles over, U'll come out like ur Birth, Crying!
so this Isnt Worth Trying...Cuz u wouldnt be "Up on PR", "Reppin Turf on Your Island"/
^perfectly executed. i hope SCRUBS know this aint a punch. i hope
they also know its not JUST a personal.

U the Worse wit the Rhyming...So, You'll catch an Experienced Beaten, Left Bloody, like a Period, Leaking
Thinkin Win, U Seriously Reaching!...Cause 1 look at "ur Name Shows", Ur "Theories is Wreaking!"/
^decent,but a bit weak. i'd like to see another double in there though.

This Ya Enemy Speaking...So u better Go fix ur Flaws Fast, Or Risk Gettin ur Bars Smashed
n have everyone sayin dat R's Trash...Cause I'll 'Easily Dodge R/T's', Like 'Avoiding a Car Crash'/
^again,a bit soft. could've been better

So, Just join my Squad n Relax...You and I both Know,In this Battle, ur gonna Get Scratched
n u aint have 2 search Far 2 Get Matched...The Facts, Im Under ya Skin, like goin Too Long on da Patch/
^lol,nah i didnt like this one.

So come Strong, Or Fall Back...Cause Youll get Erased for Fun, n Placed in My Latest Won
cause No-One comprehends wut ya Saying...Like u Writing, in Ya Native Tounge/(spanish)
^my latest WON makes no sense. thats a past-tense word. the tongue line could've been better. as is,its pretty weak. disappointed in the closer man. i wanted more of whatchu' started off with.




Believe Me Dude Picking You Is Shit Even Without Vote, Turds(Voters), Cuz I'm About To "Cut Pay In Half, While Being On The Job" Like Laid Off Workers'...!!
^vote,turds=gay. and how're you ON THE JOB....if you've been laid off?

Whatchu Spit Is A Joke Cuz Even Your Style Is Funny, You Don't Have To Catch a Cold To Witness Ya Nose Being Runny, Truth Is "Nobody Likes Payroll When There's Quick Cash" Like Under The Table Money'
^weak nameplay. setup was ridiculous. lol@nose being runny

Your Dreams Of Become'n Victorious Is Burning Fast, This Guy's Earning Trash, Is On Its Turning Path, Cuz "You Wouldn't Put Up Numbers" While Use'n This Foreign Tool Like Immigrants Learning Math' ...!!
^setup was forcing multi's. earning trash,is on its turning path <----?
then the 4 in 2 made no sense. forget the parenthesis,if your verse
doesnt incorporate it,too bad.

Your Carear Builds Up On Hate & Lose It, Prove Ya Live To Play Is Not a Trait Stupid, Style Rates Foolish, Cuz "One Touch And He Could Feel The Difference" Like DJ's Flexible Reach For Great Music'....!!
^weak.

Beat You Over Ya Skull With A Metal Pole, I Won't Get Passed Pay? Yeah Only In Tolls, Cuz "Your Life Gets Driven By What Moves You" Like Motivation In Achieve'n Certain Goals'
^lmao was this a DISS? the last part is just saying hes motivated to do things and achieve his goals. wheres the diss in that? lmao.

Hit Ya From Under Like a Punch That'll Blow, You a Bitch So You Do What Your Told, Cuz I "Wouldn't Need Personals To Reach To Ya Boiling Points For Cash" Like Old MTV Shows'...!!
^weak.

overall this was an easy win. v/payroll.
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dude its 10lines vs 12. dont sweat it.
i dont even think he needs the other 2.
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Old 12-02-2007, 12:21 PM   #9
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