MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (4-1 TKO)

Vokals · 02-06-2008, 12:39 PM

Check In By Sun. Feb 10th Midnight EST
Verses Due By Tues. Feb 12th Midnight EST
4-6 Bars Only
Anything over will result in 1 docked vote.

VOTING ON 2 BATTLES IS REQUIRED

De.Cor.Um · 02-06-2008, 01:43 PM

Check. Good luck Dun.

DunLo · 02-06-2008, 02:48 PM

Check...you too De....

De.Cor.Um · 02-08-2008, 12:49 AM

Don't get it, don't vote, at all.
Only bar by bar breakdowns, I know Dun will agree on that.

Just go five man, g'luck again...

Fuck outta here…Blow off the launch and believe you still wouldn't rocket,
Cause I just heard “great minds think alike”...Well then you must be retarded?

Your limbs'll part bitch…I aint got heat, but still I’ma block your writs,
Belts?! Believe that he be untitled, like I never named the document!

Copy shit? Probably jack my swag…My dick? Please release whore,
Plus your “type? Writer” should quit…And did you know they made keyboards?

I reap more…And glock fifths will shock bitch…Have people notice I’m the ill one,
Cause I think you're “owen” me your life...And your verse? Believe I “will-son!”

I keep real guns…Yours fake…Funny how like toilet, “you’re next to sink”,
Aint “livin up to your bro...Sobe gone!” without moms against energy drinks!

DunLo · 02-09-2008, 01:21 PM

Watch as D will go running for help!!!....his poor stealth will break, and make his 'Cor.(e)' melt!!!...
Your not dope nor felt...'X gon' give it to us'?!, of Course!, cuz we all know 'you couldn't do it yourself'!,
I'll rip out your spleen whore....then run through TUN, and make your whole team sore...
'D's a soildier'?, I've seen more...cuz if you 'joined the armed service', you wouldn't be a 'Marine, Cor.(e)!',
Bottom of the food chain, small and soft...'spit'?! bitch you couldn't deliver an 'all in cough'!!!...
TUN should be haulin' lost...cuz 'UL holds the crown', that's why in your sig at the 'T' it's 'fallin' off'!!!,
Do you feel like a man truly?....want to take my place in TUN?, damn this fam screwy!!...
Honestly their plan blew me....cuz trading me out for him is like trading 'MJ for Sam Booey'!!,
I don't give a fuck how he should feel...prolly begged Thurz, then thought it was a good steal...
De. is hood real?...LMAO!!!, cuz the only time we think of 'Um.(mm)', is after 'digesting a good meal'!!...

Harsh · 02-09-2008, 05:00 PM

punches-dun
personals-dun
wordplay-dec
nameplay-dun
metas-tie
creativity-dun

sam booey and t fallin off line killed it

vote/dunlo

De.Cor.Um · 02-09-2008, 06:14 PM

Thanks man. 1-0, uppin.

KonEkt · 02-09-2008, 10:36 PM

Fuck outta here…Blow off the launch and believe you still wouldn't rocket,
Cause I just heard “great minds think alike”...Well then you must be retarded?
^i dont like it.

Your limbs'll part bitch…I aint got heat, but still I’ma block your writs,
Belts?! Believe that he be untitled, like I never named the document!
^nice

Copy shit? Probably jack my swag…My dick? Please release whore,
Plus your “type? Writer” should quit…And did you know they made keyboards?
^i like it.

I reap more…And glock fifths will shock bitch…Have people notice I’m the ill one,
Cause I think you're “owen” me your life...And your verse? Believe I “will-son!”
^sick.

I keep real guns…Yours fake…Funny how like toilet, “you’re next to sink”,
Aint “livin up to your bro...Sobe gone!” without moms against energy drinks!
^i like the bunch, it wasnt as simple, IMO your scond best punch next to the Owen Willson shit.

vs

Watch as D will go running for help!!!....his poor stealth will break, and make his 'Cor.(e)' melt!!!...
Your not dope nor felt...'X gon' give it to us'?!, of Course!, cuz we all know 'you couldn't do it yourself'!,
^lol, good personal on his user title.

I'll rip out your spleen whore....then run through TUN, and make your whole team sore...
'D's a soildier'?, I've seen more...cuz if you 'joined the armed service', you wouldn't be a 'Marine, Cor.(e)!',
^good n/p

Bottom of the food chain, small and soft...'spit'?! bitch you couldn't deliver an 'all in cough'!!!...
TUN should be haulin' lost...cuz 'UL holds the crown', that's why in your sig at the 'T' it's 'fallin' off'!!!,
^again, good personal.

Do you feel like a man truly?....want to take my place in TUN?, damn this fam screwy!!...
Honestly their plan blew me....cuz trading me out for him is like trading 'MJ for Sam Booey'!!,
^eh

I don't give a fuck how he should feel...prolly begged Thurz, then thought it was a good steal...
De. is hood real?...LMAO!!!, cuz the only time we think of 'Um.(mm)', is after 'digesting a good meal'!!...
^dont really like it.

Punches: Dec
Wordplay: Dec
Flow: DunLo
Nameplay: DunLo
Metas: Dec
Creativity: DunLo
Enjoyment: Even

when i do the cats. it seems all even, so i had to do a bar by bar as well, and when i did i just felt as if Dec.Or.Um had a more consistant berse, the Sam Bowey/MJ line didnt really do anything for me. and the "Umm" like was to simple and i just didnt like it. but both verses were sick forreal.

vote: Dec.Or.Um

De.Cor.Um · 02-10-2008, 12:43 AM

Thanks Kon. 1-1.

Snale · 02-10-2008, 02:35 AM

punches-tied
personals-dun
metas-tied
wordplay-dun
nameplay-dun
flow-tied

vote-dun

Dec had ill punches, but that was all his verse really had, dun had all other aspects down.

Good battle though i enjoyed the 'Untitled' line from dec

and i thought the 'crown falling off' line from dunlo was ill too

02-06-2008, 12:39 PM	#1
Vokals The Original... Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: KC, MO Posts: 12,525 Rap Worlds Cash: 389655.00 Rep Power: 351 Text Battles (1972) Won: 23 Lost: 1	MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (4-1 TKO) Check In By Sun. Feb 10th Midnight EST Verses Due By Tues. Feb 12th Midnight EST 4-6 Bars Only Anything over will result in 1 docked vote. *VOTING ON 2 BATTLES IS REQUIRED*

02-06-2008, 01:43 PM	#2
De.Cor.Um Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: villanova Age: 29 Posts: 3,185 Rap Worlds Cash: 5.00 Rep Power: 0 Text Battles (866) Won: 12 Lost: 3 Tournaments Won: 1	Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (2-0) Check. Good luck Dun.

02-06-2008, 02:48 PM	#3
DunLo ..UnSpOkEn-LeGeNdZ.. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: "The Agent Of Anarchy..." Age: 33 Posts: 1,829 Rap Worlds Cash: 20040.00 Rep Power: 223 Text Battles (2642) Won: 48 Lost: 7	Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (2-0) Check...you too De.... __________________ http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm...ndid=408791970

02-08-2008, 12:49 AM	#4
De.Cor.Um Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: villanova Age: 29 Posts: 3,185 Rap Worlds Cash: 5.00 Rep Power: 0 Text Battles (866) Won: 12 Lost: 3 Tournaments Won: 1	Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (2-0) Don't get it, don't vote, at all. Only bar by bar breakdowns, I know Dun will agree on that. Just go five man, g'luck again... Fuck outta here…Blow off the launch and believe you still wouldn't rocket, Cause I just heard “great minds think alike”...Well then you must be retarded? Your limbs'll part bitch…I aint got heat, but still I’ma block your writs, Belts?! Believe that he be untitled, like I never named the document! Copy shit? Probably jack my swag…My dick? Please release whore, Plus your “type? Writer” should quit…And did you know they made keyboards? I reap more…And glock fifths will shock bitch…Have people notice I’m the ill one, Cause I think you're “owen” me your life...And your verse? Believe I “will-son!” I keep real guns…Yours fake…Funny how like toilet, “you’re next to sink”, Aint “livin up to your bro...Sobe gone!” without moms against energy drinks! Last edited by De.Cor.Um; 02-08-2008 at 12:50 AM.

02-09-2008, 01:21 PM	#5
DunLo ..UnSpOkEn-LeGeNdZ.. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: "The Agent Of Anarchy..." Age: 33 Posts: 1,829 Rap Worlds Cash: 20040.00 Rep Power: 223 Text Battles (2642) Won: 48 Lost: 7	Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (2-0) Watch as D will go running for help!!!....his poor stealth will break, and make his 'Cor.(e)' melt!!!... Your not dope nor felt...'X gon' give it to us'?!, of Course!, cuz we all know 'you couldn't do it yourself'!, I'll rip out your spleen whore....then run through TUN, and make your whole team sore... 'D's a soildier'?, I've seen more...cuz if you 'joined the armed service', you wouldn't be a 'Marine, Cor.(e)!', Bottom of the food chain, small and soft...'spit'?! bitch you couldn't deliver an 'all in cough'!!!... TUN should be haulin' lost...cuz 'UL holds the crown', that's why in your sig at the 'T' it's 'fallin' off'!!!, Do you feel like a man truly?....want to take my place in TUN?, damn this fam screwy!!... Honestly their plan blew me....cuz trading me out for him is like trading 'MJ for Sam Booey'!!, I don't give a fuck how he should feel...prolly begged Thurz, then thought it was a good steal... De. is hood real?...LMAO!!!, cuz the only time we think of 'Um.(mm)', is after 'digesting a good meal'!!... __________________ http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm...ndid=408791970

02-09-2008, 06:14 PM	#7
De.Cor.Um Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: villanova Age: 29 Posts: 3,185 Rap Worlds Cash: 5.00 Rep Power: 0 Text Battles (866) Won: 12 Lost: 3 Tournaments Won: 1	Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (2-0) Thanks man. 1-0, uppin.

02-09-2008, 10:36 PM	#8
KonEkt So Help You God? Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 244 Rap Worlds Cash: 177.50 Rep Power: 0 Text Battles (449) Won: 6 Lost: 7	Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (2-0) Fuck outta here…Blow off the launch and believe you still wouldn't rocket, Cause I just heard “great minds think alike”...Well then you must be retarded? ^i dont like it. Your limbs'll part bitch…I aint got heat, but still I’ma block your writs, Belts?! Believe that he be untitled, like I never named the document! ^nice Copy shit? Probably jack my swag…My dick? Please release whore, Plus your “type? Writer” should quit…And did you know they made keyboards? ^i like it. I reap more…And glock fifths will shock bitch…Have people notice I’m the ill one, Cause I think you're “owen” me your life...And your verse? Believe I “will-son!” ^sick. I keep real guns…Yours fake…Funny how like toilet, “you’re next to sink”, Aint “livin up to your bro...Sobe gone!” without moms against energy drinks! ^i like the bunch, it wasnt as simple, IMO your scond best punch next to the Owen Willson shit. vs Watch as D will go running for help!!!....his poor stealth will break, and make his 'Cor.(e)' melt!!!... Your not dope nor felt...'X gon' give it to us'?!, of Course!, cuz we all know 'you couldn't do it yourself'!, ^lol, good personal on his user title. I'll rip out your spleen whore....then run through TUN, and make your whole team sore... 'D's a soildier'?, I've seen more...cuz if you 'joined the armed service', you wouldn't be a 'Marine, Cor.(e)!', ^good n/p Bottom of the food chain, small and soft...'spit'?! bitch you couldn't deliver an 'all in cough'!!!... TUN should be haulin' lost...cuz 'UL holds the crown', that's why in your sig at the 'T' it's 'fallin' off'!!!, ^again, good personal. Do you feel like a man truly?....want to take my place in TUN?, damn this fam screwy!!... Honestly their plan blew me....cuz trading me out for him is like trading 'MJ for Sam Booey'!!, ^eh I don't give a fuck how he should feel...prolly begged Thurz, then thought it was a good steal... De. is hood real?...LMAO!!!, cuz the only time we think of 'Um.(mm)', is after 'digesting a good meal'!!... ^dont really like it. Punches: Dec Wordplay: Dec Flow: DunLo Nameplay: DunLo Metas: Dec Creativity: DunLo Enjoyment: Even when i do the cats. it seems all even, so i had to do a bar by bar as well, and when i did i just felt as if Dec.Or.Um had a more consistant berse, the Sam Bowey/MJ line didnt really do anything for me. and the "Umm" like was to simple and i just didnt like it. but both verses were sick forreal. vote: Dec.Or.Um __________________ RW Record: 4-4-3

02-10-2008, 12:43 AM	#9
De.Cor.Um Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: villanova Age: 29 Posts: 3,185 Rap Worlds Cash: 5.00 Rep Power: 0 Text Battles (866) Won: 12 Lost: 3 Tournaments Won: 1	Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (2-0) Thanks Kon. 1-1.

02-10-2008, 02:35 AM	#10
Snale Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: East coast Age: 30 Posts: 4,041 Rap Worlds Cash: 176746.00 Rep Power: 0 Text Battles (3024) Won: 52 Lost: 6	Re: MW Title Match: DunLo (10-1) vs De.Cor.Um (2-0) punches-tied personals-dun metas-tied wordplay-dun nameplay-dun flow-tied vote-dun Dec had ill punches, but that was all his verse really had, dun had all other aspects down. Good battle though i enjoyed the 'Untitled' line from dec and i thought the 'crown falling off' line from dunlo was ill too

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