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Old 02-06-2008, 12:38 PM   #1
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Re: HW 3-Way Match: Lyrical Abuse (2-3) vs synonym (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (4-4)

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This Battles Like Marathon Competitors Cuz I'm Really Gonna Run It, Swell Ya Eyes Now I'm Done Bitch, Cuz "My Punches Will Put a Work To Ab" Like A Workout To Cut Ya Stomach' ...

Kill Your Soul And ill do it Fast, Ill Start Hell Once The Light Has Pass, Fuck Your Team Cuz Ya Fuel That'll Give Me Competition Are Just Ups & Downs" Like The Prices On Gas' ... (Few'll)

You A Bitch FaggitAnd Is Known To Harm Cocks,
Your In For a Rude Awakening Like Fucking Alarm Clocks' ..



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Can't Waste The Minutes Cuz The Times At It, I'm Greatness And I'm What Defines Passed it, And You'll Just Repeat Your Syns Like A Crime Addict' ...

My Fist is Like 10 Bottles Of Nyquil Shitll get You Wasted, Cuz This Victorie Is so Close To His Face Its Nym That He's Nearby But Still Couldn't Taste it' .. (Nimb)

Cut Your Knees Make'n it Hard To Stand .. Poke your Glands, Toss The Knife Over to Ya Mans, Cuz "When You Spit Its Not Entertain'n But Still Disturbing The Peace "Like Ludacris' Band' ..



Blah I Only Did 6 Bars These *****'s Aint Gonna Show!
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Re: HW 3-Way Match: Lyrical Abuse (2-3) vs synonym (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (4-4)

ma bad ill post sumthin now

rip MCs spiritual,christmas is over,so you aint gonna see miracles
even if you tried ur hardest to imitate me u still couldnt be lyrical
quit trynna ryme busta,my skills stretch as long as ya ryme structure
he really cant keep up wit me,ya couldnt catch abuse lik crime busters
u a cruiserweight...lik imitaitons of tom n katie ya crews is fake
just lose n hate...its not lik u had da choice cuz no1 chooses fate
you like a rap comedian,cuz honestly you just do it for lauphs
yall aint bigger den tun n i aint talkin bout units of mass!
im da truest to blast,im a 'under dog' but its already over dog
ur not strong,and synonym cant 'drop bombs' thats a soldiers job
this poser lost,so heres a lil finisher that i send most victims
cant fuck wit tun,'we better den DS' like comparing nintendo systems(wii)
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Re: HW 3-Way Match: Lyrical Abuse (2-3) vs synonym (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (4-4)

shit..guess ima little late...
oh snap! really? you THOUGHT YA RHYMIN scheme was OFF THA HYMEN? ha! cause this "pussy-whole" "Pussy-Flow" was Pussy, yo like DOCTOR GYNE IS!!/
yer NOT THE FINEST rappin, so STOP THE LYIN! when the SAFETYs OFF, I'll 'TAKE HIM OFF his feet' n it's NOT RECLINERS! I'll "COCK THE NINERS" cuz I "abuse lyrical" pedophiles that get "confused empirical" and TALK TO MINORS but instead of SMALL VAGINAS, this 'little puss" will "get a push" like CARS THAT'S DYIN'/
nah, fuck that, it's actually QUITE A SHOVE when I "LIGHT HIM UP" with ROCKETS FLYIN, GOT THE CLIP IN and "CHOPPERS LIFT HIM" like HeliCOPTER RIDIN!/
fuckit, I'ma Man on a mission, so one blam from the Smithen got his "top, SLANTED AND SPINNIN" like heliCOPTERS DIVING!!!/
and when you said yer "Raw" you did NOT DEFINE IT.. ya NOt THE FLY PIMP, no PURRTY BROADs, yer NERDY DAWG, jussa furry-palm so SURELY Y'ALL see if he "RAW" THIS GUY IS.. TALKIN "PRIVATES!!!/
and we TALKED IN PRIVATE, he THOUGHT HE'S SLY..SHIT, "R!can Theoryz???" more like "dike who's weary" imPOSTER -TYPE ISH/
and know that every track I "Cut..ROCKS" LIKE DAIMONDS so AWESOME, I AM, but your 'tracks? I NOT COULD FIND EM. and even though Im "hot dog" i aint "Oscar Meyer"/
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Re: HW 3-Way Match: Lyrical Abuse (2-3) vs synonym (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (4-4)

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Old 02-17-2008, 12:31 AM   #9
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synonym..alotta played lines i've heard before, especially the oscar meyer and doctor gynecology shit. some really good multis but nothing else that caught me.

rican theoryz..you probably wont listen to me, but i think at least for a while you should try switching your bar structure to experiment writing or rhyming a different format. You do longbar style alot, but for some people who always do it and have never had to really count even bar lengths all the way down...you'll run into problems maintaining multis and flow. longbar creates some bad habits and i know cuz i've done it before. you should be trying:

[I]syn should backing up his scripts, before i start cracking him with some whips
laughin cuz to spit-..fire, dis faggot'll just get gasoline striking matches to his fist
battling them pissed, they average in a clique..patterned n' mastered the battery in this..etc.

I'm just saying. far as your punches..nothing really stood out to me, too many old or played ones i've heard. you got good concepts sometimes and then the rhyme scheme or delivery sets it off bad, a the set ups maybe hard to see too:

Kill Your Soul And ill do it Fast, Ill Start Hell Once The Light Has Pass, Fuck Your Team Cuz Ya Fuel That'll Give Me Competition Are Just Ups & Downs" Like The Prices On Gas' ... (Few'll)

they gotta be a pattern man.

lyrical abuse...you had quite a few self praise worthy lines, problem with that is that they're not always bad but not always good either..you wanna stay focused on opponent:

rip MCs spiritual,christmas is over,so you aint gonna see miracles
even if you tried ur hardest to imitate me u still couldnt be lyrical
quit trynna ryme busta,my skills stretch as long as ya ryme structure
he really cant keep up wit me,ya couldnt catch abuse lik crime busters

^ok first one is a diss cuz of the wording, the second bar is not


I'm gonna go with Rican on this one, it was extremely close between the two.

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